The Vermilion Gates and Embroidered Doors

The first part of the story is quite reasonable, but at the end of the story, you can just do whatever you want. Not to mention how a bitter woman who was reborn as a widower traveled thousands of miles to find her father. She probably died halfway through, and she fell in love with an inexplicable golden man. The text The men in the chapters are all scum, but they are such great ones! The last few chapters are simply disappointing, and I feel I have been deceived. I hope that the new article will not make this mistake of starting at the beginning and ending at the end. If you can't finish it, stop for a while, but don't write perfunctorily!

After reading it, I felt that it was a trap at the end and I wrote it randomly. After reading it in one go, I felt a little sad and anticlimactic.

Nanzhu's scenes are really too few, too few! None of the previous dozens of chapters! It's okay to show up without He Liqian! There are regrets in the emotional drama

The house fighting part is very exciting, but the ending is a bit rushed. The male protagonist has too few roles. I hope the author will have better works

Skip to the end and take a look. The male protagonist is from the Kingdom of Jin. Is that little Prince Zhao cannon fodder? Dizzy! I'd better watch it slowly from the beginning. When I read more than 30 chapters, I felt that The Little Prince was pretty good. I don't know why I took the lunch box and left.

I just read about 30 chapters, and I can't wait to see who the male protagonist is. When I read the comments, a reader said that the author didn't write all the details. I want to say that the overall story is very good, and there are still many readers who are patient. I guess people will be impatient. This shows that the article is attractive. After reading this, I will support the author's new article.

Is this the end? ? ? ? Strongly request to add extras

I fainted. I saw the author's words, saying that there is only one chapter left to finish. I have to say a few words. Many of the plot's previous foreshadowings have not been started yet. It is a pity to end it in such a hurry. The author is also too stingy with Wanyan, who is still the only man who the heroine has fallen in love with in the whole story, but there is too little ink, making it The whole character of Wan Yan seems dry and fleshless throughout the whole story, and the length is shorter than that of the soy sauce man named Hong Yushi. The author is good at using subtle twists and turns in verbal expressions, but I feel that he is a little lacking in emotional description. But overall, this is a home-fighting article. In terms of these two words alone, the whole home-fighting is really exciting!

Will it be over with one more chapter? ? ? Looking forward to looking forward

Why is this Mr. Hong not suitable for the heroine? The plot progress is too slow!