Code Geass: Lies and Contracts

"Lelouch: If it is God's will, I will..." This is a big bug for the author~ What's the antecedent?

"Zero: Unfortunately, I have..." This is a big bug for the author~ Can this be said directly?

"Cornelia: As long as the black one is defeated..." This is a big bug for the author~ The direction of conflict is too direct, usually using small conflicts to lead to big conflicts

"V. V: First meeting, Shu..." This is a big bug for the author~ A character who appears in a conflict environment would not speak like this.

"Yuffie: Suzaku, just like you lost..." This is a big mistake for the author. The real princess never spoke like this.

"Lulu: I will never lie, just..." This is a big bug for the author~ You don't need to use this expression to express your love for your sister. It might be better if you use actions.

"Nunally: Brother? Just summer..." This is a big bug for the author~ Normally, if you really made it yourself, there would be no such expression.

", Time, life. The power of the king..." This is a big bug for the author~ The cost is so specific that it is actually difficult to write when I think about it later.

"Characters: Lulu, C..." This is a big bug for the author~ [Three-flowered cat head]

"Characters: Lulu, C..." This is a big bug for the author~ Introducing characters at the beginning will actually reduce the novelty for readers.