The writing is very good, the description is very detailed, and there is a lot of psychological description.
It's just that the dialogue is a bit stiff, and using too many modal words like ahhhhhh makes the text look childish.
If writing dialogue is not the author's forte, perhaps it would be better to reduce the length of dialogue
Why do they have that kind of ring?
It's not easy for that old man to survive without being assassinated.
I came here after seeing the self-recommendation, haha
Nice article, keep reading.
I forgot to add points just now... The system won't let me add more points...
The writing is very good, the description is very detailed, and there is a lot of psychological description. It's just that the dialogue is a bit stiff, and using too many modal words like ahhhhhh makes the text look childish. If writing dialogue is not the author's forte, perhaps it would be better to reduce the length of dialogue
Why do they have that kind of ring? It's not easy for that old man to survive without being assassinated. I came here after seeing the self-recommendation, haha
Nice article, keep reading.
I forgot to add points just now... The system won't let me add more points...
Seems good. Gut
DEUTSCHLANDA? I love where the background is.