I've really wanted to read Naruto fanfiction, but there isn't much, so I decided to write some myself.
As the tags say, childhood friends and sweet moments, no angst =V=~
I'll try to finish it by the end of summer. If nothing goes wrong, I'll update daily~
FILE 2 will quote a lot from the original at first. F2C1 is basically all canon (to set up Mai's appearance), so you can skip it. C2 also covers a large part of the original (to bridge the story); the heroine probably only appears in the last few hundred words, and all quotes will be identified. That's all.
P.S. I've always felt that a heroine without some ability tends to be weak, one who's too passionate tends to be a self-righteous saint, and one who can't act cute has no romantic chemistry. So~ the heroine is capable, a little cold-blooded, and very good at acting cute~ She knows how to hit the right buttons with the people she cares about, so in my version, Big Brother and Xiaolian and the others accept her from their very first meeting =V=.
Theme:
What is this writing about? How is it different from the original work? Is it just a sideshow? Is there nothing?
I've finished reading it. What the hell? Did you spend a whole vacation writing such a crappy ending? It's funny, it's equivalent to slipping into the original novel. The heroine appears and is either arrogant or sleeping, tired of being around Lin and Nalu. Then the plot is messed up for the sake of completion without any intention, and there are no details at all. If it is written like this, it is not as good as those pitfalls.
Mai hurt Lin and got married to the heroine Na Lu Liangzi, right?
Mai wonders if Eugene is still Naru. Is Eugene dead now?
Nalu, you are broken. You are so exaggerated that even the heroine can see that you are a fake and ask if you are real...
It was so hard to find an article about a fantasy prince, but it collapsed like this. My heart was broken and I couldn't pick it up...
Wan Wan?
The only thing I know about is Huanwan in Huang Yi's Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty
Where can Gu Long be found?
Is this the end? ! …
Why does Mao Mu have a side story? ? ?
It's over, I feel like I still have more to say. . . .
The writing is pretty good, very good
What is this writing about? How is it different from the original work? Is it just a sideshow? Is there nothing?
I've finished reading it. What the hell? Did you spend a whole vacation writing such a crappy ending? It's funny, it's equivalent to slipping into the original novel. The heroine appears and is either arrogant or sleeping, tired of being around Lin and Nalu. Then the plot is messed up for the sake of completion without any intention, and there are no details at all. If it is written like this, it is not as good as those pitfalls.
Mai hurt Lin and got married to the heroine Na Lu Liangzi, right?
Mai wonders if Eugene is still Naru. Is Eugene dead now?
Nalu, you are broken. You are so exaggerated that even the heroine can see that you are a fake and ask if you are real... It was so hard to find an article about a fantasy prince, but it collapsed like this. My heart was broken and I couldn't pick it up...
Wan Wan? The only thing I know about is Huanwan in Huang Yi's Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty Where can Gu Long be found?
Is this the end? ! …
Why does Mao Mu have a side story? ? ?
It's over, I feel like I still have more to say. . . .