The Appraiser of the Future

I persisted in reading it with the setting of traveling through the future to identify objects on the earth + pseudo. □The protagonist is invincible... So sad ~ The structure is not good and it was unfinished in the end. Many plans ended inexplicably… The author's thinking is out of the ordinary +10086

The setting is good, but the continuity of the plot is problematic. Hope to improve further.

Although the first twenty chapters are not very mature, they are due to various cute elements: facial paralysis attack, cute animals and plants, future interstellar, time travel archeology, school life, brainless relatives... I still watched it, why did a huge gap suddenly unfold before entering VIP? Embarrassed Fight until you leave the earth. Is this Dragon Ball? Embarrassed Fighting until I fainted again and again, and there were also different dimensions and cracks in time and space... This must be the unfolding of God! Embarrassed Suddenly someone else appeared. This must be a mistake. Although some people tried to explain what happened at that time, the author's handling was too clumsy. I couldn't understand it. I couldn't figure it out. It was completely unexpected... Is the author trying to save us a few bucks by not buying VIP? Embarrassed I can't figure out why I suddenly jumped from the campus god of the future to a different space and even outside the earth~ Not to mention that the protagonist doesn't know where he is, I don't know where the plot is. Typing so many words is to commemorate the time spent before me... ORZ

When reading, I generally prefer to be immersed in a specific environment to feel comfortable, such as a quiet library or some soothing background music. I read this article based on the settings. . . . After two chapters, my mind was in chaos, as if I had teleported from a quiet library to a noisy vegetable market. The vegetable market has many varieties and stalls, and many people are noisy. The same is true in this article. There are very few conversations that are normal and smooth. They are all miscellaneous, with N people intervening in the middle, but there is no connection at all. . . The same goes between chapters. I'm not sure if it's about jumping thinking or something. It's because the author mixed up too many things at once, with many threads and no main line. The writing can't control the direction, and even the protagonist doesn't know what he wants to do. Just like the mix-and-match style of clothing, how big is a person's body? Mix and match more than 3 elements to create a different look immediately. The same goes for writing articles. This article obviously mixes elements beyond the author's control. What a mess. The dialogue is noisy, the abilities are confusing, and the characters are vague. However, the author still has some imagination. If he can absorb all the mixed elements and transform them into his own thing, there should be good progress.

Why can't I understand it? It's already been chapter 31 and I still don't know what the author is writing.

I still don't know which OTZ Xiao Gong is. Besides, there are bugs in your novel. I hope it can be corrected~~ Come on!

The plots of this chapter and the previous chapter are not connected at all. It's so confusing. I have no desire to read at all...

I admit, I'm broken. Come on big

It was Hu Guixian who fell in love. . .

I think of those specially made scented books