This is an extra story for my previous work, Eyes, published as a standalone piece, so I pulled it out and put it with the short stories~
It's the story of Ling Sang and Xiao Yunyi.
It's a story about time and perseverance.
Theme:
As the theme says, I saw youth in the story. However, I felt that the cause and effect were not tragic enough, and the ending was too perfect and it felt like it was not sublime enough. The dialogue is well written, but the logic of the plot is not complete enough. The first half of this article is filled with the feeling that I was born before you were born, and I am already old after you were born. The time travel in the second half seems a bit too fast, and I feel that my emotions have not yet changed. Come on with your meal tickets, you have the potential to be a great writer!
>0<Still like it~
Well written. Come on
I love it. I used to love reading a certain fan's Wenwen. Recently, I became obsessed with short stories. After reading it, I fell in love with it even more.
-. - I forgot to rate it. Let me rub it.
Please give Mo Xiaosang a full-length novel. Oh, ah, ah, ah, rolling~ It must be a full-length novel.
Think about it, it's not easy to find someone who likes her. The three bastards who didn't like her before showed up again. This must be passionate! !
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As long as we are reunited, I will write an article for Mo Xiaosang sometime!
Ouch~~ It's so long, what a bonus for returning as a fan~ Muhaha~~
I also like Ling Sang and Xiao Yunyi very much~~ Will there be any extra stories about them in the future~ I'm so greedy, cover my face~
Waiting for Nai's doctor's advice~~ My little beast is about to get over it!
As the theme says, I saw youth in the story. However, I felt that the cause and effect were not tragic enough, and the ending was too perfect and it felt like it was not sublime enough. The dialogue is well written, but the logic of the plot is not complete enough. The first half of this article is filled with the feeling that I was born before you were born, and I am already old after you were born. The time travel in the second half seems a bit too fast, and I feel that my emotions have not yet changed. Come on with your meal tickets, you have the potential to be a great writer!
>0<Still like it~
Well written. Come on
I love it. I used to love reading a certain fan's Wenwen. Recently, I became obsessed with short stories. After reading it, I fell in love with it even more.
-. - I forgot to rate it. Let me rub it.
Please give Mo Xiaosang a full-length novel. Oh, ah, ah, ah, rolling~ It must be a full-length novel. Think about it, it's not easy to find someone who likes her. The three bastards who didn't like her before showed up again. This must be passionate! !
0.0.0000000.0
As long as we are reunited, I will write an article for Mo Xiaosang sometime!
Ouch~~ It's so long, what a bonus for returning as a fan~ Muhaha~~ I also like Ling Sang and Xiao Yunyi very much~~ Will there be any extra stories about them in the future~ I'm so greedy, cover my face~ Waiting for Nai's doctor's advice~~ My little beast is about to get over it!