Master, There's a Demon!

How can I put it this way? After reading this article, I felt it was useless. The story structure was okay and there were a lot of foreshadowings, but it was obvious that the story should continue to develop and the author stopped abruptly at the point where the plot should be revealed. Many things that could be written very deeply are superficial. The emotions and sorrows of the characters in the story have no sense of substitution. It is bland and I don't understand the origin of the characters' emotions or the choices they make. Just like I don't understand why the master accepts the heroine as his apprentice, I don't understand what deep reason the hero has to hate the master, I don't understand that the heroine loved the hero more than anything because of such a trivial thing in her previous life, I don't understand why the master still pursues Bai Tuo even though he has no feelings anymore, I don't understand why the hero fell in love with this idiot without knowing the heroine's background? There was obviously no loving exchange, it was probably just the male protagonist teasing the female protagonist and rescuing her again and again, and the female protagonist didn't show any touching character, so why did they fall in love? The male protagonist didn't make it clear that he was taking advantage of the female protagonist. Why did the female protagonist choose such a childish path of transformation? She obviously had so many responsibilities that were more important than feelings. The short stories about relationships in the article are all familiar, but the author has nothing new to say. The origin of the male protagonist's life is also a joke used in a well-known fairy tale, but there are important clues there that greatly promote the plot, so it is obviously just background information and extremely boring. The reason why I still leave a review after so long is probably because I read the ending in advance and thought that the heroine took strong revenge on the person who betrayed her. However, after reading it in one sitting, I felt that I had been deceived by the author. There was no such thing as being used or hurt, and there was no ruthless revenge at all. Everything was just my illusion. Because of the author's ability to tell stories, the story that could have moved people seems to be a blur. It feels like I can't take a breath! !

I'm so happy to see you update so much as soon as I come back. It turns out that the heroine has always been a supporting role in the eyes of others, but then I found out that there are many people who love her. In fact, a person can't live without a boyfriend in this world, and family members are also very important.

Ah, is this another unit story? Not bad, send you flowers.

The psychological analysis of the heroine in this chapter is great. Although I think it's a bit awkward for the two of them to get together so quickly. My so-called strong taste is abuse. I think that a plot with a little abuse will be more attractive than one without abuse. However, reading this chapter while reading the painting is really touching.

Ah, actually I still like monsters more, and the audience always wants a more intense plot. The National Day is about to pass, and I have to go to school so I can't go online very often, but I will still rate it when I have time!

In fact, this is my first time writing a long review. I used to be a diver in Jinjiang, and I would never write a comment of more than a hundred words at most. However, I didn't expect that the comments I occasionally posted would have such a great motivating effect on the author, so I suddenly felt very passionate and prepared to continue working hard to publish a long review. But I didn't expect that it would be too difficult to write a long review. Dushou and Jinshou are very arrogant, especially since I've been a little dry recently, so I really can't write a long review. So I can only type it paragraph by paragraph in Word. The author's writing style must be very good, especially the tone of the book that is meant to be sad but not sad, it is really attractive and ruthless. First let's talk about our two identical male pig feet. One is the facially paralyzed master who has been expressionless for thousands of years. His facially paralyzed appearance gives people a sense of abstinence. He only reveals some expressions when he feels the heroine's past life. As far as his appearance is concerned, he is a protagonist. Unfortunately, monsters who look like him gave the author red envelopes, so the role of the facially paralyzed emperor is really pitiful. (Master: I am the protagonist [facial paralysis]) The gods squatted, the gods squatted, the gods finished squatting and the fairies squatted; Facial paralysis squats, facial paralysis squats, facial paralysis completes the monster squat. \\(^O^)/ So it was finally Nan Po's turn to squat. As a monster, he has more cuteness and more expressions than the facial expression. And for some reason, when he sees the master, he always feels like he wants to abuse the heroine at the same time. But as for Nanpo, although he looks a bit cynical and a bit like a philandering bad fox, I just think he is actually a very gentle person. But I didn't expect that he still tortured the heroine╮(╯_╰)╭ Let's talk about our cutest, cutest and most natural heroine. This heroine is a spiritual idiot who got lucky and helped the Jade Emperor and became an immortal. However, because she is an outsider, Xiao Liuyi has been bullied by the aboriginal people in heaven. The most rare thing is that no matter what setbacks she experiences, she can always maintain her natural and innocent character and her unchanging love for her master. She seems to be alone all the time. Linghua is her good friend but not good enough to be her best friend. Master and her are like a father who is always serious. She is like a child who wants to get good grades in order to make her parents happy. She always follows in the footsteps of adults. People only occasionally look back to see if she is still there, and she is very happy. And Nan Po, who went through the back door, has nothing to do with her at all. Although he always has an affair with her and seems to like Xiao Liu Yi, but let's not talk about the racial differences, but there is not even a promise (similar to I will always be with you). Of course, the relationship between the two is only budding at the moment, and there is no possibility of any development. But seeing Nan Po was like seeing a few big words in the guide on his head, and he was still far from being truly reliable. So our little Liuyi still has a long way to go on her own... (The ellipsis cannot be found) And our heroine's past life that was so shocking that she dared to be with Jun Jue only when she was in perfect harmony with the world, is the biggest burden for the heroine. It was as if there was a twin sister she never knew about. Everyone liked her, and others were only nice to her because her appearance and personality were similar to her unknown past life. No one would want to be loved by someone else as a substitute. Although the heroine is a tree spirit and looks silly, I think she is more sensitive to these feelings. Although she was called a piece of wood by Nanpo, she longed for the love of others, so she repeatedly told Nanpo and others that she was not the so-called previous life. She repeatedly distinguished the relationship between him and her previous life, and she just hoped that someone could really treat her well, not because others were just a stupid and dull piece of wood like her. As the saying goes, all the things in the past life are unreliable, just like Jingtian changed so many things, although in the end he remembered them whether it was listening to stories or watching memoirs, it was not just that the girl didn't want a wife, even if the two wives looked exactly the same. So the summary is that you can have many girls, but you can only have one wife, even if they look exactly the same. Of course, in the eyes of ordinary people, two is better, but the male protagonist who can't stand other people's affection is not wanted. The cutest men now are the Fox King and the Snake Demon King. As for Su Heqi's image of a silly son in his later period, he is so stupid that he is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. He is the only one in this article who has made a commitment to an unmarried woman╮(╯_╰)╭. And I have to say that the author's writing is so good that after reading it, I had forgotten that the two people looked the same╮(╯_╰)╭ Ahhhhhhh, I finally finished writing, so tired

I have written 500 words and saved them in Word. I will continue to work hard.

I just finished half of the long review and the joint card of Jinshou and Dushou is gone. This is the first time I write it, so I don't give you face. Just wait, I will definitely write you a long review when I come back from my trip. Long face.

I really like the tone of this article. I'm looking forward to the next plot. Come on, author.

(⊙V⊙) Well, this is a mystery, come on