Hello, Natural Enemy

I miss it so much, I read it when I was in elementary school

Do you want to be so sensational? ! Tears came out of my eyes::>_

Throw flowers, take them away...

Aqiao is so cute! ! ! ! Why do I say "cute" in every sentence...

I have always loved stories about childhood sweethearts, not for anything else but for those very real little innocences. "Teacher, he is my natural enemy." It reminds me of that sentence for no reason, enemies. How beautiful, the sweet and sour taste, and the caring that comes from my heart. When love is not awake, it goes deep. Precisely because the "enemy" who accompanied Ye Xi was Wu Tian Enemy who had grown up without any gaps, she never thought that one day this person would change his identity. He is him, he knows her menarche, her preferences, and her habits, and then he cares and cooperates. It's like a part of life, he should be there, otherwise where would he be? Ye Xi's ignorance and kindness caused many twists and turns for the two children, and the handsome Si Nan (why did Mao know him so well?) And the poor Zhi Qiao. Perhaps it is precisely because I have never experienced any ups and downs in love that I am so selfless and humble. But in love, especially in mutual love, humility must be the sting that hurts the other person. Fortunately, I was able to repent before I got too deep. Although the novel is finished, although Bubble said this is her last campus novel. But I always believe that the characters in the story will follow us along in the story. Hmm. My favorite childhood sweetheart abuse stories. I'll write something next time~ Finally, I want to say, I love open endings~~\\(≧▽≦)/~La La La

A belated congratulations to Xiaosha. I was busy with school admissions a few days ago, and I just downloaded your novel, haha.

Just here to spread flowers

Natural enemies always hit home with just one sentence! The last ending is so meaningful that it reminds me of all the good things!

The natural enemy has just returned, what should Aqiao do? . . . .

I'm a little irritable today, so I just wanted to come to your place to relax for a while. Following along, it was really the first time I followed a serialized article from beginning to end. Come and sit here, it's comfortable and refreshing, just the way your writing gives me the feeling, with the fragrance of green grass. Let me make a request first, I want a side story of the natural enemy coaxing the child! ! ! I love watching daddy coaxing his kids the most. Let's talk about this novel. Probably because of my age, I rarely read campus-themed novels. Maybe it's because I've passed that psychological stage. Therefore, when I first came to talk to Wen'er, I really just wanted to encourage our little Momo. But as I followed chapter by chapter, I was moved by the light refreshingness of the article. I have said that Momo's writing is like delicate and soft foam, which can give your nerves the right kind of relaxation and massage when you are tired. This feeling comes not only from the purity and beauty in the author's heart, but also from her insistence on this simplicity. In today's Internet trend of all-consuming sex, Momo's writing is so simple and clean. This is also in line with the theme of this article, the taste of first love. I still remember that little Ye Ye foolishly tried to test the natural enemy with a kiss. He knew nothing about it and just thought that lips touching lips meant kissing. However, this kind of kiss can still make people's hearts throb. This is first love. You don't need too many skills, don't include any accidents, just be close to your heart. This episode brought back a lot of memories for me. I remember a best friend who was in love once told me quietly, tell me when you are in love and I will teach you how to kiss. At that time, I was really surprised and looked at her shyly, and I was shocked to realize that kissing was not what it "seemed" to be. Of course, kissing can only be taught by your boyfriend. Therefore, when the natural enemy told Xiao Yezi that your kiss was not a real kiss, I smiled knowingly. Of course, there are many small details like this in the whole article, and it is these sincere small details that attracted me and moved me. In terms of language, Momo is also very talented. She pinches mosquitoes between her brows, kneels down for instant noodles, etc. With her little humor and wisdom, you can't help but smile knowingly when you look at her, just like reminiscing about her vivid youth. Of course, Momo also accurately grasped the psychology of the characters in some of the dialogues. For example, when Xiao Yezi went to accompany Simon because of guilt, the natural enemy said "Do you care?" It makes people feel nervous. These are also the writing potential for Momo to grow into an excellent author. In terms of the development of the entire story, Momo starts from love, interweaving memories and reality to tell a story about childhood sweethearts, which is also a relatively successful and reasonable structure. The story is told completely and the context is clear, which is also her advantage. Okay, the above are all advantages, but there are always some problems. Although my own writing is not very good, I still have some experience in commenting on other people's writing, so you have to be mentally prepared, the time to make a brick is here. First of all, Momo should strengthen the narrative rhythm, pay attention to refining the most convincing plots, and then omit or abbreviate some less relevant character dialogues. This is very important. Secondly, in terms of narrative method, you can design it more delicately, without telling it clearly from beginning to end in one line. Sometimes, appropriate cutting and supplementary narration is a good way to deal with it. Third, you can be more unique in plot settings. Actually, I don't think the appearance of the second male lead and his past with Xiao Yezi attracted me because there are too many similar stories. To sum up, I suggest you study Gu Xijue's writing. She is very outstanding in narrative rhythm and narrative skills. Okay, the above is given to you as your final gift. I believe that as your experience increases and your writing accumulates, your writing will become more and more exciting. Looking forward to your next book. Momo, come on!