Luo Fu was burning with fever, mumbling in a gentle, dazed voice, "Mom, I had another nightmare... That man is so scary... When are you coming to take me home... Mom, I want to go home..."
Zhang Ningkun slowly withdrew his hand from around her throat, the corners of his mouth curling into a cruel smile. Death was certainly simple. What was terrifying was being worse off than dead. He gently stroked her face with his fingers and leaned close to her ear. "Go home? You can forget about that for the rest of your life. Go to sleep, sweetheart. The good times are still ahead."
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This story is angsty and updates daily. Read with caution!
A companion story to another work.
Theme:
Since it is an open-ended game, I hope that the male and female protagonists can come together and be happy.
Kindness. I just treat them as a family of three.
Since it is an open ending, I hope that the male and female protagonists can come together after going round and round, and I hope they are happy.
When I saw the ending at around 5 o'clock in the evening, I really felt like vomiting three liters of blood. . . This. . . In the previous chapter, Xiao Wu only appeared briefly, but at the end he suddenly appeared as the male protagonist. . Forget it, the extra chapter has an open ending. . . Why should it be so baffling? . .
I think she will be with Brother Kun~~Yeah!
Before the last nonsensical ending, I had imagined three endings. Let's start with the first one, which is more ridiculous and reversed. When Brother Zhang was heartbroken and about to leave, Luofu suddenly looked up to the sky and laughed for three minutes, saying that her long-standing heartlessness was actually revenge for his previous scum. Then she said with deep affection and tears that she actually still loved him. So the two of them HE, Xiao Wu vomited blood and was taken advantage of.
The second way is to follow the natural development of the previous plot. Brother Ning Kun is alone. Luo Fu seems to be really pitiful about him, so she decides to let him raise her daughter, and she and Xiao Wu fall in love with each other. Although this is not pleasant, it is still a way to die, everyone thinks so.
The third type is a little more BT, but barely watchable. Xiao Wu was hit by a car and died~! (Hahaha, I swear I don't hate him.) Luo Fu was devastated, and brother Ning Kun stayed by her side silently and cared about her. After three or five years, time and strength, and driven by her daughter's family affection, she was finally moved to be with brother Ning Kun. Hahahaha~!! (Although I think according to Luo Fu's current character, even if Xiao Wu dies, it is unlikely that she will be with brother Ning Kun.)
Either way is better than the messy one now~!!!!
Come and vote, which one do you like???
Next, let's talk about your thoughts on this article.
First of all, the so-called abusive writing is only superficial, and the abuse is superficial. To make a romance sad, you must first have a word of love. But in the second chapter, the female protagonist has no feelings for the male protagonist, and she still abuses her~! (The author wants to say that Brother Ning Kun is not the male protagonist, but in fact Xiao Wu is, so I just want to say $%^@##$!@%^!!!!!!).
Secondly, even if Zhang Ningkun is an important character, his character and psychological portrayal are absolutely pale and failed. The first chapter describes his nostalgia and memories of the past in large sections, but why is it that once Luo Fu fell in love with him, the most important and most critical conflict, confused struggle, deliberately ignored her, and finally couldn't let go of her, this series of wonderful inner dramas were all gone???? Everyone unanimously threw him into the dregs.
But in fact, in my opinion, his love is no less than that of Xiao Wu, and his love is quite persistent. Even though Luofu had hurt him so much, despised him so much, and looked down on him so much. No matter how rationally he insisted on continuing to take revenge on her, in the end he still couldn't let go of the original love in his heart.
He loved Luo Fu from the age of seventeen to thirty. From the willful Luo Fu to the domineering Luo Fu to the calm and gentle Luo Fu to the independent and strong Luo Fu. It never changed at any moment~! It's just that there were too many people, too many things, and too much hate entangled in it. He was confused and struggled, but he didn't expect to miss it.
In comparison, I can only say that Luofu's feelings are really self-protective. She doesn't like people who hurt her, but she likes people who are nice to her. Oh, if a girl can really make such a rational and clear choice about love, then her love for Brother Zhang is really an illusion, not love! (Poor Brother Zhang, I think Luofu has never loved you.)
Sometimes I reflect on whether girls also have a desire to stay together when watching Xiaoyan. Once they identify a male protagonist, they hope that he will be with the female protagonist. No matter how much they sympathize with the male lead, in the end they always hope that the male and the female will be together.
In the end, in any case, Luo Fu's self-growth process was well written. If the whole article could be written around this theme, it might be better.
Xiao Wu's love is healthy and warm, while brother Ning Kun's love is violent but persistent. Love itself is not wrong.
No matter how you choose the heroine or how the author writes it, you all have to follow your own heart. In fact, there is no right or wrong.
Judging from the foreshadowing in the extra episode, the heroine and Zhang are asked to be together. It seems that Xiao Wu is cheating on her.
Hey, I don't really want to see such a plot
Xiao Wu is by far the brightest in the whole book, representing purity, sunshine, and a positive image. If he goes dark. . . Can't imagine
I would rather they broke up because they understood each other
I actually saw jojo,, although I just went straight to see what the last chapter was about
I believe Luofu is still with Zhang
Since it is an open-ended game, I hope that the male and female protagonists can come together and be happy.
Kindness. I just treat them as a family of three.
Since it is an open ending, I hope that the male and female protagonists can come together after going round and round, and I hope they are happy.
When I saw the ending at around 5 o'clock in the evening, I really felt like vomiting three liters of blood. . . This. . . In the previous chapter, Xiao Wu only appeared briefly, but at the end he suddenly appeared as the male protagonist. . Forget it, the extra chapter has an open ending. . . Why should it be so baffling? . .
I think she will be with Brother Kun~~Yeah!
Before the last nonsensical ending, I had imagined three endings. Let's start with the first one, which is more ridiculous and reversed. When Brother Zhang was heartbroken and about to leave, Luofu suddenly looked up to the sky and laughed for three minutes, saying that her long-standing heartlessness was actually revenge for his previous scum. Then she said with deep affection and tears that she actually still loved him. So the two of them HE, Xiao Wu vomited blood and was taken advantage of. The second way is to follow the natural development of the previous plot. Brother Ning Kun is alone. Luo Fu seems to be really pitiful about him, so she decides to let him raise her daughter, and she and Xiao Wu fall in love with each other. Although this is not pleasant, it is still a way to die, everyone thinks so. The third type is a little more BT, but barely watchable. Xiao Wu was hit by a car and died~! (Hahaha, I swear I don't hate him.) Luo Fu was devastated, and brother Ning Kun stayed by her side silently and cared about her. After three or five years, time and strength, and driven by her daughter's family affection, she was finally moved to be with brother Ning Kun. Hahahaha~!! (Although I think according to Luo Fu's current character, even if Xiao Wu dies, it is unlikely that she will be with brother Ning Kun.) Either way is better than the messy one now~!!!! Come and vote, which one do you like??? Next, let's talk about your thoughts on this article. First of all, the so-called abusive writing is only superficial, and the abuse is superficial. To make a romance sad, you must first have a word of love. But in the second chapter, the female protagonist has no feelings for the male protagonist, and she still abuses her~! (The author wants to say that Brother Ning Kun is not the male protagonist, but in fact Xiao Wu is, so I just want to say $%^@##$!@%^!!!!!!). Secondly, even if Zhang Ningkun is an important character, his character and psychological portrayal are absolutely pale and failed. The first chapter describes his nostalgia and memories of the past in large sections, but why is it that once Luo Fu fell in love with him, the most important and most critical conflict, confused struggle, deliberately ignored her, and finally couldn't let go of her, this series of wonderful inner dramas were all gone???? Everyone unanimously threw him into the dregs. But in fact, in my opinion, his love is no less than that of Xiao Wu, and his love is quite persistent. Even though Luofu had hurt him so much, despised him so much, and looked down on him so much. No matter how rationally he insisted on continuing to take revenge on her, in the end he still couldn't let go of the original love in his heart. He loved Luo Fu from the age of seventeen to thirty. From the willful Luo Fu to the domineering Luo Fu to the calm and gentle Luo Fu to the independent and strong Luo Fu. It never changed at any moment~! It's just that there were too many people, too many things, and too much hate entangled in it. He was confused and struggled, but he didn't expect to miss it. In comparison, I can only say that Luofu's feelings are really self-protective. She doesn't like people who hurt her, but she likes people who are nice to her. Oh, if a girl can really make such a rational and clear choice about love, then her love for Brother Zhang is really an illusion, not love! (Poor Brother Zhang, I think Luofu has never loved you.) Sometimes I reflect on whether girls also have a desire to stay together when watching Xiaoyan. Once they identify a male protagonist, they hope that he will be with the female protagonist. No matter how much they sympathize with the male lead, in the end they always hope that the male and the female will be together. In the end, in any case, Luo Fu's self-growth process was well written. If the whole article could be written around this theme, it might be better. Xiao Wu's love is healthy and warm, while brother Ning Kun's love is violent but persistent. Love itself is not wrong. No matter how you choose the heroine or how the author writes it, you all have to follow your own heart. In fact, there is no right or wrong.
Judging from the foreshadowing in the extra episode, the heroine and Zhang are asked to be together. It seems that Xiao Wu is cheating on her. Hey, I don't really want to see such a plot Xiao Wu is by far the brightest in the whole book, representing purity, sunshine, and a positive image. If he goes dark. . . Can't imagine I would rather they broke up because they understood each other
I actually saw jojo,, although I just went straight to see what the last chapter was about
Wow, that comment from three or four years ago.