
The Runaway
跑路的人
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 55k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 13y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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22Chapters
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9.0Score
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——Read romasky's "The Runner" This is a wet and gentle story, full, full, moist, moist, green, distinct, cool and plump. A friend once described my article as "the moist rain, the green tide of the woods". After reading the article "Run Road", I can only use this sentence to summarize my impressions. I like "Orchid Leopard" very much. Xiao Zhou wrote it further north, so it is more cruel. Romasky wrote about the scorching heat of the South Asian sun and also about her lush plants and abundant rainfall. The article has four lines, one for Zhuang Ning, another for Ruan Xing, another for Ke Zai's growth and Xingxing, and another for Li Wangqing and the development of the times. The four lines are intertwined, the order is not disordered, the context is clear, the primary and secondary aspects are well arranged, and the story is finally fully arranged. It is very full, with all kinds of small ornaments, big or small, eye-catching or inconspicuous, which unconsciously make people feel peaceful. It is the home of Ruan Xing in the author's writing, and it is also the meaning of the article I read. Zhuang Ning is the protagonist and the center of the article's perspective, but there is not much to say. You can probably tell where such a character comes from. Such characters are not uncommon. The key is to write convincingly. What is valuable to the author is that the character image gradually becomes clear as the plot progresses. The levels of the plot and the level of the narrative are seamlessly connected and very natural. Ruan Xing, the author did not describe when he fell in love with Zhuang Ning, nor when he started planning revenge for his mother. The author only wrote about his behavior, leaving nothing about his psychology, except for wanting to buy Zhuang Ning a watch. White space is wonderful. It reflects the author's sense of control over the text, because if what is left is really just a blank and makes readers feel that the transition is abrupt and lacks necessary foreshadowing, then it can only be called a blank. The beauty of the blank space lies in the author's skillful writing and ink-writing to attract people's imagination, and in the readers' knowing smiles. It lies in the author's confidence and the trust he gives readers. It feels like the author's sense of control is most prominent here in Ruan Xing. Wu Shuicheng was killed, and the thorns on Zhuang Ning's back were removed. The two of them read the etiquette textbook for elementary school students. Ruan Xing said that it was because he remembered his former self. At this moment, the author made me stand in awe. I read the author's ambition and Ruan Xing's ambition. The author wants to write a love story, and Ruan Xing wants people to love even more. Sometimes the pauses are so beautiful. Ruan Xing always asked Zhuang Ning to wait, and he himself was waiting. The fatal blow to Wu Shuicheng was waiting, the revenge against Li Wenbiao was waiting, and even the love for Zhuang Ning also needed to wait. Especially when it comes to Zhuang Ning, it feels a bit like "just do good things and don't worry about the future". In fact, it is very consistent with the philosophy that I know that South Asians believe in. Although it is not inaction, there is a mentality of "what I can't do today, time will do it." In addition to strategy, I think the deeper level is behavioral philosophy. It seems that he is being pushed forward passively, but he is also open-minded and determined to do everything in his power, obey fate, adapt to the current situation, and take advantage of the situation to achieve success. The author should have read a lot of prose about South Asia and Taiwan. He grasped the moist softness of characters in this humid area very, very well. They are soft to themselves and others, and also to their destiny. The wind blows the grass blades low, and then shakes the dust when the wind blows, and starts over step by step, a kind of softness and tenacity of life. This philosophy is not only reflected in Ruan Xing. Although Zhuang Ning showed restlessness in the early stage of revenge, he eventually settled down. In fact, it was such an attitude that Zhuang Ning showed during his period as the second young master. So I say that Ruan Xing is actually the central character of the whole text, and I guess he is the character that the author most likes. Ke Zai is such an important character, and his first appearance conveyed a very rich message. Because of this character, this story has a foundation. Afterwards, the growth and destiny of Ke Zai, as well as the introduction of Li Wangqing and the stars, became even richer. I also integrated the lines of Feng Hou and A Fang into this branch. In the end, Ke Zai returned from studying in the United States, Ruan Xing and Zhuang Ning went there, and the years changed and the stars changed. Writing about Li Wangqing's line, this line is more closely intertwined with Ke Zai's line, writing about the changes in the country, not only the author's feelings, but also writing a sense of the times, stretching the story, making the fate of the characters securely attached to it, and the trend of the times is irreversible, and the tone of repeated fate comes out. Therefore, the fate and choices of the characters have become reasonable in the era, and have a natural nature. I like that after the author carefully planned the layout of the article, he wrote so casually that it seemed careless. He was so sure about the fate of the characters and his writing was so steady, so the article seemed so calm, sure and moist. Such a confident writer and such a controlling author (I secretly noticed that the author's word count for each chapter is 2500±200, and the final chapter is even less, 2200). The details are very rich and full, from climate to plants, etc. The author may not have been to South Asia, but he has read related books and must have a lot of affection for South Asia, so he can write such a green color. The wording is also very flavorful of Southeast Asian language habits. The quantifier "horse" of banana leaves is worth mentioning. I like it very much. There is a little problem. In the joke about the wife, the word "so dead" makes me feel that the author can't hold it back. After reading the author's articles, I think this one is the best. It reads softly but has a full background. Okay, let's stop writing here.
Madam, woohoo, I'm here to review again. This article is really well written. I like it so much that I even want to collect it. Why is it so unpopular? When I read it, my eyes always seem to have a touch of green that is so thick that I can't get rid of it. I can feel the Nanyang style through the text ~ I also love the relationship between this couple. To outsiders, it may seem like they are not worthy, but it is logical.
Read each chapter carefully, and the words seem to flow from the pen. It seems unintentional, but in fact it is intentional. When everything was revealed in the end, I couldn't help but smile knowingly. In fact, these were all the foreshadowings that had been laid before. The last paragraph is really sad and sighing, and I can't help but shed tears. [And this couple is really cute...]
The picture is full of sense and tension. The article itself is like a movie, you can almost imagine the scenes in it. The long review below is very well written and contains much more than I thought. I saw this article from the txt package a long time ago. It is well written, like a long song, sung leisurely, without any ups and downs, and turns back and forth in thousands of times calmly. The writing is good, better than me, and better than many others. I have a strong sense of control over the characters, which is what I like the most. This feeling of being able to grasp the characters and control the situation makes me very envious. Because this is a kind of ability, it is not the words that control you and occupy you, it is you who knead and shape the entire article. So well written.
I was suddenly moved by a sentence. I read it all at once, but now I can't find it and have to stay here. At that time, I saw the sentence "It's like waking up from a nap in a garden full of greenery and no one is there." I read it several times and felt it was very good for no reason, and it felt a little quiet. The author describes many environments (rain, wind, sunshine...) In this article with great detail. There are several descriptions of rain, each different but very detailed. I remember it deeply. What impressed me the most was Zhuang Ning walking down the wooden stairs, and Ruan Xingqia standing in the middle of the living room, whizzing over with a rainy air. There was also a fishy smell that suddenly appeared when the rain hit the ground. All in all, it has a strong sense of life and a little sadness. Then I looked for Mr. Romasky's other articles and found very few, which I deeply regretted.
Woohoo, finished reading! What a great article! !
When I returned to the first floor, there was no trace of revenge at all, but it didn't stop me from seeing the end.
"It's like waking up from a nap in a garden full of greenery and not seeing anyone." Teacher, you are so good at writing! Congratulations to Ruan Xing for finally eating Zhuang Ning~
Parting and getting together, but fortunately we have lovers together
My favorite article I've read this year.