Dedicated to Dorothy, who has remained steadfast in her love of urging me to update, writing, and this Feidi CP. Thank you. [Story Preview]
An unavoidable cycle. Starting over once again.
Loading... An irrepressible sadness, a tender yet cruel love.
[--His golden eyes shone like torches, softening for her in a fleeting moment. A tiger gently sniffing a rose.]
[Before You Read]
This is mainly a writing exercise for the alphabet boy and for analyzing Feitan. Dorothy supervised the entire writing process.
The story is rather scattered overall, and the structure is a bit messy. It took me half a year from agreeing to write it to actually starting, and another half year to finish.
So there are repeated ideas and inconsistencies. If you find it boring, just stop reading.
[About This Story]
11-13. Thank you for being with me through it all.
Premise:
It's very beautiful. This cp is good.
Come here~! Very rare Xipi!
I really liked the first chapter, but my enthusiasm gradually wore off at the end, which made me feel a little regretful QAQ I feel like Xipi like Feidi is rare, but Ah Xiu's article made me fall in love with this pairing>//////<
That's because you've always been very cold~! It's finally finished! Ah Xiuxiusi is enough! ↖(^ω^)↗
Well, to be honest, I also feel it's a bit anticlimactic ORZ Although I don't have much feelings for this CP, I thought it was quite cute when you posted the first chapter. For me, the impact of the pairing you described, the aggressive Feitan and the misty Drops, was enough to make me very excited. But what about the rest of the story? One is that it is not detailed enough, and I can feel that you want to end it quickly. The other one feels that the emotional grasp is not as good as it was at the beginning. It was quite delicate at the beginning, but it was a bit rushed at the end. I think you felt cold because you didn't write carefully about the emotional changes later on? Although I don't know your original intention, I thought it would be a setting that was cold at first and hot at the end, even though the ending didn't get hot at all. By the way, writing H also sets up so many causes and consequences, seriously, Xiu...
Chuanchuan~=v=Here I come~ It's been a long time since I read Chuanchuan's article, but it's still so delicious~