
Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils: Autumn Water Returns
天龙之再临秋水
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- Ancient Era
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- 13y ago
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Although, the Xiaoyao sect's martial arts are as advanced as Li Qiushui's and they are not afraid of poison. Refer to Ding Chunqiu's original words.
I really can't stand it anymore and I really want to give up. I have always liked Li Qiushui in Tianlong, and I have great expectations for this article. There is no doubt that the protagonist should be a domineering person, the type who would rather let me betray the world than let the world betray me. However, Li Qiushui in the author's article was actually harmed by Li Canghai to the point where his family was destroyed. Just forget it. After that, I have been waiting to see how Qiu Shui will take revenge on these two idiots Wu Yazi and Li Canghai. But the author's Li Canghai and Wu Yazi are completely the NC of Grandma Qiong Yao~~~ Not only were they not abused, but they also made people very angry! ! ! ! Qiu Shui should have greatly disfigured Li Canghai, had her tortured, and then lost her limbs! Then he teamed up with Wu Xingyun to abolish Wu Yazi's martial arts and oust him from the position of leader~~~~Oh oh oh oh~ This is how awesome I am~~ Are there any cool articles? Is there any passion? Are there people who abuse scumbag men? Is there any way to abuse white lotus? Hey hey hey hey~~~It's a pity that the author has completely had a seizure~~~~~I can only do the above plot by myself Is Li Qiushui really someone who would tolerate such grievances? Author, you are the mother of a bitch and a bitch! ! ! You are completely torturing Li Qiu Shui! Qiu Shui's domineering style? Rebirth of Goldfinger Nirvana? There is no magic horse Sister and her friends are completely desperate Autumn is coming~~~You should be reborn again! This time you don't get any protagonist benefits at all~~
I abandoned the article after seeing this chapter. The spirit of writing a long novel is commendable, but the conflict is not strong. Various things are slowly laid out. It is understandable at the beginning, but there is no big conflict or big scene in the third third. The heroine who has everything is smooth sailing, the readers can't afford to hurt it. Can the pace be faster, delete some of the slow unfolding, and start directly from the cross-section of the conflict? The above is my humble opinion. Come on, fellow author. The writing is actually pretty good. I'm not a noob at all. I can't make a show. Well, thank you for your hard work.
The author is not writing about a hundred-year-old witch, but a yellow-haired girl. The winner of the palace fight, if this is the case, then the bones have rotted away, so he was already a great person. After being reborn, there is no need to open any cheats, and he is also an extremely awesome person. We all know that there is a big disaster in the family, but it is rare that someone can still be leisurely and leisurely. Moreover, it is impossible to say that Li Qiushui has no objection to Li Canghai. It's not uncommon for a man to stab his brother for the sake of a woman, and it's not uncommon for a woman to turn her best sisters against each other for the sake of a man. Moreover, Li Qiushui also heard what Li Canghai said to Huang Shang and Wu Yazi. Even if they were sisters from the same mother, to be honest, they didn't spend much time together. When it came to feelings, they didn't necessarily have such a thing. The loss depends on whose hands it is. This kind of person, who has hundreds of years of life experience and is excellent in martial arts, medical skills, and poison making, is actually being tricked by such a simple calculation. Personally, I feel that people who have experienced darkness can no longer be pure white. They will always leave some way out for themselves, so that's what the old fox says. I prefer to believe that human nature is inherently evil, let alone the Empress Dowager of Xixia. The author can look at his article from the beginning to see if he can discover anything.
If Huang Shang is Wu Yazi's second best, I don't know what the author's point is in changing the male protagonist. You might as well let the female protagonist marry a barbecued pork. I really like Da Da Da's novel, but if the plot develops and Huang Shang plays the same role as Wu Yazi, I don't think there is any need to read it. Just read the original work = =
Miss Li is so popular with her master, and her martial arts skills are the best among the three disciples, why did she pass the mastership to that piece of shit Toothless! Moreover, Master likes Miss Li so much, and he can see Wu Tooth Zi's capriciousness and Chao Sansi Si's heart everywhere! This is unreasonable! ! As for Miss Li, she had won the fight for a husband and had lived a long life. Why was she so naive that she was harmed by Li Er? I knew in my previous life that this thing was nothing, but in this life I still protected it at every turn! Raise a selfish white-eyed wolf who will rebel at the sight of sex! You can eat a hundred beans without feeling too fishy, and you can hurt someone once, but you actually treat that bitch as your sister!
I deeply feel that Li Canghai and Wu Yazi are a perfect match! ! ! ! Definitely a match! Scumbag and bitch! !
Complete bird sahua
Why is there no content? Didn't the author add it =-O
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