"Was I not good enough?" Ji Ran murmured to herself.
"No... We just really aren't right for each other," Xiang Li said, avoiding her gaze.
The seemingly heartless answer came from someone who had no idea the other person was just as heartbroken.
That year, you rejected me for the simple, laughable reason that we weren't right for each other. Our unspoken understanding and how well we knew each other were nothing but signs of friendship... We spent three years as strangers, then two years without a word. I should have forgotten you, but fate made me meet you again. Whatever the reason, this time I'll hold on to you. I won't let us part again...
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I hope you'll leave lots of comments. The earlier chapters might not be very good, so tell me what you think and I'll make revisions. There will definitely be something later on that makes your eyes light up. Thanks for reading this far. Please bookmark and comment!
Just a heads-up: I've combined the first few chapters. Thanks!
Hey-hey! I conveniently collected one
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Huang Sang, I want to see a new pit!!!!! Hoho!!!!!!!!!!!!! Huang Sang, I leave a comment silently!!!!!!! Please reply!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tutu, you are breaking the news... Right, right... By the way, when I took me back to see you, I found that I had disappeared for a long time...
I saw this on the forum, let me spread some flowers and exchange links.
For men, love is just a part of life, but for women, it is the whole life. . . . . . All right
What kind of novel is it? It's so short and doesn't seem interesting at all.
The plot is very compact and quite attractive. But it seems that many places are too far-fetched. The backgrounds and thoughts and actions of the characters are sometimes a bit exaggerated and do not feel realistic. Overall, it feels immature, and I hope some of the plots will be reconsidered. . We are all just starting out. Since Qin Seqi is encouraging you, let's work hard together~
If there is any dissatisfaction with a certain review, the author apologizes. At first glance at the preface of the article, the author's style is literary and slightly sad. After breaking up, men and women always seem to be inextricably linked. "Since the harp is playing, why should the music be silent?" This sentence reminds me of Gu Man's "Why the music is silent". How many people can still love that person consistently in the years after breaking up? After reading a few chapters, I have some small suggestions that I hope to share with the author. The preface of the article fits the title of this article, which revolves around the contradiction of love and separation. The heroine's eyes dodge and she inadvertently reveals some of her difficulties. This small foreshadowing will make readers curious as to why the heroine chooses to break up with the hero. Even though she loves her deeply, she is still forced to separate. The prologue uses a visual description of the male protagonist. It can be seen that the male protagonist Ji Ran deeply loves the female protagonist. Even though he knew that he was rejected back then, his relationship remains unwavering. However, based on my personal reading experience, I think the preface can actually be more concise. The first paragraph is certainly beautiful, but I think it can go directly to the dialogue between the male and female protagonists. However, after reading it one time, I have to point out that the author's punctuation usage, some sentences are obviously wrongly segmented. Therefore, I once suggested that the author should pay more attention when using commas and periods. Moreover, some quotation marks lack periods at the end. I hope the author can be more careful, so that readers will read more comfortably. In terms of characters, I once felt that the author's writing was a bit weak in shaping the characters of men and women. Of course, this was just a personal feeling. The heroine Han Xiangli, in a certain reading, seemed a bit cowardly, even a little pretentious, and immature. I don't know why she broke up with Ji Ran, but a few years later, whether we reunited in a bar or a restaurant, the heroine's performance made me a little disappointed. Besides, I felt at one point that there wasn't enough foreshadowing for the reunion, and the description of the meeting in the bar was a bit far-fetched. The male protagonist, Ji Ran, can be seen from the author's description that he is deeply affectionate, and he was unwilling to accept the breakup that year. In fact, anger can manifest in many ways, but as a CEO, he was unable to control his emotions in public, which was a bit surprising. In the encounter part of the second chapter, I once suggested that the author could slightly modify the dialogue. There is too much dialogue in this chapter, which will more or less make the reader feel irritated. Moreover, I always feel that the opening sentence "The night gave me black eyes, but I use them to find the light" appears a bit abrupt at the beginning. Of course, you can also think of it as being too picky and don't take it to heart. In addition, one point I want to mention is that the author has some mistakes and irregularities in the usage of sentences. In addition, some sentences obviously lack subjects, such as "Looking at the table below, it is four-thirty in the afternoon. It is the best time of the day. It is not hot, and the infinite energy of the lens fills the entire eyeball. Looking at the blue sky outside the window." In addition to the sentence segmentation errors, the sentence also lacks the subject Han Xiangli. I hope this long review can be of great help to the author. However, if the author feels that the long review is insufficient, don't take it to heart. The above is just a personal opinion. I hope it will not affect the author's mood when writing. Please continue to work hard, ^_^
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