…
Our love
Once it’s gone, it won’t come back
Even now
I’m still waiting quietly
Our love
I understand
Has become a burden to you
But I’ll never
Let go
The last bit of warmth
The warmth you gave me
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P.S. I just realized that “balcony” really doesn’t quite fit... so I changed it to “rooftop terrace”... I also revised a few things... It might be better to read it again...
Uh... This section looks a bit like the one in "There Will Be Angels to Love You for Me"...
Not bad, keep up the good work!