Furong City

MINGKA tells the story of the entanglement between the father of a demon sect leader and a revengeful girl in Furong City, the love-hate relationship between the demon sect leader and his enemy's princess, the legend of a kind-hearted dog who covets the tiger father's divine sword and draws his sword against it, and the story of childhood sweethearts and love and death, which is more important. There are people here, there are rivers and lakes, there is the court, there are vendettas, there is love and hate, there is greed, and there is Mary Sue. This is the rolling world of mortals, full of magic that you can't understand. This is a martial arts drama and also a romance drama. Therefore, among the grievances and grievances in the world of the imperial court, the love between sons and daughters, the love between you and me is the most important. Although a lot of writing logic is missing, after all, everything is for the male protagonist Mo Qing and the female protagonist Liu Hanyan to meet, know, cherish and fall in love with each other, so... None of this matters anymore. Yunmei Sword, a magical artifact. The father's weapon is as murderous as life, and the son's skill is against nature and loves relatives. Everyone in the world is chasing him, causing a bloody storm in the world. However, will the poison coated on it be ineffective if someone is hit once? In fact, based on my past experience of reading the article, maybe it is better to say that this is a poison? I think MINGKA Guliang can consider this issue properly. Mo Zhonghan killed all the martial arts masters, made a name for himself, and founded his own sect. He was a heroic figure, and it was not an exaggeration to become a tiger father. However, in my opinion, there are still some flaws in Mo Hanzhong's character setting and dialogue language. In theory, a person who can kill people and create his own cult should not be a person who is kind enough to be polite, tactful, and conciliatory. The author gave him a "brutal" background, but also portrayed him as a "hypocrite". In fact, if he had some unique and uninhibited evil behaviors, wouldn't he be more attractive? Of course, this is just my personal feeling. After all, different readers have different cuteness, and the existence is reasonable. If the girl can have enough reasons for him to appear in front of the readers, she doesn't need to care too much about this. Mo Qing can be considered a hero, why do you say he is a dog? Because he stabbed his father in order to save his father's enemy. He abandoned his newlywed wife for Yunmeijian. For the sake of his daughter's agreement, he ignored the opposition of positions, and finally fell in love. It lacks the cruelty and viciousness of the Demon Cult. The demon sect, which everyone was frightened by, turned out to be a warm, harmonious, beautiful and friendly family. To be able to teach such a young master shows that this bleached demon sect also has its cuteness. I have to say, Princess Hanyan is really a good person... Is the author sure he didn't open the golden finger? Can she get along with her enemy's son as shy and pitiful as her first love...? The intrigues in the palace should have taught her calculations, taught her how to cultivate power, and taught her how to eliminate the root causes. In this work, the author expresses such a background view for us, that is: the environment is not important, as long as you have the genes of a good person, under any conditions, you will grow into a good princess who is kind and lovely and can have feelings for the male protagonist. At least, that's how it seems to me... There is a wormhole here, which allows the emperor to travel from revenge for his wife to a foolish king and a wrongful country. It is said that the enemy of the enemy is a friend. From this point of view, the vengeful Nine-Five Lord should use the power of the decent sects in the world to weaken the power of the evil sects, and then achieve the effect of a snipe and a clam fighting for the fisherman's profit. But why would this emperor be the enemy of the entire martial arts world? Could it be that good and evil are of the same lineage, so they have no choice but to win over the neutral faction Xuanyang Palace? Such an emperor would hand over important military power to the eldest prince just for Yuan Xiang, who was just similar to the dead queen. No matter how you think about it, it feels like being under a charm. In the end, the queen was a little confused for no reason. He didn't care about the life or death of the queen's biological daughter and his beloved princess Liu Hanyan, and he seemed to have lost his desire for revenge. Is MINGKA Guliang foreshadowing His Majesty? In addition, although bugs are unavoidable, they are an eyesore after all, so here, I caught a big one. "This man dominated the martial arts world twenty years ago. He used his so-called "magic skills" to kill all the masters in the martial arts competition. Since then, no one has dared to claim the first place." I hope the girl can pay more attention to these details in the future, so as to attract more readers. Writing is a process of experience and learning. Although this review may be a little unkind, Lou Ming's intention is good. I hope the girl can forgive me for being a bit venomous sometimes... If I hurt you, I apologize, but please believe that this is not deliberately embarrassing. I hope to see the girl's more mature words and stories as soon as possible. I believe this is not only the wish of the readers, but also the wish of the girl herself. Are you right? Finally, I sincerely hope that MINGKA Guliang's articles will get better and better, and more and more readers will like them. Come on~ Illegal gathering | Changpingpu by Lou Ming

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Let me support you~~~~Wenwen is good~~~~~Come on MINGKA~>3<

That sword is so magical~~ I think it was particularly touching when I wrote about the childhood sweethearts in the first chapter The emotional scenes are also good~~ I also write martial arts Let's encourage and grow together Don't forget to go back to Weiyang's short comment studio to get your review.

Dear~~I have to write less this time~~ What a small oversight~~~ I hope you can check it next time you post. The details could be richer The description needs to be enriched But the plot is good I really want to know what happens next

Dear~~ Actually the writing style is still okay~~ There are just typos in some places that shouldn't be used~~ What's going on with "Twenty years, Ying'er"? Isn't that girl's name Liu Hanyan? Could it be her mother's name? Then you have to explain it clearly. But overall it's still good~~ Weiyang's Short Commentary: Presented by the Flower Manager of the Ministry of Internal Affairs

I'll take the lead. After all, I'm a male protagonist. Wow, the writing is obviously good. Keep up the good work. However, let me become a male. I'm not used to it. So keep up the writing~~

I was wrong... I shouldn't have grabbed my mother's sofa...

There is a kind of weak rush... I don't know where I got this kind of kick...