Starcloud, Like the Wind's Eye

Please write other articles in this series qaq

Xing's target was actually not Master Yun. Well, he expressed surprise and breathed a sigh of relief at the same time ^_^ It would be great to have a happy reunion!

So beautiful, I like it, I like it!!!!!!!!

Top Top Top Top I'll push it again, top, top, top, top, top

Um. So this is a belated long review. We are just here to cheer as friends~hehe~ At the beginning, I opened the two articles of Xianren and compared them carefully. How should I put it, I fell in love with this article not because it was finished, but because of its writing. Compared to the other article, the copywriting of this article attracts me more. Although I sometimes don't like reading copywriting, I am indeed a copywriter. The copywriting of this article is very joyful. When the two articles are put together, this copywriting instantly attracted my attention. Therefore, depending on the literary spirit, decisiveness still requires ape dung! It took us a long time to read your entire article. To be honest, I originally wanted to write after reading a few chapters. Because of my habit of reading articles, I was afraid that after reading too many chapters, the review would be too subjective and confusing. But, in the end, I finished watching Shenma without even realizing it! Oh~Leak~ Suddenly I don't know what tone I should use to write this long review, so please forgive me. So, let me first talk about the first impression this article gave us. Because of the copywriting, I think this article must be a very cute article. The male protagonist, well, specifically Shou... I like this image very much, I think it's quite cute and the image is very distinct. When I read the first chapter, I was a little surprised. Although it was mentioned in the text, I didn't expect Shou Shou to be such a powerful killer. This contrast is so cute that it makes my face bleed (this is a compliment). Such a powerful killer is my favorite! But he is actually a cute boy! It's so cute! At the beginning, I was scared to death by the magic horse falling from the stars! I thought it was Gu Dan! I didn't expect a plot involving gods and horses! Is there any! However, apart from the prologue, the subsequent plot is quite brilliant. (Hmm. I was just frightened by the sequence.) Well, then the two teenagers met and they were so cute, decisive and loving. The love between the killer and the boss, especially since the killer is still a child who can't move when he sees antiques (?!) Well, forgive me for calling him a child, he is clearly less than eighteen in describing it! Idle man, you are lying! Then there is the cousin. Although the cousin is so awesome, I knew there was something wrong when I saw it, but I didn't expect that the plot of the younger sister was changed (Eh? Did I spoil it?), Which is quite interesting. Although this kind of plot is bloody, it is quite valuable. Suddenly I was shocked... This is the value of foreshadowing! I must have been trying to guess whether my cousin was the other party's undercover agent! I didn't even guess that she was the other person's sister! Is there any! Next, let's be a little more serious! (Ah! He's obviously been very serious all along, okay!) So, let's talk about the plot first. Because it is a short story, close to a short story, the emotional progress is not too fast compared to a long novel. I just want to sigh... Why is it not a long story or something? Watching the relationship slowly heat up is a physically and mentally pleasurable thing. However, since it's over, I can't bombard you anymore. Except for the awakening of the divine veins, which made me feel a little bit too bloody, I think the other plot arrangements are very reasonable. Including the analysis of the mood of Xingsha (called domineering) who gave the flute before and who got the flute, I think it is quite good. Overall, the plot is pretty good in every aspect! The interspersing between words is just right, and there is no excessive analysis of the character's heart, allowing readers to listen to your story and have their own thoughts. This way of writing is very good! Because it will not make readers feel bored, and the foreshadowing is not deep or shallow, girls who often read the article can easily see what is going on! (This can't be seen because of my occupational disease!) As for the description, Xianren also did a good job. Although it is not a completely ancient style of writing, it can be seen that a lot of thought was put into describing and structuring it. In terms of characters, I like Star Killer more than Yun. Well, in fact, both characters are well portrayed, but for me, Star Killer feels more impactful. The contrast is cute and the personality is out of the ordinary. The whole person looks like he has come to life, but he is more vivid than Yun. Compared to Star Killer, Yun feels more like a cannon fodder character in a typical novel... The character's image is a little thinner. I could have suggested a little more description, but... It's all over, you know. My favorite plot... Well, it's definitely the plot where two cannon fodder girls died. Many people have a tendency to control their male counterparts, and so do I. I also have the plot of being a cannon fodder... Well, even a brother-controller, I will yell when I see my brother! (I digress, bring it back) I think the plot where both women died was a bit bloody, but it was still pretty good. For them, death is a relief. A man who has been deceived by illusions for so many years, treating his relatives as enemies and his opponents as enemies. The other one was forced to stay with his opponent, but he was poisoned by love unknowingly. He couldn't love but fell in love... In fact, if you think about it carefully, these two women were victims of the struggle between the Yun family and the Yan family. I believe that Yun generally takes care of this "sister" as if she were a cousin. However, I don't believe that Yan has no feelings for Chou Nu at all. In fact, Chou Nu's death was not only a relief for himself, but also a punishment for Yan. Overall, I still like cannon fodder in various ways. (Shrug) Ahhhh! Later in my writing, I actually forgot about the male lead, Shenma. I like small receiving, and of course I also like this kind of attack. In fact, this article is obviously from Chongwen. Although there was suspicion and purpose at the beginning... But after seeing each other and getting along with each other... All of this turned into warmth. Well, although I really like sadistic writing, writing like this really makes me feel happy. After reading the abuse text, you will feel a pain in your chest. Even if you finish reading it and stop touching it, you will still feel pain every time you think about it. But this kind of article will not leave the warmest fragment in my mind when I think about it. Generally speaking, this kind of article is quite healing. Finally, I want to say that in your chapter... The words are all squeezed together! It would look much more comfortable if you had an empty paragraph! I'm serious! Well, the copywriting is already very good, there is no need to improve it, but it would be better if you are willing to enlarge the font size! Fonts that are too small... Will affect readers' ability to read your copy! Above! The long review is over! This is the longest I've ever written! Pfft hee hee~

Um, don't you take killing seriously? I think if a person cultivates the skill of killing from a young age, he may hate killing. By the way, how did Ye Xingtong's optimistic character develop?

I feel that Ye Xingtong, who often smiles, is a bit like Ye Kai in "Border Town Prodigal Son"~

Fifteen years later, there was another Tingfeng Tower in the world. Tingfeng Building is not a building, but an organization The best killer organization in the world! When I read these sentences, I thought I was reading a novel by Gu Long...

It feels much better if I delete it = =

Actually... Actually... Actually... I... Want to see Rourou... But! Is there actually...