I want to use the colors of a mountain landscape to trace your brows. Proud and handsome, you hide a refined elegance and arrogance that only I can see through.
I love watching these days and nights pass, one after another, then return.
Your brows and eyes reflect a garden in full bloom. You smile serenely, your sleeves sweeping out and drawing back with effortless grace, your dance as graceful as a startled swan.
Delicate and warm, with a tenderness that shines through. Then you, drunk, spilled a splash of alluring red wine from the Western Regions onto my pure white dress.
An enchanting iris, its vivid strokes standing out against an otherwise elegant canvas, wounding my eyes.
The young man stood in splendid robes, all grace and dignity. I stood behind him.
That young man was named Boqing, and I was simply called Xiangsi.
[Foreword] The author does not look like a newcomer, so I will give you some more suggestions. 1. Copywriting From the copywriting alone, you can tell that the author is not a newcomer and has excellent writing skills. It can also be seen that the article is biased towards the ancient style. This type of novel is still very popular in Jinjiang. 2. Writing style When I opened the first chapter, I was a little surprised. If the author had not been engaged in writing for a long time, it would be impossible for him to write such a good article. The characters' expressions and movements are appropriate, and the paragraphs are clear. In terms of writing style, the author has a great advantage. 3. Dialogue This is a small flaw in the article. The first chapter begins with the dialogue between the male and female protagonists, which seems a bit messy. But after that, it gradually got better, and I also understood what I wrote. 4. Concept: The article is cleverly conceived and designed, and the layout is superb. Only the memory of lovesickness seems very abrupt. The story of the scholar selling his wife and then killing him for lovesickness should be a memory. When I read this paragraph, I was a little confused. 5. Suggestions: The title of the book is too graphic and cannot attract people's attention. Just name it after the heroine Annan Xiangsi. In the first paragraph, I did not see Xiangsi's infatuation and blamed the male protagonist for the Green Fairy. But think about it, both the Green Fairy and Xiangsi are infatuated people and they should sympathize with each other. Overall, my article is very promising. I hope you can stick to it and write a good article. The above is from the review of [Little Fool Review Shop] [Aqiu]. This review is purely a personal opinion, please forgive me for any shortcomings.