
A Snowy Night at Clear Snow (Jian Wang 3)
晴雪夜(剑三)
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The first time I read a story, I couldn't help but want to hug the quilt and moan at the end. Even though you already know the ending, after reading it many times, you still feel like you can't breathe out or swallow it. The name of the story is "Qingxueye", and the author is a demon named Xun Yeyu. The first time I heard about the demon Xun Miao was from the song "Jiangshan Snow" by gay friend Amway. In total, I have known Xun Miao for a short time. From mid-September to now, it is probably only more than a month. But I still remember the first time I listened to "Jiangshan Snow", the sentence "You are a blade, I will use it as a shield" made me feel excited all over. Love's mother's voice perfectly interprets the subtlety with a hint of coldness. I read the single after looping it for more than half a month. The whole poem is still good and makes me want to kneel down to her. Later I found out that some of the other words I liked were also written by her, so I knelt down and got a reply. Yeah, yeah, I'm so happy~ At that time, I just thought the song was nice and the lyrics were amazing, but I didn't know it was a Kensan fan song. So I helped my gay friend, who was a good person, and worked hard to help me make up all kinds of sword-related stuff, and by the way, he also helped me with a bunch of fan songs. But halfway through, she suddenly disappeared and left the game behind. So, I silently made up for it on my own. Later, I found Xun Miao's Weibo, and then, I fell into the pit of "Sunny Snow Night" with tears in my face. It seems that the first reason I was moved by Xunmiao was because of her lyrics. Her words have a coherent meaning, which is the most touching and rare thing. Whether it is narrative, expressions, or scene descriptions, they all give people a compact and clear feeling. It's not obscure or deliberate, it's just clear and clear that the literary spirit is the backbone and the thoughts are connected, and everything you want to write is combined in the most appropriate way. There is no disadvantage of piling up rhetoric, and the same image is not written over and over again. There is no trace of leisurely chatter, occasionally witty words and interesting ideas, expressing emotions inadvertently, and every word is beautifully refined. The writing is full of aura, not only that, but also based on its own excellent literary quality. Use the artistic conception in ancient poems according to your own style (the deepest impression is the two sentences in "The Color of the Lake" [A pole spreads the duckweeds, passing by the small lotus bank. The white curtains are full of beads jumping into the boat, and the eyes are full of red water chestnuts trembling] , suddenly made me think of the image of white rain and dancing beads, wind and water and sky created by Su Shi in "Drunken Book at Wanghu Tower on June 27th"). The words and sentences change with the mood and the situation, and they are always new when read. Each article is unforgettable. Then I read many of her prose essays and felt that she was a very lovely and real person. Unlike many movies that suddenly made me feel like I was standing tall at the beginning, Xunmiao gave me a sense of peace and closeness from the beginning. He is sincere, not pretentious at all, relaxed and funny, and his words are extremely witty. It is hard to imagine that Xun Miao has experienced life ups and downs that most people have never experienced. After reading those words, I felt sour and sighing, but actually it was more of a kind of admiration. I feel that Xun Miao is such a strong and tenacious person, just like the characters in her works who are never willing to bow to life. Even though there was so much pain, she shouldered it firmly and calmly, without complaining or indulging in pain. She just smiled alone and embraced the world, giving warmth and peace of mind to those who accompanied and helped her along the way. Such a person should be very great. So from this time on, I fell in love with Xun Miao. But later, I finally watched her "A Clear Snowy Night" and became an angry fan. Xun Miao's writing style should tend to be exquisite and gorgeous, especially the consideration of details and the exquisite use of words are eye-catching. The wording is exquisite, always showing a long ancient charm, and it is quite able to withstand chewing (the two most impressive descriptions are the description in the first chapter of the gradual and orderly succession of the inside and outside of Chang'an City, and the second is the outline of the situation of Zhu Cui's two sons on the chessboard when Qing Yan and Qin Cheng played for the first time). Generally speaking, it is easy for this kind of writing to ignore the plot, or the plot arrangement is not very reasonable, but Xun Miao's writing can achieve both excellent writing and excellent plot. The literary style that is consistent with the lyrics governs the text from beginning to end. At the same time, some cute points to adjust the atmosphere are added to the vicissitudes of the plot, and the writing has an attractive power. What's more, Xun Miao is able to describe and complete the characters from all angles, making everyone in his paintings appear real and complex. Of course, whether it is lyrics or novels, these skills are the skills of a good writer. Such clichés are just to praise Xunmiao in my own words. Next, let's talk about the story "Sunny Snow Night". "A Clear Snowy Night" is narrated in a beautiful and profound writing style. From the outline to the story of more than 30 chapters, it slowly told me the desolate but soul-stirring past between Chunyangzi named Qingyan and Tiance general named Qincheng. Xun Miao is indeed a good storyteller. In the layer-by-layer narrative, various characters appear before him one by one. In Xun Miao's works, Chang'an in its prosperous age was extremely elegant. Qing Yan, a young Taoist priest from Chunyang Palace, met Qin Cheng, the proud blood general of Tiance, and it started out of an accident. But it also happened to be in response to the words of the old shopkeeper who pointed the wrong way. A misunderstanding at first sight would last forever. Maybe life is like this, you work hard step by step, but you don't know where the slightest deviation will lead to a completely different path forward. Qing Yan is a descendant of the Wu family of the Great Zhou Dynasty. Because he is pure Zixia, he managed to survive the flesh-cutting and bone-cutting process of dynasty change. He was forced to escape from the world of mortals and trapped his love, hatred, and heart under the frost and snow for thousands of years. He has a pure and pure appearance, and also has the strongest and most determined character. From the beginning, he was trapped by the demonic barrier of family feud, and never let go of himself or others until he met Qin Cheng. This Tiance, who was nicknamed the "little evil beast", was like a big sun. Just one sentence "It doesn't matter, if you don't love this mountain and land, I will do it for you", which made Chunyangzi have to look back at the first half of his life. Qin Cheng was a man with a wolfish nature. He was a general who defended his family and country with a silver spear and a horse. He fought back with his life like a Rakshasa drinking blood on the frontier battlefield. As the sharp sword of the country, he was used to living freely and freely in the years that he did not know when to break. His small universe was full of positive energy and full of enthusiasm for the people of the world. The cold little Taoist priest brought a different background to his originally passionate life. The two of them are both masters on the chessboard. After playing and chatting intentionally or unintentionally, until they put their names into each other's palms, they unknowingly walked into each other's lives and became close friends who stood firm in the world and could give their backs to each other. It was true at first, but at some point, I had delusional thoughts in my mind. Before meeting the little Taoist priest, Qin Cheng's life was like a sharp blade, as clear as a military order. After meeting the little Taoist priest, Qin Cheng's life had a care that was difficult to let go of. This was different from the responsibilities and expectations he had always shouldered in the past. It was related to his true heart and was a real reluctance to let go. He was reluctant to follow his fate and die in battle one day. After that, he would no longer be able to look at the little Taoist Master even within an inch of his face. [If the heart is weak, it cannot be protected by iron armor]. However, the reality that seems extremely cruel to Qin Cheng is that the little Taoist priest is an object that must be elusive and out of reach, because of his evil thoughts and delusions. Once he wants to get close to the other person, the countless moral responsibilities on him, as well as the sincere advice of the people around him, will be suppressed, so that he has to tighten his rationality that is almost broken, and silently guard the other person with the most tolerant and pious posture. They are two kinds of people, and they are the one that hurts him the most among the countless things in the world. The scene that left the deepest impression was when Qingyan was injured on the waist with a poisonous dagger. Qin Cheng stood beside the unconscious man and couldn't help but lean down to kiss him. However, when the lips were about to touch, he couldn't help but block it with his hand. He almost piously and greedily kissed the fingertips that had just touched Qingyan's lips. For a personality like Qin Cheng's, who cherishes each other so carefully, it's probably just that deep-rooted love. And such a precious friendship makes the subsequent divisions and disputes even more tragic. The promise made by the two of them that day finally came true. I always remember seeing Qing Yan smiling in the sun and saying, "If one day, when the general fights to the death to protect this mountain and river, Pindao will also devote himself to his cultivation, and within eight feet, he will turn Gang Qi into the mountain and river for the general to protect you." Chunyangzi has always made promises worth a thousand pieces of gold, and on that day, even if a thousand swords penetrated her body, Pindao would definitely live up to her promise. At that moment, I had already read the outline and lay in bed with tears streaming down my face. At that moment when they were calm and tacit to each other, how could they have expected so many things that would happen in the future. After that, the prosperity was exhausted and war was about to break out. With the helplessness of the irreversible world situation, Qin Cheng finally chose to risk the disapproval of the world, but Qing Yan was eventually involved in the whirlpool of the troubled times, and could no longer be the ruthless, heartless and unscrupulous Taoist priest Chunyang. [A man is upright, and there is no need to talk about the importance of country and country. Hiding away from the world, it is difficult to predict where the path to immortality will be]. For Qingyan, he spent the first half of his life in the demonic barrier of not being able to see his own mind. However, the little evil beast that day was shining in the sun, holding his fists at shoulder level and saying, "It is my duty to protect this mountain and river, and this mountain and river also includes the Taoist priest. I like... I like this bright world. If the Taoist priest is willing to come to the station one day, I will take you to see the majestic mountains and rivers." Don't worry about this inner demon, I'll come, I'll accept it, I just ask you, Taoist priest, not to forget it deliberately, one day you will fall in love with the beauty of the mountains and rivers again, I believe... I will wait]. Such a bold and fearless oath was like a stone knocking out a fine line in his heart that had been frozen for thousands of years. After that, the general trend of the world was over, and it was like decay and decay. In the outline, Qin Cheng used his military exploits to exonerate his guilty ministers, and it also made him understand that in addition to his own joys, sorrows, loves, and hates, wherever he is, in his heart, there is also the vastness of the world and the lives of the people. Since then, my heart has been broken. But it seems that a long time ago, perhaps in the moonlight when Qingyan touched Qin Cheng's palm and wrote his name, or in the evening breeze when he fought against his back, or under the bright day when Lang Lang made a promise to him, his heart was stirred like a pool of spring water by Qin Cheng's extremely frank and sincere heart in the turbulent tail end of the prosperous and troubled times. Once there is someone in your originally empty heart, you will never be able to let go. Just as the lyrics say, "I dare not calculate all the hexagrams, fearing the impermanence of heaven." Don't dare to fall deeply in love, for fear of having a big dream. If you let go, how can you bear the misery of this half-life. If you don't let go, how can you fulfill your loyalty?] For me, the sad point of this story is that it was a prosperous and peaceful time, but it just happened to catch up with the undercurrent. Since then, the inner demons that have been trapped in the earth have nowhere to hide. The close relationship that has been silent in the heart cannot last long, and the state of mind that has gone through vicissitudes in the unpredictable world is no longer calm. And both of them have the same persistent and almost stubborn personalities. Although they are all devastated that the prosperous age is coming to an end, they cannot watch the building collapse no matter what. Even if it is the way of heaven, they must go against it and fight with all their strength. In the end, he did not hesitate to use his flesh and blood to pave the way, just to protect the other party's corner of peace in troubled times. The family, the country, the world, within the bloody mountains and rivers, all they want is nothing more than a bright future and good health for the people. More importantly, keep the person you are tied to in your heart, and fight with him through life and death, hand in hand. One of the saddest parts of the story is that at the critical moment of life and death, two people who were originally pure-hearted were instigated by a traitor. Qing Yan could not argue, but Qin Cheng was furious and shot him through the shoulder, seriously injuring Qing Yan to the ground. Although it is a plot that is so cruel that it makes people tremble, it also portrays the characters more vividly from the side. Even though Qin Cheng is so deeply in love, he is destined to be a fierce warrior on the battlefield. The most important thing in his heart is loyalty. He is such a loyal and trustworthy person. His true love for Kiyohiko was cut open and placed in the world where he was galloping, and together with his endless enthusiasm for his family, country and world, he guarded it with his life. Just as Qin Cheng said early in the morning, "Before this sharp blade of mine is broken, I will not only protect the majestic mountains and rivers, but also protect the people who have been let down by my family and country. Until this loneliness and loss are reversed, I will not let go no matter what." To Qing Yan, he was both a sharp blade and an armor, and to him, Qing Yan was by no means a weakness, but his perseverance at this moment was more real and touching the soul. Just like Qin Cheng, who is a man of iron and steel, he inherited "Snow in the Country" from "Sunny Snow Night" and told the story of many Chunyangzi who were also guilty ministers and went to war with Qing Yan. [The rise and fall of any family has nothing to do with us, why should I put myself in danger, senior brother?], [Only for you when you are in danger. There are people like Senior Brother in the world who would risk their lives to save me]. These outsider cultivators, who were abandoned by the country and claimed not to love thousands of miles of mountains and rivers, finally used up all their energy and dragged the enemy until the last moment so that the king could escape. None of them returned. Qing Yan, on the other hand, tried his best to keep his promise to protect Qin City with his own life. He claimed to have abandoned his son, and was shot to death by thousands of arrows on the city gate that did not retreat even half a step. He was only a gate away from Qin City, separated by heaven and man. In the context of the rise and fall of the family and the country, everyone has a conscience. In Xun Miao's concise and concise outline, one can still feel the strong patriotic sentiments. However, it is this kind of feeling that is included in the love between children and children. Through the presentation of two small figures in the big era, people can feel the sharp and vigorous emotional excitement. Whether it is Qing Yan or Qin Cheng, or the several sects affected by the war, or the little junior sister who finally held the sword for Qing Yan, in miniature, it outlines the mighty and unyielding soul of a nation that has been in the blood for thousands of years. If the country is about to fall, there will be thousands of people with lofty ideals who will go forward and succeed, even if they die, they will not regret it. To protect the family and the country, in order to protect everyone in the world, we must gather the strength of tens of millions of people to protect the mountains and rivers thousands of miles away. After that, Qin Cheng didn't know that Qingyan was dead, and felt guilty that he had hurt him so much due to misunderstanding, so he still came to Chunyang Palace to look for him every year. However, on August 15th every year, the mountains are covered with heavy snow, the sleet falls, and the road ahead is bleak. The beauty of this clear snowy night is praised by people all over the world, but it is also the testimony that Kiyohiko has never let him down in every sense. In the heavy snow, Qing Yan's soul still resisted the strong wind and bitter cold for Qin Cheng, but Qin Cheng could no longer be seen. Fourteen years later, Qin Cheng died in battle. Since then, there has been no clear and snowy night in the world. In response to the sentence "The sky and the earth are flat, the stars and the moon are falling, I swear to be with the general". The two people finally lived up to their trust and returned their bodies to the earth, never to be separated again. It seems that at the last moment, they still realized the so-called meaning of love as defined in the world, "Be with the person you like no matter what". It can be said that it is not a bad ending. It's just that too much pain from the past suddenly disappeared in a way that made people sigh. As Xun Miao said, even after seeing the outcome of the story, he will still read it because both Qingyan and Qin Cheng are such good people. So hard, so soft, so passionate. In Danmei literature, the writing style of female authors easily assumes the perspective of women, while ignoring the temperament choices of men, especially when falling in love, it is even more difficult to grasp the scale. Xun Miao's article is undoubtedly successful. Putting aside the completely harmonious characters, the two people seem to have extremely different personalities, one is hot and the other is cold, but in fact they both have the same tenacity and perseverance. The general always controls the world with the attitude of a wolf, but when facing the Taoist priest, he can't help but be very gentle and careful. The Taoist priest, who had always been as unconcerned as a crane and a white deer, couldn't help but reveal his inner rigidity when facing the general. The two people understand and support each other, which is actually an extremely balanced and beautiful state, and there are also many cute moments in the slow-paced relationship. Especially when Qingyan Rourou looked at Qin Cheng, with a faint fragrance floating in the sleeves of his robe, and raised his lips and said "General, be obedient", even I was half-frozen, let alone the little bastard of Su Taoist Priest. Secondly, as a fan work, Xunmiao is also successful. The charm of fandom is that things that everyone is familiar with can take on a new kind of vitality because of their own creation. And this vitality is different from ordinary original works. It is rooted in the original work, and at the same time it must complement and rely on the original work. It must also have its own understanding and integration, and it must have a certain degree of independence and an appeal beyond the original work. From this point of view, based on Jiansan's world view, such a vast and magnificent background is constructed, and two people interpret a life struggle and choice, family and country's love and hatred, loyalty to the road, and the love of children. I feel that it is profound and cannot be forgotten. Tao Chang created two such vivid and lovely characters with a wonderful pen, restoring to us a deeply affectionate tragedy in troubled times, and through this, it triggered the retrospect and nostalgia of that era. I know that love is deep and deep, a gentleman's heart is firm, and when heaven and earth fall, he will wholeheartedly protect you. At this point, I'm almost done writing. Each story has its own ideas that the author wants to explain, and also the human nature that they want to interpret. Even if it is a plot that breaks apart and tortures people to death, because of these ideas and human nature, in the end, it is nothing more than the story that best suits the original intention. The author is just a narrator at this moment. I will wait quietly and watch Xunmiao give us a complete "Sunny Night" according to her own wishes. Finally, Taoist Priest, please accept my obeisance again. PS: Suddenly I remembered that Xun Miao gave a good ending later. That is fourteen years later, although the two people could not stay together during life, after death, their souls went to Mount Huashan together, and one person and one dog lived happily [wait a moment]. Of course, this kind of extra chapter will not appear in the main text. It's just that she was probably tortured by the demon Xun Miao. I can't believe how sweet the back part is [→_→ So what, I still have to call out in the end. Beg! Even! New! QAQ!
Although I haven't finished reading it yet (I took a rough look at it), I can tell that the author's writing is great. I don't know if I will update it now.
Why did Qing Yan see Qin Cheng?
Don't create the me that Jinjiang has. Silently giving points to the Taoist leader to make up for the overlord
Wuwuwuwu, it's like hiding in bed and crying.
I can't move... I suddenly want to cry TAT
I want to say that too gorgeous words and too mysterious stories will only make readers confused, such as me.
Why do I feel that this article has the rhythm of be? (Slap in the face) It's not like that~~
Why do I feel that this article has the rhythm of be? (Slap in the face) It's not like that~~
Jiangshanxue sounds really good~