The Primordial Era: I Am Yuanshi

I silently clicked on this book, habitually thinking of looking for the main critic or the main critic in the book reviews, and then I found that it was without CP. I also saw that the book reviews were full of criticism. Finally, I checked the update time. I walked silently for a long time. Suddenly, I felt that the author is really awesome. You can continue to write so many criticisms. Nowadays, authors are too glass-hearted. Let alone negative points. Even the key points may be broken. So for the author's persistence, I should give 2 points anyway. Although I don't like this book, please give it a try, so I silently came back to rate it.

Yes, the author will update it soon. By the way, who is the CP of Yuanshi?

After reading this article, there are so many flaws that I don't know how to complain about it.

After reading the first two chapters, I silently turned to the last one to comment: The introduction is different from the article at the beginning. The introduction says that the three Qing brothers were born together in the prehistoric era, but the protagonist in the article was from the beginning of the chaotic period. Is it really okay to jump like this? Moreover, the protagonist was born in Chaos, which is different from the beginning. I don't think the protagonist is willing to be a brother to Pangu's son Sanqing and still be the second child. This price drop is a bit too harsh. From father to son, no one can accept it. Moreover, the protagonist has traveled through time, and his thinking is even more unacceptable. Moreover, the protagonist and Pangu are brothers and later become Pangu's son. This sense of violation indicates an inability to accept.

The protagonist prefers the East, but isn't the West also transformed by Pangu?

He is alone, not cumin.

Please choose to delete it directly or just read the second paragraph from the top depending on your ability to bear it. If you continue to read it after reading this paragraph, it is deemed that you have decided to bear all the consequences (:3 Don't talk about the overlord clause, I'm really afraid that something will happen if your glass heart can't stand it. I don't quite understand what the protagonist is so proud of... His power is incredible, and his character is just a brainless person who enjoys himself too much. The first and most important drawback is that the characters are completely broken. It is completely unimaginable that Sanqing would use foul language. What you wrote is a fan, not original. Please respect them and thank you. I don't ask you for research, but if you don't even check the basic information, it's just your imagination. Are you being too irresponsible to the readers? (I have never seen an author who is as ugly as you when I read the article. You feel very happy, but I think it is very unqualified. I always thought that the articles written by new authors were too ugly, but now that I have you, I think they work too hard and are too cute. You are a cancer that hurts my eyes.) Secondly, the protagonist who travels through time-traveling does not know how to practice and does not have the mentality of a normal person. Does he have to rely on the endless golden leg hair of you, a relative, to get ahead? How is that different from the third-rate Jack Su? Yy Moderate is good, excessive is nauseating. Up to now, your outlook on life is still as crooked as that of a teenager in middle school... (If I misjudge your age, just pretend I didn't say it. I would just advise you not to write an article for now, and then talk about your outlook on things correctly, so as not to turn into a black history.) The third reason is that I don't know whether you were in the pure love zone for Chinese Language and Literature in primary school, or you have never been to Jinjiang? Even if you don't want to change the label, you can still indicate it in the copy =_, = Who are you trying to trick by not saying anything? If the writing is not good, it can be improved, but if the character is really bad :), then the root problem is basically unsolved. I don't have any feelings about this kind of writing when you put it at a certain point. After all, except for a few parts that are particularly well-written and have abnormal and distorted views, the rest of the style is just like that. But if you put it on the Jinjiang River, it's like a pile among thousands of flowers →_→ I have been reading this article for almost half the time I have lived, but this is the first time I am so angry. I couldn't control myself and posted a negative review. Don't worry, I'll take a detour next time I see you (≧▽≦)/~Goodbye

It's been a while since I've updated. Don't give up.

I sweat silently. After writing so much, the author worked very hard.

What about Danmei as promised? Why is there no trace at all?