What earth-shattering, heartbreaking romance, unknown to the world, unfolded among the eternal Emperor Kangxi, the foremost scholar Nalan Xingde, Cao Yin, grandfather of Cao Xueqin, author of Dream of the Red Chamber, and the peerlessly beautiful Shen Wan?
Where the soul returns, there is only that pear blossom choked with tears.
The vow made beneath the snowy sea, "In this life, I will never let you down," was made for those words: Wait for me until your three thousand strands of black hair have all turned white.
When the mountain flowers fill your hair, don't ask where I will return. You play a tune called Don't Think of Me, I dance a song called Longing Without End. How can love be resisted?
If there is another life, I only wish that we never meet again.
Leaning by the east fence, I think of snow among the pear blossoms. The lyrics remain, but you are nowhere to be seen.
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Hey, this is a new Qing dynasty transmigration story. Lots of beautiful women, lots of handsome guys. Who's the prince on the white horse? Who's the knight? We'll bundle them all up and take them along. Huh? I'm talking to you. Why are you just standing there? If you like Zhuxi's stories, hurry up and shower me with votes and bookmarks!! Hehe~ If you spot any shortcomings, please leave a comment and let me know. Zhuxi will definitely consider your valuable suggestions! Your support is what keeps me going!
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I also want to write the same type of thing, but unfortunately the writing style is not as good as Dada. The opening chapter is very exciting, please support it.
Tell me why I feel cold. ① His other forms of copywriting, this is Raven's standard of judgment, at least it is my standard of judgment. ② Your punctuation is too confusing, either missing or wrong. Also you have too many ellipses. ③ The layout of the article is also very messy, which makes people feel uncomfortable after reading it. The above three points mean that even though this is a good article, I can't stand it anymore, really. ④ It's still the same issue. I've said it in many articles, but most authors don't agree. This is purely a personal opinion. I think there are too many introductions before time travel, which delays the development of the plot. If you have to write, don't describe it so straightforwardly. You can try to insert narration later in the text. This frees up the beginning and allows you to start writing from another starting point. For example, write directly after the heroine opens her eyes, and of course there should be no more maids and servants coming around and calling "Miss, you're awake!" Another example, start with the relationship between the hero and heroine. Referring to "Intimacy on Ice and Snow", I think her entry point is quite innovative. The opening methods of "Meng Hui" and "Bu Bu" were okay a few years ago, but now they are really weak. No one wants to spend so much time looking at what the heroine was like before she traveled through time, and just make a fuss about it. Regarding the above four points, I gave up when I saw this. Let me just say, come on, author, I was shocked.
I saw it from the post, come and give it a thumbs up. It's not easy for newcomers to post. Come on, come on together. The mood is very smooth, "The people in the jade tower are crossing the shadows, the cold wind and the moon are chilling" are very nice. The little girl is very talented and has little knowledge. I don't know where she comes from, but she likes it very much. Gaga, I am also a newcomer. Now we are also updating the Qing palace literature, which is also written by Xiao Xuanzi. If you don't despise your relatives, give them charity and trample them.