If Time Were Warm and Long

Dear, if you don't update it, I will forget what I read earlier. Your articles have been slow to gain popularity in the first place, which is not good.

Just like the title of the novel, the author's writing style is literary and artistic. After reading the author's updated part, I suddenly felt a little unsure who is the male protagonist, and I felt that there was a lack of love feeling. To put it bluntly, I couldn't feel that Su Yan and Su Zijin had deep feelings for each other. Of course, when you see this, you will say that you are only one of the readers at this time and cannot generalize. A certain time, I had a preference for a man named Gu, just like Gu Qingchi in the author's article. Although he seemed cynical and uncaring about feelings on the surface, he was such a man who always showed his affection for the heroine inadvertently. If the male protagonist is destined to be Su Zijin, then Gu Qingchi can only be the cannon fodder male partner, which is a pity. Su Yan, when I read it for the first time, always reminds me of the heroine Su Cuo in Jiao Jiao's "A Gentleman's Promise". She is serious in work and has a very high IQ. She has her own persistence in relationships. Once she falls in love with someone, she will fly into the flame and work hard without caring about her own life. Therefore, once other men fall in love with her, they can only become cannon fodder. In fact, I always feel that Su Yan is just infatuated with Su Zijin, a kind of childhood dependence. I don't feel that it is love. Well, maybe I don't read it thoroughly enough or understand it deeply enough. While reading, I often wondered when Su Yan would be able to face up to Gu Qingchi's feelings. Su Zijin, a gentle and considerate boy, just like the male protagonists in other campus novels, is a man of the hour on campus. He has super popularity and IQ. His relationship with Lin Shuwan is enviable. But the thoughts of such a man are unpredictable. Does he like Su Yan? Or do you just love her like a sister? I think the author's writing is not slow, but the emotional line is not clear enough. Of course, this is just my personal feeling after reading this article. Just like in your character column, you listed Su Zijin and Gu Qingchi as the protagonists, which makes people have to wonder who the male protagonist is? There is ambiguity and secret love in the article, which makes it a little green to read. In fact, I don't understand why Su Zijin confessed to Lin Shuwan in the first place. Did he really like her? The author's writing style is worthy of recognition, and he is also very good at analyzing the psychology of the characters. However, there is less pen and ink describing Su Zijin's heart. However, it is worth mentioning that I really like the title of each chapter of the author, but sometimes the title with a neat number of words may look more eye-catching and cleaner. Of course, this is just my suggestion. This writing style is more literary, and occasionally the writing is slightly melancholy, but it gives people an overly literary feeling. In fact, I would rather the setting of this article is in a high school, so that readers can still understand the unspoken feelings between the male and female protagonists, which are hazy but still beautiful. In addition, one thing I want to point out is that the author's girl's beginning is a bit pale and plain, which will make readers lack interest in reading. If you can bury more foreshadowing, it may make this article more brilliant. I believe that the author's writing style will not disappoint readers. Just like time, after precipitation, what is impressive is still the youthful feelings in high school. Qingqing Zijin is so long in my heart, but for the sake of you, I still ponder it. The above are just my feelings after reading the entire article. The author, please continue to work hard and update the article. I hope that my personal opinions will not affect your own emotions. ^_^

It's better to show off than to show off. . That's really good. In fact, your writing is very good.

It turns out you were flashbacking, I was wrong╮(╯_╰)╭

The writing is very fresh, and the writing style is well connected and does not feel abrupt. Haha, I am LZ, so I have accepted your article and will read it this afternoon.

Oh leak. . . Is it a brother-sister relationship?

Daily update from August 31st to September 6th Due to the word count requirement for editing the recommendation list, Updated 1W on the 7th It's really a test for Qiqi, the beginning of the third year of high school>< Thank you all for your continued support Thank youBlow a kiss~

I'm speechless. It's finally been updated. I just want to add a little more seasoning to Qingshuiwen. I'm a little disappointed after waiting for so long, but I will continue to support it and read it.

Qiqi, your application has not failed, you can be on the list. But I finally waited until you updated the article. Now that I have learned to be smart, I have to gain weight before reading again!

The large text is very nice. The writing style is very fresh, Xiao Ai particularly likes it. O(∩_∩)O~ Keep writing. Come on!