It must be a wonderful and happy thing to go to the world of books, right? But what if it is a high-level H+SM+NP book?
......... Ahem, our Comrade Yu Yuan's wonderful journey has officially begun! ! !
Reader comments
How old is my daughter... [Touching chin
I like this ending, HE is the best, I'm looking forward to the extra episode!
Sister(?艸?)Pfft
There are too many choices for male supporting characters, and the emotional descriptions are not delicate enough. It is difficult to imagine that beautiful appearance alone can continue to attract all the princes. It would be too unfair to say so. Although it's sweet, I don't understand how high the heroine's IQ is, because just describing the student council president and being omnipotent is an understatement.
CRITICAL clearly understands that it wants to dominate everything, but when it comes to describing the interaction between the male and female protagonists, it should be more in-depth and why the writing creates feelings for each other, right?? Besides, to a certain extent, I feel that the heroine's white eyes are too deliberate, and too many male co-stars like it. I like the heroine because???? CRITICAL stayed there for a few minutes after watching it, but I still don't know the reason. I have read another one of your novels. It is basically the same style, and the love interaction factor is not very clear. In short, it is not there. The heroine is liked by more than N male partners. The description of the heroine is also an ideal type. She is smart but a little blind, and even feels a little too stupid.
But all in all the direction is very clear, and I look forward to your further works.
How old is my daughter... [Touching chin
I like this ending, HE is the best, I'm looking forward to the extra episode!
Sister(?艸?)Pfft
There are too many choices for male supporting characters, and the emotional descriptions are not delicate enough. It is difficult to imagine that beautiful appearance alone can continue to attract all the princes. It would be too unfair to say so. Although it's sweet, I don't understand how high the heroine's IQ is, because just describing the student council president and being omnipotent is an understatement. CRITICAL clearly understands that it wants to dominate everything, but when it comes to describing the interaction between the male and female protagonists, it should be more in-depth and why the writing creates feelings for each other, right?? Besides, to a certain extent, I feel that the heroine's white eyes are too deliberate, and too many male co-stars like it. I like the heroine because???? CRITICAL stayed there for a few minutes after watching it, but I still don't know the reason. I have read another one of your novels. It is basically the same style, and the love interaction factor is not very clear. In short, it is not there. The heroine is liked by more than N male partners. The description of the heroine is also an ideal type. She is smart but a little blind, and even feels a little too stupid. But all in all the direction is very clear, and I look forward to your further works.