Portable Manor Fanfiction (Starting with Empresses in the Palace)

Awesome! Regardless of whether it's bad or not, it's the first time I've seen a space-traveling woman kill Kangxi! Come up and sprinkle some flowers for this! !

I feel very curious. You might as well not write it. Such a bad ending is really unacceptable. If you wanted to burn Kangxi to death, what did you do to pave the way for it in the first place? I can guarantee that when you wrote it, you definitely didn't want to burn Kangxi to death. If you wanted to use your personal space to burn Kangxi to death, why did you have to foreshadow all the gods and ghosts in the front? The magician was using his knowledge to deceive the little palace maid! Well, I don't even think the author of the first half of this chapter wanted to write Kangxi to death. Why did you give the chicken soup and celery to the palace maids as a foreshadowing? Is it just to write and eat? ? ? ? Could it be that the author suddenly wanted to be a big star in the middle of writing, so he wrote Kangxi to death, and this way of death? ? ? Dear, even if you have space, you didn't write like this, right? Do you have oil in your space? ? You cannot move after entering the space. If the Qing Dynasty palace was so easy to move around, the anti-Qing and Ming Dynasty would have succeeded long ago! ! ! ! ! Anyway, I am speechless and I won't write any more. The more I write, the more I want to vomit blood! ! ! ! ! !

A lot of things are wrong. Where did the concubine come from?

It looks good, but the ending is too rushed? Can't you write a more detailed ending?

The author's writing is good, but the ending feels a bit rushed and not enjoyable to read.

Still like the Fengyun one.

Well written, keep up the good work

Did the author write the article while dancing?

This ending is probably something no one expected. Haha, so surprising

I still like the Fengyun part the best.