Captain William's Daughter [Western Crossover]

The heroine must be an idiot. She was born in ** and has been taught since she was a child not to have casual contact with strangers. The heroine is still like this. Her IQ is around 70. She must be mentally retarded

Calling! ! ! ! ! Being a human being must have a beginning and an end! And I don't dislike things written in big letters, I just have to correct them if they are not well written. Who has no shortcomings? Besides, everyone just doesn't like the heroine's character, but the plot is still very good.

Well, when I saw it earlier, I thought you thought it was written by gods from different regions in one place. . . . .

After so many horror movies, the heroine has not grown up at all. What kind of person is she? Still alive! The gold finger is wide enough!

Calling! Please update!

I feel very depressed Watching the heroine keep dressing and dressing, she didn't even have to stop to take a breath in a chapter. I think the heroine will be driven crazy if this continues {driven by the plot rhythm given by the ghost mother++...} This will give the heroine time to think about whether she can live in a positive way, or should she just die or go crazy? ! It's really scary. I'm so scared that I'm a little soft-skinned. I might as well understand this and that.

I don't want to say that the heroine is a noob. I understand that the author wants to write her as an ordinary person. But I really can't feel the growth of the heroine at all. I hope the author will spend more time describing the growth of the heroine and her inner changes instead of focusing on the plot. I am a protagonist controller. The heroine does not need to have strong force, but she must have a positive spirit and reflective qualities (most people have these qualities). Even ordinary people can write lovable stories! Thank you!

I just feel that the heroine is still quite unreliable after traveling through so many worlds. Even ordinary people should be wary. Doesn't she know how to learn some life-saving tricks? Or prepare some killing weapons on you at any time... I really find it strange that since the Golden Compass is so important, why would those NC parties give it to the heroine so easily? He is obviously a person of unknown origin, and there is that staff... ╮(╯▽╰)╭, Except for the devil in the film, everyone else has a bit of NC.

The heroine's mission is to accidentally wreck the protagonist of the horror drama

Oh! Jack Jack Jack I finally saw the emotional scene between the male and female protagonists. .