Watch Me Conquer the Martial World

Looking at the above, Qin Shaohang feels that his "big revenge has not been avenged" and endures it, but here it is written that "Lin Shu and Lian Jin" are both dead, who should he turn to to avenge his big revenge? What is Qiu's goal?

In fact, you can add some description when speaking, and you don't have to just talk paragraph by paragraph.

I agree with Tan'er, this article requires readers to read it patiently. The writing and plot design are good, but the character creation needs to be strengthened. What the character says should fit his characteristics. For example, when Lu Wudi told Shaohang that his father was killed by Master Lian Jin, he used "la" before the period. Maybe "" is better? I haven't found the others yet, but there are typos. Haha, Xiaoxin needs to be humble. In fact, her writing is much better than mine.

Xiao Laoxian is like an old naughty boy ~ Xiaoyou is so personable, affectionate and handsome

In this world, there will always be people who love too deeply and cannot see clearly what lies ahead. .

The soy sauce man finally has a role. Yeah yeah yeah!

Why. . After reading all kinds of sighs. . The male protagonist is so sauce. .

Why do you have to hit the male protagonist again and again?

A pair of lovers, sharing life and death...

By the way, I almost forgot that guy was the male protagonist...