Butterflies in Love with Flowers

From reading it, I feel that the author has a good foundation in ancient prose. The ancient part is obviously much better than the modern part. Personally, I feel that there is no need to write so much in the modern part. A purely character introduction style at the beginning will not be attractive enough. A bland beginning is probably a taboo in online writing. I feel that if there is no first chapter and I start directly from the second chapter, it will not affect the readability of the article. You should also pay attention to the paragraphs and punctuation. It is best to divide it into more paragraphs so that it will be easier for readers to read. Having said so much, I don't know if it is helpful to the author. If you think it is useful, you can add me to chat in detail. Come on, author! Take a good look at this article.