Wherever you find yourself in your youth, there will always be plenty of people willing to walk beside you. People of all kinds, lives in every shade, come together like the seven colors of light. In the end, a rainbow may not always appear, but they will become a beam of white light, illuminating every path you should take.
Just like Tong Yan. Even if all they did was pass each other by, she was already content that she had met Ling Luobing in her youth.
"Thank you, Ling Luobing," she murmured softly, tilting her head up. Little did she know that the happiness she had long been waiting for was already behind her. All she had to do was turn around.
The writing is good, keep up the good work!
Please describe more! But the overall story is quite good, so there should be no problem in writing it down... Don't give up, don't give up. A more serious problem is that JJ smoked again, and I can't read some chapters - Come on, think more about it, it will probably be better
Sorry, your article only has 10,000 words, and the plot has not been fully developed, so I can only briefly comment... The writing style is very smooth, but it seems unsatisfactory at the beginning. When I read the first chapter, I felt confused. I personally think that the background should be explained. Instead of just starting the narrative, it will make the reader confused. The whole article feels a bit like keeping a diary, not like writing a novel. The writing style of each chapter is very smooth, but the connecting points between the chapters are much weaker. Since it is about love, you still need to pay more attention to the protagonist's inner activities. It is difficult to promote the development of the plot with plain narrative dialogue. But no matter what, the overall writing idea is still very good. It would be nice to improve it a little bit. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗