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This story is told mainly from two perspectives: the protagonist, Shimizu Riki, and Arai Masashi. There are also perspectives from other characters. The plot doesn't involve the original storyline, but follows the same timeline, from starting school to the regional tournament and the Kanto Tournament. Most of the story isn't about tennis, except for the protagonist's match against Atobe. Just so you know, this is a gentle, low-conflict story. If that sounds interesting, give it a try. [I feel like there are a few cute moments in the story that are worth poking fun at.]
The story begins after the protagonist has already lost his powerful skill. Most of it is a quiet account of his life after losing that skill, while also explaining why he lost it. [It's explained in the story, though I don't know if anyone will figure it out.] [The powerful skill = tennis]
The author would also like to thank everyone who managed to read the whole book.
Here's a bonus picture for everyone, drawn by the author. Isn't it lovely?
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It's quite interesting. It would be nice if it was NP. By the way, what does this unclear extra chapter mean? In fact, you, the author, just want to be perfunctory, right? = =
Haha QUQ I feel so tired that I don't like it. . . By the way, was the mother the one responsible for the kidnapping? Then the protagonist's health became poor? The meaning of the title is that the protagonist is actually Satoki and her mother =, =??!!
Why did it end? I really don't understand... (++)~ I'm so dizzy
Why did it end? I really don't understand... (++)~ I'm so dizzy
Why did it end? I really don't understand... (++)~ I'm so dizzy
Why did it end? I really don't understand... (++)~ I'm so dizzy
Thumbs up for the CP-free ending!
It was very unpleasant to watch. One moment they said that the protagonist would show great power, and the other moment they said that the protagonist was a fake master who was actually very weak, chirping and very pretentious 13 Originally the gag was quite cute, Arai being the protagonist was also very novel, and the story was pretty good too. But the sense of mystery the author wanted to create was very artificial, like a beautiful face being ruined by a stylist. In short, the article is too fluent and uncomfortable to read.
Your writing is really good, I haven't seen a fan with such good writing for a long time. It's a pity that the villain's IQ is a bit flawed and hard to understand - is Shimizu Atobe's younger brother? Is he really not able to play anymore, or is he not playing because Masashi is unhappy? Who was he in his previous life? . . . . . . . It turned out that I was very excited when I read about 30 chapters, but by the end I was completely dizzy. . . . . . So sad and curious!!!! Solve Solve Solve!!!! I feel like there's not enough ambiguity between the older brother and younger brother~~ But it's really a good article!!
The end?!!! This is unscientific!!!!! Σ<(っ =°Д °)っ!!!!!!!!!!