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This article tells the story of a top killer team who traveled to a dangerous different world, worked hard to become stronger, and eventually grew into a generation of killer masters.
Of course there is no such thing as literature, art, killers, etc. Here!
This article tells the story of an ordinary crayon that is a must-have for every household in the third dimension, traveling to the world of the Internet King, constantly striving for self-improvement (!?) And struggling hard (!?) And finally growing into a generation of... Idiotic good people (!?).
[Second-hand version]
Once upon a time, there was a crayon Xiaoxin. She traveled through time while sleeping.
I fell asleep, fell asleep, woke up, and found that I had traveled through time.
Then she fell into endless tangles.
It's not like Mary Sue is struggling with NP problems.
Instead, they are tangled up in various issues with completely wrong focus.
As a person who wants to be a Mary Sue but is not qualified, as a person who thinks the Virgin Mary is fun but is not suitable,
As a person who has no moral integrity but has his own principles, as a person who cannot play tennis,
As an Adam's apple wrist tie person, as a non-fanatic????
As a kink expert, as a cheerful silly crayon,
As a three-dimensional girl who is a must-have for ordinary families,
As a real three-dimensional girl,
Travel to a place where dandruff is defined as a ghost, chrysanthemums are the national flower, and everyone can jump as high as the house behind them.
She has a very big pear~
The full text has been completed. The finale will be released on Saturday, September 8th at 20:20:20. There will be an extra episode... Probably
This is the first time I have made such a big decision to write a long fanfic and successfully completed it. All kinds of loopholes and shortcomings help me grow. Click on my new article to read it, click on my column to bookmark me, thank you [bow] to those who have been with me, thank you for reading this young article, thank you [bow].
Friendly reminder
1. If you have decided to follow the story and want to know more about the background and premise of the heroine, it is recommended to read Chapter 20 first, then Chapter 12, and then read Chapters 1, 2, and 3~
2. Chapter 20 may make you feel... Um~ ← What is the um feeling? At least you should explain it clearly! Hey!
3. Many of the previous chapters were written in order to catch up with the animation plot. The animation plot was generally written very boringly. Later I discovered it and started to correct it.
4. Absolutely no slander against Her Majesty the Queen! There's no way a good guy like Akei can be used as cannon fodder! Specializing in single line 151 boys. If you don't like it, please go to the upper right corner.
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Conception:
I just came to see my role. There are too many and I am not interested. But I am interested in the main love line of the little manager.
[How to overcome Jinjiang's various methods of not being able to see article updates]
Jinjiang has been suffering from cigarette smoke to a certain extent recently, so I will post my personal research method OJZ to overcome cigarette smoke. Change [www] to [my] in the directory page address to see the author's latest updates. Including copywriting changes, it will be refreshed immediately.
Then click on the new chapter to enter, but then you find that you can't see it again. That's because [my] automatically changed to [www]. At this time, just change it to [my] here.
Or directly click on any chapter on the unupdated table of contents page, change the number of the last chapter in the address bar to the latest chapter number, and change the previous www to my to see it ~
I don't know if you have discovered it before, but if you want to share it, please help promote this article~Thank you>///<If someone has already researched it, just ignore me~[scratching your head and laughing]
P. S: Sometimes the content is not displayed on the content page, but you can still see the new chapter by clicking on the next chapter after the last chapter on the content page. This is considered a minor irritation. For example, when you click on the next chapter, there is Chapter 33, but Chapter 33 OJZ has not been refreshed on my current directory page.
In short, if you change it to my, everyone will be happy and have my wings~!
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Review of "[Internet King] The World Crayon Looks Up to"
I'm sorry that this review has been delayed for so long. All excuses cannot make up for it. I can only say sorry and Xiaoduo bows deeply.
First of all, everyone knows that the first thing that catches the reader's eye is the copy. I can only say that your copy is too long. Although the covers are very good, two such large dark pictures will make people feel creepy. Secondly, let's talk about the text. Seeing the excerpts in the copy can only make people feel the tone of the whole article-joyful. Seeing this, I just hope that the article will not be a noob. In other words, although I have read all the articles by Wang Wang except Mary Sue, I also hope that the article of a novice will have a clear explanation.
Continuing from the above, let's talk about the presentation first. In the first chapter, the author, your writing technique is a little confusing. This means that the difference in click-through rate between the first chapter and the second chapter is more than double, because in addition to the copywriting, the first chapter is very important!
There was a big loophole in the second chapter - [Su Xin swallowed and hesitantly told the story of her life, including what happened the day before the time travel, including her despair in the small park just now, and the surprise of contacting her mother. This sentence made me re-read the first chapter N times to see if I missed it!
At the same time, I feel that Uncle Atobe, my life, accepted Su Xin too quickly. Admittedly, the author's setting is that Su Xin confessed her life experience to Atobe from the beginning. But from the uncle I know, he will not completely disbelieve such ridiculous things. However, we also need to get along. After all, words from people we know well are more acceptable, right? I think it is for this reason that so many authors put the life experience of the heroine later! If you want to tell the truth about time travel at the beginning of meeting, I suggest you explain it more in this regard through dialogue instead of simply mentioning it in one sentence!
I hope you, the author, can take a good look at the above suggestions, because the copywriting and the first chapter are the most important!
Next, the 'Tennis Department Manager', hehe, is definitely a big flaw for Tennis fans! However, this is also the best way to get close to the princes. [I am Su Xin, manager of the men's tennis department in Year 7 Group. Hmm... Height, 150.8. Hello, 151 boy. This sentence is full of spoof meaning, I like it! Actually, I would rather say why not just say my height is 151.2? ? After all, it's cool to be 0.2Cm taller than the 151 boy, right? ? ?
[012. The first episode of the extra chapter × Those Days Traveling Through Time] The order of this chapter, for those who are updated every day and follow articles every day, is better to put it at the front! This way, I won't have the confusion I had in Chapter 2, because flashbacks are really not suitable for fanfics! The narration is pretty good! But it's better not to be too far apart. What do you think, author?
["Pfft hahahahahahaha!!! Little Kelp, you are so cute!" Su Xin suddenly pinched Little Kelp's face and rubbed it from side to side. It's so cute. I really want to throw it into my cupboard as a collection, hahaha! By the way, when I saw the little kelp appeared, I had the same idea as Su Xin! Little kelp is definitely the cutest thing in existence. I feel that Mr. 151, After reading my entire article, doesn't feel that there is much depth in it. There is only one word, it's still awesome! Why don't you, author, change the main plot? Mr. 151 Is too difficult to deal with! The little kelp is still cute. To put it simply, it's more adorable to attack like this! ! !
Finally, I wish Dada a good price and good reviews. If it can be conquered quickly, then I will be even happier~~~Xingxingyaner~~~[Mudi.
——By illegal long comment shop
Produced by Xiaoduo Mo Doudou!
I would say that I was actually kind of expecting the male protagonist to be Atobe.
Hello, author, I am Nu Skin!
From the first paragraph, I was shocked by half of the English!
The protagonist thinks Atobe is good
Very good, very good, Ah Xin, come on - - [I'm going to fill in the holes quickly. As expected, I still can't calm down ==
Said, that hand knife is very suitable for me...
Sure enough, I still like this kind of heroine! Remember the plot and so on, and you won't have that passionate feeling when watching the game! ! ! !
I just came to see my role. There are too many and I am not interested. But I am interested in the main love line of the little manager.
[How to overcome Jinjiang's various methods of not being able to see article updates] Jinjiang has been suffering from cigarette smoke to a certain extent recently, so I will post my personal research method OJZ to overcome cigarette smoke. Change [www] to [my] in the directory page address to see the author's latest updates. Including copywriting changes, it will be refreshed immediately. Then click on the new chapter to enter, but then you find that you can't see it again. That's because [my] automatically changed to [www]. At this time, just change it to [my] here. Or directly click on any chapter on the unupdated table of contents page, change the number of the last chapter in the address bar to the latest chapter number, and change the previous www to my to see it ~ I don't know if you have discovered it before, but if you want to share it, please help promote this article~Thank you>///<If someone has already researched it, just ignore me~[scratching your head and laughing] P. S: Sometimes the content is not displayed on the content page, but you can still see the new chapter by clicking on the next chapter after the last chapter on the content page. This is considered a minor irritation. For example, when you click on the next chapter, there is Chapter 33, but Chapter 33 OJZ has not been refreshed on my current directory page. In short, if you change it to my, everyone will be happy and have my wings~!
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Review of "[Internet King] The World Crayon Looks Up to" I'm sorry that this review has been delayed for so long. All excuses cannot make up for it. I can only say sorry and Xiaoduo bows deeply. First of all, everyone knows that the first thing that catches the reader's eye is the copy. I can only say that your copy is too long. Although the covers are very good, two such large dark pictures will make people feel creepy. Secondly, let's talk about the text. Seeing the excerpts in the copy can only make people feel the tone of the whole article-joyful. Seeing this, I just hope that the article will not be a noob. In other words, although I have read all the articles by Wang Wang except Mary Sue, I also hope that the article of a novice will have a clear explanation. Continuing from the above, let's talk about the presentation first. In the first chapter, the author, your writing technique is a little confusing. This means that the difference in click-through rate between the first chapter and the second chapter is more than double, because in addition to the copywriting, the first chapter is very important! There was a big loophole in the second chapter - [Su Xin swallowed and hesitantly told the story of her life, including what happened the day before the time travel, including her despair in the small park just now, and the surprise of contacting her mother. This sentence made me re-read the first chapter N times to see if I missed it! At the same time, I feel that Uncle Atobe, my life, accepted Su Xin too quickly. Admittedly, the author's setting is that Su Xin confessed her life experience to Atobe from the beginning. But from the uncle I know, he will not completely disbelieve such ridiculous things. However, we also need to get along. After all, words from people we know well are more acceptable, right? I think it is for this reason that so many authors put the life experience of the heroine later! If you want to tell the truth about time travel at the beginning of meeting, I suggest you explain it more in this regard through dialogue instead of simply mentioning it in one sentence! I hope you, the author, can take a good look at the above suggestions, because the copywriting and the first chapter are the most important! Next, the 'Tennis Department Manager', hehe, is definitely a big flaw for Tennis fans! However, this is also the best way to get close to the princes. [I am Su Xin, manager of the men's tennis department in Year 7 Group. Hmm... Height, 150.8. Hello, 151 boy. This sentence is full of spoof meaning, I like it! Actually, I would rather say why not just say my height is 151.2? ? After all, it's cool to be 0.2Cm taller than the 151 boy, right? ? ? [012. The first episode of the extra chapter × Those Days Traveling Through Time] The order of this chapter, for those who are updated every day and follow articles every day, is better to put it at the front! This way, I won't have the confusion I had in Chapter 2, because flashbacks are really not suitable for fanfics! The narration is pretty good! But it's better not to be too far apart. What do you think, author? ["Pfft hahahahahahaha!!! Little Kelp, you are so cute!" Su Xin suddenly pinched Little Kelp's face and rubbed it from side to side. It's so cute. I really want to throw it into my cupboard as a collection, hahaha! By the way, when I saw the little kelp appeared, I had the same idea as Su Xin! Little kelp is definitely the cutest thing in existence. I feel that Mr. 151, After reading my entire article, doesn't feel that there is much depth in it. There is only one word, it's still awesome! Why don't you, author, change the main plot? Mr. 151 Is too difficult to deal with! The little kelp is still cute. To put it simply, it's more adorable to attack like this! ! ! Finally, I wish Dada a good price and good reviews. If it can be conquered quickly, then I will be even happier~~~Xingxingyaner~~~[Mudi. ——By illegal long comment shop Produced by Xiaoduo Mo Doudou!
I would say that I was actually kind of expecting the male protagonist to be Atobe.
Hello, author, I am Nu Skin! From the first paragraph, I was shocked by half of the English!
The protagonist thinks Atobe is good
Very good, very good, Ah Xin, come on - - [I'm going to fill in the holes quickly. As expected, I still can't calm down ==
Said, that hand knife is very suitable for me...
Sure enough, I still like this kind of heroine! Remember the plot and so on, and you won't have that passionate feeling when watching the game! ! ! !