In her previous life, she transmigrated to the Soul Society and became the younger sister of Byakuya. In this life, she is reincarnated, and her little-boy Zanpakuto destroys its own blade to follow her for all eternity. See how this flesh-and-blood Soul Reaper girl avoids the spotlight of the Mary Sue and quietly tames the Ice Prince!
Oh, right. Since her Soul Reaper powers are way too overpowered, the author has created a Mary Sue cannon-fodder character who transmigrated from an ancient Chinese martial sect, just to keep the protagonist from standing out. Her sword flourishes are dazzlingly beautiful. The author has also added a group of kids with supernatural abilities to cheer her on. Our girl Saito Chiaki simply loves hiding in their shadow and living a quiet life. Fame is fleeting; strength is what matters!
Spitting up blood. First, let me tidy up the story page and remove those bizarre rants~
This story will be available to subscribers this Saturday, with three chapters released that day.
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Although I still feel that the sudden amnesia is unbearable, but I still ask the author not to be careless and abuse Mr. Apple. I can't stand this kind of entanglement with others. Since it doesn't work, I will change it to you, Narcissus. Tezuka is too hesitant. He clearly likes Chiaki, and he will be with that so-and-so leaf. By the way, let's deal with the grandfather who likes that so-and-so leaf. I really feel that I can't stand this kind of male protagonist.
In other words, the front is very attractive and warm to me, but the back is getting more and more cruel, which makes me more and more angry. Why is the young lady not dead with a broken knife? Also, why is the matter of Qianqiu's grandfather not resolved yet? Will Qianba continue to be arrogant? The heroine has been restrained. The above are my suggestions. I didn't give you a negative mark because it is not easy to write, and your writing skills are not bad, but the idea is limited. I hope you can change it well. I can't bear the sudden amnesia.
Don't be careless and abuse Mr. Apple
Embarrassing. . . For the first time, I found out whether my aunt's counterattack could wait until college. How do you put me, a girl who just graduated from elementary school, to be visited by her aunt?
The explosion couldn't have been done by Tezuka-san. . . . Okay, I'm evil. . .
Brother Sang is so cute! ~
It's good enough without giving negative marks.
I hope Chiaki can take revenge on Aizen
Although I still feel that the sudden amnesia is unbearable, but I still ask the author not to be careless and abuse Mr. Apple. I can't stand this kind of entanglement with others. Since it doesn't work, I will change it to you, Narcissus. Tezuka is too hesitant. He clearly likes Chiaki, and he will be with that so-and-so leaf. By the way, let's deal with the grandfather who likes that so-and-so leaf. I really feel that I can't stand this kind of male protagonist.
In other words, the front is very attractive and warm to me, but the back is getting more and more cruel, which makes me more and more angry. Why is the young lady not dead with a broken knife? Also, why is the matter of Qianqiu's grandfather not resolved yet? Will Qianba continue to be arrogant? The heroine has been restrained. The above are my suggestions. I didn't give you a negative mark because it is not easy to write, and your writing skills are not bad, but the idea is limited. I hope you can change it well. I can't bear the sudden amnesia.
Don't be careless and abuse Mr. Apple
Embarrassing. . . For the first time, I found out whether my aunt's counterattack could wait until college. How do you put me, a girl who just graduated from elementary school, to be visited by her aunt?
The explosion couldn't have been done by Tezuka-san. . . . Okay, I'm evil. . .
Why don't you say Jiang Zi to Mr. Apple?
Forgot to rate! Make up for it, hee hee*v