[Reborn!] Memoirs of a Life in Ruins

Hahahaha, isn't this plagiarized? The author is great

I was so excited about the last chapter that I forgot to rate it orz, so I'll make up one.

555 Did you fall in love with this little cold article~

In this chapter, Tsunayoshi's boy's sweet dreams talk about QvQ

I was tortured to the point of tears! ! QQ And today I suddenly discovered that the author's cover and [fate/zero] Tsunayoshi are going home! The picture is the same~~

If possible, I want to wait with you until a flower blooms One· Let me tell you a story. This story is very long. This story is very short. Tow· That day, she huddled in the dark and humid space, and the coldness spread across her body again. The door that had been closed all year round opened that day, and what greeted her was the dazzling and warm sunshine, and him who was like the sun. Canaan. He called her. He said his name was Sawada Tsunayoshi. The sun came too quickly, and the girl was as frightened as a captured beast. People are greedy. Once they have something, they want more, and then more, and more. He is a bright sunshine in her lonely world. From then on, he was Da Kong and she was Da Kong's shadow. What the sky cannot accomplish, the shadow will make up for it. If the sky is not willing to be stained with blood, then the shadow will bear the responsibility. She lurks where no one can see her. The incident happened so quickly that the young man was caught off guard. The successive deaths of the guardians connect everything related to the guardians. Later, he and she were left. In the end she was the only one left. ——Canaan, stay alive. ——Stay alive and protect the ring. ——Except for you, I have nothing to lose. Finally, her big empty. Broken. Three· I count every step you gave me, and I dare not forget each one. Be careful. The memory will not be lost, she will only be hidden and forgotten inadvertently. I no longer dare to ask for a happy ending, as long as you are well. I told a story to the children in the orphanage. It seemed that I had never walked an honest journey with you. I think if there was no such order, I would definitely save you. No ifs, no ifs. Your first order to me was so cruel. Have you ever thought about how I will live? Have you ever thought about whether I want to live or not? You are always so gentle. Four· In the cracks of time, she quietly waited for a flower to bloom. Alone, waiting. She made wishes to God again and again. I want to wait for a flower to bloom with you, even if I spend the rest of my life in exchange for your blooming. She said, I am a coward and cannot afford to wait. Five· Hush, be quiet. The story ends here. Maybe the door to a new world will open. This is another story. This is my greatest optimism. May all be well, Amen. Six· My IQ can only think of this. Don't dislike the author, he's a tough guy

Okay, I obviously feel very sad, but I just can't cry...

This is a place where you must first apologize before placing an order. [Hide your face] I'm sorry for dragging out my single QQ for two days! Well, this is my second short and long review. I still have a headache with this type of review. Please feel free to criticize me if you don't review it well =w= Now let's get down to the main topic (actually, it's just ordinary chatter and face-covering). In short-story tutoring fan fiction, it is a relatively common pattern to use Bailan's destruction of the world as the background. The joint text is basically a combination of the basic background decided by everyone and the characters chosen by each. The plot logic and background setting of a short story can be summarized in one or two sentences, and more emphasis is placed on a certain or several amplified emotions conveyed in the text. Or maybe it's just a certain episode that the author wants to write, and the corresponding setting is derived from it. The usual pattern for this type of article is that the plot is not very demanding, but the author has relatively high requirements for grasping the atmosphere of the scene, and pays more attention to the artistic conception of the article than the climax. Therefore, the setting of the background and the joint text of the original characters limits the freedom of each author to a certain extent. How to write the semi-mandatory couplet in the style you are most familiar with and combine your own setting with the initial setting is the most difficult hurdle for this type of article. I feel that in this article written by the author, there is a certain conflict between the setting of the heroine and the tragic setting of world destruction. I learned from the private chat that the girl is an author who loves strong women. Although the feminist Tanzi Meng has the setting of the heroine becoming a god, if it is destined to be a tragedy, a strong woman will mean extreme aggrievedness, which is not pleasing on the whole. And the plot that the author girl caters to for the combination of the two is "Tsunayoshi's order", this... Hide my face, to be honest, I don't like Tsunayoshi's Q mouth Q in the girl's article Probably the girl kept reminding herself that what she was writing was a tragedy (Tanzi guessed that this was also one of the initial settings of the joint article?), So the atmosphere of this article was always low and gloomy from the beginning. The tragic factors throughout the article are the deaths of people around Tsunayoshi. From the opening scene, there are the deaths of Kurom, Rambo, Kyoko, Koharu, and Nana's mother. Among the five deaths, Kyoko is the only one who focuses on describing Tsunayoshi's psychology. The others are briefly mentioned in a summary narrative. What this bias in description tells the reader is not "how important Kyoko is", but more importantly "other people are not as important as Kyoko". ——My prejudice against Tsunayoshi in the article starts from here. Let's talk about Tsunayoshi's feelings for Canaan. The emotional line of this article is relatively clear from the beginning. Tsunayoshi treats Canaan differently. However, I think this "difference" is that he needs Canaan's company and relies on Canaan from a spiritual level, similar to the feeling of the last life-saving straw for a drowning person. ——But in fact, whether in reality or in theory, a drowning person will never be saved by the existence of a straw. ——There is a feeling of "I know you can't save me, but I can pretend that you can." When it comes to emotions, it can be completely replaced by another way of saying "I know I don't love you, but I can pretend that I love you." Tsunayoshi in the article gave me such a feeling, so I didn't like it and couldn't like it. My overall feeling when reading the article is that it is relatively pessimistic. This pessimism does not come from the heroine, but from Tsunayoshi. There are more psychological descriptions of Tsunayoshi in the article than of the heroine, and even most of the tragic atmosphere in the article comes from Tsunayoshi's emotions. The depressed mood lasts from the beginning to the end, which is a straight line. The existence of the heroine is to bring Tsuna back to a parallel level when he is at his lowest point. There has never been a lively and jumping rhythm. In a private chat, I talked with the girl about the climax of the article. This "climax" does not only exist in the novel, it should also exist in the short film. But the emphasis of the two is different: the climax of the long story lies in the development of the plot; while the climax of the short story lies in the change of the atmosphere of the article. Personally, I think tragedy is touching because of its shocking power. Compared with a consistently low atmosphere, a sudden drop from a high to a high point is more capable of stimulating readers' emotions. For example: letting Vongola fail when he is only the last step away from victory will have more impact than leading to failure step by step. Well, of course this is just a small suggestion. [Hide face] I sadly turned the serious review into a complete chatty review... I went to tears. Girl, just make do with it! How irresponsible is this? PS. If you have any questions, please feel free to chat with me privately=w= Illegal gathering|Chang Ping PubyTanzi 2013.06.04

Mirror, mirror, the link leads to the wrong direction! Clicking on it is not "Remnant II" but "Remnant Chronicles"

When I saw Platycodon, my first reaction was to think of the miko Platycodon in "Inuyasha" [covering my face, and the scene suddenly became spartan. Mirror, I really didn't come here to ruin the atmosphere~ Please forgive my convulsions~