The Forest of Trees

The plot has not yet unfolded, so I will just comment on the language of this chapter. The author seems to like language description very much. Throughout the article, most of the detailed descriptions are language. In terms of language description, in my opinion, the most important things are two points: life-like and concise. As for the daily life, I personally think it's okay. Some of the wording is a bit stiff (such as the hotel staff's random thoughts); in summary, a lot of Manager He's scenes that the author made to highlight the special identity of the protagonist seem to be lacking in simplicity, and there are obvious traces of artificiality. Generally speaking, there are not many flaws, except for a small suggestion: when there are men and women in a group, just use "they" as the subject.