The color of snow can be bright or dim, just like love. It can bring people hope, or drive them to the brink of despair…
Darkness veiled their eyes, because they were bearing a love that was not meant to be.
The crystal-clear snowflakes drifting down in the bitter wind seemed as soft as cotton at first glance;
The scorching flames spared nothing, even burning themselves in pursuit of light.
In the darkness, the hands groping for a way out were already battered and broken. Along with despair, every attempt brought heart-wrenching pain.
Does a way out really exist?
Perhaps love will find a way in the end.
Three updates a day. This newbie is looking for support
Not bad. I feel more and more. Why don't you update it? Just update it. Wow. Wow.
Seeing it now, I like the plot of the story more and more and look forward to the follow-up. . .
I hope the next chapter will have more words... And be more detailed, otherwise it will appear monotonous and not rich enough...
Eight mistakes, eight mistakes, please update~O(∩_∩)O
Will continue to pay attention... Come on~~
Awesome, emotionally delicate, and paying attention to details. You can use some more novel details in subsequent articles.
It can be seen from the writing style that the author should be a person with delicate emotions. I really like the detailed descriptions and feel very happy. I look forward to the following articles, come on!
It feels great, keep up the good work, but I don't really like the history of that period.
I will give you two more portions.
There are glitches and cumbersome language, and the dialogue is not realistic enough. The wording is incomprehensible and needs to be figured out, and the turns are strange. Some descriptions are too simple, some descriptions are too blunt, and some descriptions are too strange. In the first chapter, the characters are confusing, and girls and boys can easily not tell who is who. Last but not least, watch out for typos. Will it be a bit cruel? Although I really want to praise you, I really don't know how to praise you.