I'm Feng Yan, an utterly ordinary student at Huamei High School. All I did was stand up for someone that morning, but someone ambushed me and hit me in the back with a chair. That still shouldn't have landed me in the transmigration crowd, dumped in this godforsaken place, should it? I'm completely speechless...
God's perspective is a bit confusing~ I suggest the author change it to third person.
Hungry~~ Please explain, I am the author~~
Sorry, because JJ's response is too slow, I pressed it many times and it ended up like this. I don't know how to delete it~~wuwu
To be honest, what you wrote is not like a danmei novel, but more like a romance novel, and the feeling in the novel is very similar to the female pig's feet in the romance novel. But writing is not easy, so do your best!
Conversations between people can leave a blank line (next paragraph), so that the layout will be more comfortable to read...