A little fox transmigrates through time and space with a pocket dimension, and is reborn in the body of a student who committed suicide after failing the college entrance exam. In her previous life, she cultivated immortality and suffered endless hardship. In this life, she farms and enjoys boundless happiness!
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This story is a keepsake of the first time I ever wrote fiction. It's very immature and very amateur, so read with caution!!!!
I'm gradually improving it. I believe hard work can make up for a lack of talent. Perhaps much later, when I look back at the footprints I've left behind, I'll see how much I've improved.
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No matter what happens next, I have no intention of reading anymore. I don't know who the author plans to choose as the male protagonist. Just looking at these two male protagonists makes me feel disheartened. No matter how they are separated later, I have no desire to continue reading. Do you think it is possible for the female protagonist to live for thousands of years and still lose her virginity, become pregnant, and marry a man who is not the father of the child? In one word, absolutely! This is the first time I typed so many words without continuing to read. For the sake of the author's hard work, I give you a little flower. Don't thank me too much! ! !
Suddenly I couldn't stand it any longer and felt it was very boring. I came from the world of cultivation. Why are you so irresponsible? It's not like you can't support yourself while you're pregnant with someone else's child, and you have to marry someone who has hurt your family~! Frustrated~! ! @@
When I was in a book shortage, I came across this book on the recommendation of a friend. After reading the first chapter, I gave up because it was too novice.
Later, I really ran out of books to read, so I picked it up again. It can be seen that the author of this book seems to be a newcomer, and his writing style is average. It's just that I like the two elements of farming and portable space so much that I couldn't bear to read it.
Later, the author's writing style improved a bit, and many of the details he described seemed to be a microcosm of the things around me. . . .
Sometimes the heroine's thoughts are too realistic. She likes to bury her head in the sand like an ostrich, thinking that the world is peaceful. This is so like myself in reality. When something happens, the first thing I think of is to lick my wounds alone.
The male protagonist is a retired soldier. Forgive me for not having a good impression of soldiers. Maybe I have never seen a very good soldier in real life.
I haven't figured out who is the second male lead yet. Is Fan Hao just here to make soy sauce?
It can be seen that the author is trying his best to describe a society where everyone has love. The thing about giving up his seat made me have a good impression of Fan Hao. Nowadays, men have no self-consciousness about being men. There are many people competing for seats with girls on the bus. I wish there were all men like Fan Hao.
It is also too strict for men to ask women now. They have to share in buying a house, be responsible for having children, and be filial to the parents-in-law. Housework is also our woman's. Are you mistaken? They say that men and women are equal, but why can't women have equal menstrual periods every month?
I'm a little excited and don't know what I want to say. Maybe the things in the article have given me some feelings. Let me vent here. Don't blame the author, it's a bit off topic.
Having said that, I hope the author will continue to write well. I can see bits and pieces of warmth between the lines of your words. The scene transitions are still lacking. Please pay more attention in the future.
The dialogue between the characters is a bit stiff, so don't worry about the author. I just expressed my own thoughts. I still like this article very much, especially some of the descriptions of the countryside, which always remind me of my childhood memories. Without the warmth and warmth of human relationships now, there are many things that I long to have but have lost.
I burst out laughing when I saw Doudou in the countryside. Children were so innocent when they were young. Oh, this is talking about the children in the past. The children of today are very clever and clever. Alas, they no longer have the simplicity of the past.
By the way, simplicity, that's what I want to say. Although the author's writing style is not very good, the characters described have a sense of simplicity, which makes people connect with reality, as if someone from our neighbor has traveled here.
I have said so much without realizing it, but I haven't expressed my opinions and suggestions yet. Maybe I am such a talkative person. Maybe it's because I have been in Tianya for a long time and I have become such a nagging person. Haha
By the way, the reason why Yun Yan didn't marry Fan Hao was because he was a rich second generation? Haha, it's a bit unbelievable. How can this happen in real life?
I think it's really good that Fifth Brother can love Yunyan without any grudges. But I don't believe there is such a person in real life. Maybe it's just because it's a novel that it can be so beautiful.
I suggest the author write more books in this area to maintain this simplicity. Rural life can be written more excitingly. I hope the author can make the female supporting character a bit more bad next time. I always feel that the people the author writes are too kind, and there are many bad people in life.
Okay, let's stop writing here.
Greatly upgrade the earth
Is it going to end? Why does it feel like my daughter is getting married when she gets older?
Is it going to end? Looking forward to new articles
No matter what happens next, I have no intention of reading anymore. I don't know who the author plans to choose as the male protagonist. Just looking at these two male protagonists makes me feel disheartened. No matter how they are separated later, I have no desire to continue reading. Do you think it is possible for the female protagonist to live for thousands of years and still lose her virginity, become pregnant, and marry a man who is not the father of the child? In one word, absolutely! This is the first time I typed so many words without continuing to read. For the sake of the author's hard work, I give you a little flower. Don't thank me too much! ! !
Suddenly I couldn't stand it any longer and felt it was very boring. I came from the world of cultivation. Why are you so irresponsible? It's not like you can't support yourself while you're pregnant with someone else's child, and you have to marry someone who has hurt your family~! Frustrated~! ! @@
When I was in a book shortage, I came across this book on the recommendation of a friend. After reading the first chapter, I gave up because it was too novice. Later, I really ran out of books to read, so I picked it up again. It can be seen that the author of this book seems to be a newcomer, and his writing style is average. It's just that I like the two elements of farming and portable space so much that I couldn't bear to read it. Later, the author's writing style improved a bit, and many of the details he described seemed to be a microcosm of the things around me. . . . Sometimes the heroine's thoughts are too realistic. She likes to bury her head in the sand like an ostrich, thinking that the world is peaceful. This is so like myself in reality. When something happens, the first thing I think of is to lick my wounds alone. The male protagonist is a retired soldier. Forgive me for not having a good impression of soldiers. Maybe I have never seen a very good soldier in real life. I haven't figured out who is the second male lead yet. Is Fan Hao just here to make soy sauce? It can be seen that the author is trying his best to describe a society where everyone has love. The thing about giving up his seat made me have a good impression of Fan Hao. Nowadays, men have no self-consciousness about being men. There are many people competing for seats with girls on the bus. I wish there were all men like Fan Hao. It is also too strict for men to ask women now. They have to share in buying a house, be responsible for having children, and be filial to the parents-in-law. Housework is also our woman's. Are you mistaken? They say that men and women are equal, but why can't women have equal menstrual periods every month? I'm a little excited and don't know what I want to say. Maybe the things in the article have given me some feelings. Let me vent here. Don't blame the author, it's a bit off topic. Having said that, I hope the author will continue to write well. I can see bits and pieces of warmth between the lines of your words. The scene transitions are still lacking. Please pay more attention in the future. The dialogue between the characters is a bit stiff, so don't worry about the author. I just expressed my own thoughts. I still like this article very much, especially some of the descriptions of the countryside, which always remind me of my childhood memories. Without the warmth and warmth of human relationships now, there are many things that I long to have but have lost. I burst out laughing when I saw Doudou in the countryside. Children were so innocent when they were young. Oh, this is talking about the children in the past. The children of today are very clever and clever. Alas, they no longer have the simplicity of the past. By the way, simplicity, that's what I want to say. Although the author's writing style is not very good, the characters described have a sense of simplicity, which makes people connect with reality, as if someone from our neighbor has traveled here. I have said so much without realizing it, but I haven't expressed my opinions and suggestions yet. Maybe I am such a talkative person. Maybe it's because I have been in Tianya for a long time and I have become such a nagging person. Haha By the way, the reason why Yun Yan didn't marry Fan Hao was because he was a rich second generation? Haha, it's a bit unbelievable. How can this happen in real life? I think it's really good that Fifth Brother can love Yunyan without any grudges. But I don't believe there is such a person in real life. Maybe it's just because it's a novel that it can be so beautiful. I suggest the author write more books in this area to maintain this simplicity. Rural life can be written more excitingly. I hope the author can make the female supporting character a bit more bad next time. I always feel that the people the author writes are too kind, and there are many bad people in life. Okay, let's stop writing here.
Greatly upgrade the earth
Is it going to end? Why does it feel like my daughter is getting married when she gets older?
Is it going to end? Looking forward to new articles
Looking forward to the update. Come on
Looking forward to the update. Come on
Looking forward to the update. Come on
Looking forward to the update. Come on