A Lifetime of Beautiful Encounters

The author writes well. Although his writing style is a bit immature, his writing style is fresh and natural. Keep up the good work! (^0^)/

Big!!! Please adopt me, please take me away!!!

I think the article is okay, because I like simple love. However, there are some bad sentences and typos. If the author reads it again, he should be able to avoid these problems. "Chu Hao took Yanyan to his old bedroom to have a look..." It should be "Take Yanyan to his old bedroom to have a look." There were many similar questions. But overall I like it, keep it up and look forward to more of your works!

Although it's been so long, I still congratulate you on your first article. By the way, I'm also a novice. I wrote a short story on a whim. You can check it out #^_^