The Seventeen-Year Cicada

I will tell you whether I cried when I saw it...

It feels very warm. But there are a few points: 1. I think the girl divides it into chapters easily. One chapter is enough for a story with less than 1,000 words. Generally, a [special] short story of 2,000 words can be finished in one chapter. 2. It's a bit of a running story, and I feel that this story could be more detailed. Two thousand words doesn't seem to be able to reflect the characters of the male and female protagonists. 3. Then I feel that the theme of cicada is good, but the connection in the article is not deep, which is probably due to the small number of words. Would you like to expand it and practice your hands? Sprinkle flowers~