Apocalypse: The Monster Maker

The reason why I came here to write this review is to point out a big bug, and I feel that this article can actually be better. And this BUG is Li Li. The beginning of this article is obviously to keep up with the theme, and with the existence of Li Li, he is indeed a very annoying character, but the person who hates him the most is not other people, but the male protagonist Xia Tongzi. This is the beginning of the BUG. The coder is too focused on the details and ignores some details. For example, there are traces of the protagonist's dislike for Li Li, but the supporting characters' dislike of him was too sudden, almost without any evidence, and they already share the same hatred with the hero. This is the first bug. In fact, it can be dealt with in detail, so that others will only start to hate him when they can't bear it anymore. Another BUG is about the handling of Li Li's superpowers. Because he hates him, he deprives him of his superpowers. This is understandable if it comes from the protagonist, because he can't wait to kill this person. So when he first went to the settlement, why did others suddenly take away his powers? Was it used for upgrading? If there were no settings for the crystal core at the back, maybe this would be more reasonable, but... It's not like this. In this article, it is set that superpowers can be used by inputting superpowers into the transparent crystal core. So besides being absorbed, doesn't Lili's ability have a better use? Healing Crystal Core was so useful in the current environment. But the protagonist directly killed him. This is the biggest BUG, ​​it is very rough. Even if Li Li's temper may not be good at making healing crystal nuclei, there are no details to explain this. He just kills the hen that lays golden eggs, and tortures him for the sake of torture. Mr. Code, you can actually handle it better here. Even if you don't torture him in this way, you can also use other methods. For example, his selfish and cowardly temper will definitely not bring good things to him, but when he is strong, he will definitely work hard and work hard. So if you want to torture him, you can torture him better, but the handling of this character is really reluctant. I would rather he be buried underground at the beginning than to have him jump around later and leave an indelible mark on the article. As for the rest of the article, it's actually pretty good. I read the entire article and also went to Hei Yang's article to read it. I felt it was pretty good. Please continue to work hard, Code Guys.

Niu Niujun is really using his life to be cute! ! ! It's muddy! ! ! ! ! What should I do if I suddenly feel so cute? I really want to know about Niuniu's previous life~~I feel so gentle~~~ And there's more~ Where is the chest brother and his Xuanxuan? ! ! How can you live up to the audience if you don't come to XXOO! ! (The small theater does not count =.=) Speaking of which, you always like to go against my family's CP... I was a little surprised by the CP of this article at first... I didn't expect it to get better and better the more I read it ~ cough cough... But... How can Xuan Xuan and the big-breasted brother attack each other! ! ! It means I can't accept it~~~~~~~Sigh... And... Where did the white lotus go? It can't be a BUG... Judging from the foreshadowing of the previous plot, especially when 00 said that he had not seen Bai Lianhua together, I always thought that Bai Lianhua would become the big boss later! ! Why did it just disappear later~~~~ (heavy fog)… Even if it was shit, I should describe it... Ahem...

I will tell you that at first I was scared of zombies and didn't dare to read it. Only after watching Little Black Sheep did I dare to read this article. . .

As expected, it feels more comfortable to read the article while lying on the bed and using the claw machine. However, sometimes it will prompt an error message. I am too lazy to leave a message. Typing on the claw machine is so annoying. The guy who ruins the pure first love of boys and girls, be careful if you lose a cup every day! !, Don't love Al anymore, , I will look at Al's candidate CP in the sequel with an extremely critical and disgusting eye (don't admit his status as the main wife!!!)

Damn, cow-ball territory... No wonder they are all a family of idiots. They don't have the talent to come up with names, but they are really happy. Kakakaka

It's a good article. Although there is some abuse, I still enjoyed reading it overall. Like.

I'm so happy to watch it all the way to the end, thank you for the great work of Code By the way, I won't make up points all the way. JJ's anus makes me dizzy. I'll go to Xinwen to support her.

It's so noisy~~~~But I'm so happy~~~~A good ending~~~~T T I was so sad when Lin Lin left before

Although this is quite happy, I still feel a little distressed.

Only when I read it at the end did I realize that this was the main article... Powerless... Speaking of which, I saw Al as the protagonist in Counterattack... And I thought he was the first protagonist... As a supporter of the main attack, Hei Yangjun, come on