A timid, stingy woman's struggle to survive in the apocalypse...
The heroine isn't strong, self-sacrificing, smart, or beautiful. She has no amazing treasures or extraordinary abilities. She's so ordinary you could overlook her entirely!!!
This story turns the usual apocalypse novels on their heads. If that's not your thing, read with caution!!!!!
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There is only one simple word, but just because of this one word, a person with superpowers can turn into a zombie. What kind of word is it? I don't understand. Can you explain it to me?
The heroine's strength can gradually improve. I just hope that the author's mind will stop jumping.
I said it's the end of the world, and this chapter is so confusing that I can't understand it at all.
This is the first time I've seen a post-apocalyptic space article written in a disgusting and confusing way.
What a meat ball, the writing is really confusing
Kan dao zhe er , zui □□ huan na ji zhi ying
Don't bother me! I've seen other people's articles have long comments, but you haven't! But it's really hard to praise you in words. If I were to do it to you, I could write tens of thousands of words. Isn't this just convenient? ! To avoid that... Besides... That...
Anyway, I know I'm wrong, so what... Send me the second half of that part, and don't give me back the penguin! ! Sister! ! ! ! !
Sure enough... I guess you will make the heroine's father a pervert. Why do you like writing perverted articles so much? Don't call Lin a pervert, otherwise I'll slap you... Child, you'll be in trouble! ! I decided to give you a long review, thank you! !
First of all, I want to correct a big ideological problem in your writing! You should be very clear about where your problem lies, but you have to write about it in that direction. It's really annoying to watch! But there is one thing. Your topic is very popular, but your rejection rate is too high. Is this true? I only care about my own feelings when writing. There are too many inappropriate words and typos. It hurts to look at it! But what kind of perverted articles do you like to write? The writing is not good, the sense of substitution is too bad, and there are no detailed descriptions at all! !
Well, I'm not going to belittle you, I'm here to point out your mistakes! !
Baby, I won't guess what your little old melon is thinking, but my child, writing is not about logical thinking, it is about having a clear plot framework, which requires vivid portrait descriptions, psychological descriptions... And an appropriate amount of social background and environmental descriptions. Have you ever seen a reader who plays guessing games while reading a book? Not at all! ! Most readers read ten lines at a glance. If you don't directly express clearly some of the things hidden deep in the protagonist, then the readers will feel confused after reading it and don't know what you wrote! So this is the biggest shortcoming of your writing! ! ! Gotta change it! !
Secondly, if you look at your writing, there will be little dialogue, not even a single sentence, and sometimes there will be too much dialogue, damn, there is not even a chapter at all! I was wondering if you were holding back what the protagonist was saying in front of you and then complaining about it later! ! It looks so suffocating! It is very necessary for children to properly grasp the plot. You are writing online articles, commonly known as fast food articles. Do you know what fast food is? Just eat and leave. If it's delicious, come back to the next chapter. If it's not delicious, who will come back? Even if you are a repeat customer, you won't taste the profound meaning of the previous chapter over and over again. People are in a hurry, otherwise why would they order food? ! ! You dare to say that the foreshadowing you set is not in a certain sentence, but also in a gentle way. Who would pay attention to such an unimportant sentence? Readers are very busy and have no time to spare! !
Finally, let's write about ancient sayings. If you hadn't explained and revealed the plot to me, I wouldn't have been able to understand this article! ! You are not a modern person, and you cannot keep up with the pace of the future. For people who are slow to do things, writing ancient proverbs is the most suitable! !
Do you know why you are asked to write ancient poems? Because you don't read that thing at all, for you who are not very conscious, you should be able to express the meaning of the story clearly word for word, because you are afraid that you won't understand it after you finish writing it! Is there any!
My kid, I haven't seen you write perverted essays for so long. Do you know why? Because you know the plot of your writing, no matter how jumpy you write it, you can understand it yourself. Damn it, since you wrote online articles, since they have been published, they must be for readers. Don't tell me that you wrote them for yourself, Damn! Please also consider the public readers who are also in a book shortage! ! ! ! I'm also short on books, so I was told that your framework design was pretty good, but I just couldn't understand it after writing it... Because of these words, I came to see you all the time. Don't you feel guilty looking at my figure? ? ? ?
Take back your deceptive Martian culture, and let's just treat the earth in peace! !
Damn it, I'm still waiting for those two perverted and deceptive novels of yours. You told the labor and management about the plot and you stopped writing it. Are you worthy of me? You are an author. You write articles for publication. You shouldn't hide them after you write them. Are you worthy of us? Okay, I know you want to say that I can't understand it, but you can't write it so that I can understand it. Being happy alone is not as good as being happy with everyone. Do you understand? !
Send them to me when you have time. I am your mentor and helpful friend. I can still discuss it with you if you have nothing to do~~~~~~~~~~~~Is there anything you can do? ! !
There is only one simple word, but just because of this one word, a person with superpowers can turn into a zombie. What kind of word is it? I don't understand. Can you explain it to me?
The heroine's strength can gradually improve. I just hope that the author's mind will stop jumping.
I said it's the end of the world, and this chapter is so confusing that I can't understand it at all.
This is the first time I've seen a post-apocalyptic space article written in a disgusting and confusing way.
What a meat ball, the writing is really confusing
Kan dao zhe er , zui □□ huan na ji zhi ying
Don't bother me! I've seen other people's articles have long comments, but you haven't! But it's really hard to praise you in words. If I were to do it to you, I could write tens of thousands of words. Isn't this just convenient? ! To avoid that... Besides... That... Anyway, I know I'm wrong, so what... Send me the second half of that part, and don't give me back the penguin! ! Sister! ! ! ! !
Sure enough... I guess you will make the heroine's father a pervert. Why do you like writing perverted articles so much? Don't call Lin a pervert, otherwise I'll slap you... Child, you'll be in trouble! ! I decided to give you a long review, thank you! ! First of all, I want to correct a big ideological problem in your writing! You should be very clear about where your problem lies, but you have to write about it in that direction. It's really annoying to watch! But there is one thing. Your topic is very popular, but your rejection rate is too high. Is this true? I only care about my own feelings when writing. There are too many inappropriate words and typos. It hurts to look at it! But what kind of perverted articles do you like to write? The writing is not good, the sense of substitution is too bad, and there are no detailed descriptions at all! ! Well, I'm not going to belittle you, I'm here to point out your mistakes! ! Baby, I won't guess what your little old melon is thinking, but my child, writing is not about logical thinking, it is about having a clear plot framework, which requires vivid portrait descriptions, psychological descriptions... And an appropriate amount of social background and environmental descriptions. Have you ever seen a reader who plays guessing games while reading a book? Not at all! ! Most readers read ten lines at a glance. If you don't directly express clearly some of the things hidden deep in the protagonist, then the readers will feel confused after reading it and don't know what you wrote! So this is the biggest shortcoming of your writing! ! ! Gotta change it! ! Secondly, if you look at your writing, there will be little dialogue, not even a single sentence, and sometimes there will be too much dialogue, damn, there is not even a chapter at all! I was wondering if you were holding back what the protagonist was saying in front of you and then complaining about it later! ! It looks so suffocating! It is very necessary for children to properly grasp the plot. You are writing online articles, commonly known as fast food articles. Do you know what fast food is? Just eat and leave. If it's delicious, come back to the next chapter. If it's not delicious, who will come back? Even if you are a repeat customer, you won't taste the profound meaning of the previous chapter over and over again. People are in a hurry, otherwise why would they order food? ! ! You dare to say that the foreshadowing you set is not in a certain sentence, but also in a gentle way. Who would pay attention to such an unimportant sentence? Readers are very busy and have no time to spare! ! Finally, let's write about ancient sayings. If you hadn't explained and revealed the plot to me, I wouldn't have been able to understand this article! ! You are not a modern person, and you cannot keep up with the pace of the future. For people who are slow to do things, writing ancient proverbs is the most suitable! ! Do you know why you are asked to write ancient poems? Because you don't read that thing at all, for you who are not very conscious, you should be able to express the meaning of the story clearly word for word, because you are afraid that you won't understand it after you finish writing it! Is there any! My kid, I haven't seen you write perverted essays for so long. Do you know why? Because you know the plot of your writing, no matter how jumpy you write it, you can understand it yourself. Damn it, since you wrote online articles, since they have been published, they must be for readers. Don't tell me that you wrote them for yourself, Damn! Please also consider the public readers who are also in a book shortage! ! ! ! I'm also short on books, so I was told that your framework design was pretty good, but I just couldn't understand it after writing it... Because of these words, I came to see you all the time. Don't you feel guilty looking at my figure? ? ? ? Take back your deceptive Martian culture, and let's just treat the earth in peace! ! Damn it, I'm still waiting for those two perverted and deceptive novels of yours. You told the labor and management about the plot and you stopped writing it. Are you worthy of me? You are an author. You write articles for publication. You shouldn't hide them after you write them. Are you worthy of us? Okay, I know you want to say that I can't understand it, but you can't write it so that I can understand it. Being happy alone is not as good as being happy with everyone. Do you understand? ! Send them to me when you have time. I am your mentor and helpful friend. I can still discuss it with you if you have nothing to do~~~~~~~~~~~~Is there anything you can do? ! !
Luan qi ba zao.
The framework of this world is not well conceived