I read your comment in the final chapter... I think your writing is very comfortable, but the jumping shape of the article seems a bit big... Plus there are a lot of HP articles now... Most people will not read it if they see newcomers. If you still want to continue writing, I suggest you write more chapters... Don't take writing as a task. Sometimes, articles are also written for yourself. I also wrote an infinite essay. At the beginning, few people came, but I continued writing slowly. I felt that writing is a very happy thing. It tells the story in your heart. At that time, I also dragged the characters out and brought them to me. I tried to have a conversation with him and treat him as a flesh-and-blood person. Although your idea was a bit silly and vulgar at the time, you will find that people will gradually respond to you. Although I ended up living on campus later in high school...
Many people have written several books before they gradually become famous and have a certain mass base. Come on
PS I suggest you take a look at the style of HP's article from Gaia. Maybe you can learn from it and learn something from it. Your article is a bit too monotonous, as if it only has a skeleton. The characters are not fleshed out enough.
Come on! ~
I read your comment in the final chapter... I think your writing is very comfortable, but the jumping shape of the article seems a bit big... Plus there are a lot of HP articles now... Most people will not read it if they see newcomers. If you still want to continue writing, I suggest you write more chapters... Don't take writing as a task. Sometimes, articles are also written for yourself. I also wrote an infinite essay. At the beginning, few people came, but I continued writing slowly. I felt that writing is a very happy thing. It tells the story in your heart. At that time, I also dragged the characters out and brought them to me. I tried to have a conversation with him and treat him as a flesh-and-blood person. Although your idea was a bit silly and vulgar at the time, you will find that people will gradually respond to you. Although I ended up living on campus later in high school... Many people have written several books before they gradually become famous and have a certain mass base. Come on PS I suggest you take a look at the style of HP's article from Gaia. Maybe you can learn from it and learn something from it. Your article is a bit too monotonous, as if it only has a skeleton. The characters are not fleshed out enough. Come on! ~