I still don't know what it is, whether it's revenge or struggle. It's too profound.
Could the author be writing too far-fetched? The heroine has just lost her parents, can she act like a child in the imperial garden right away? It is said that it was passed on from the future? This shows how "filial" the heroine is towards her so-called biological mother.
So the evil military necessities are finally over, and I'm here to write a long review.
It is undeniable that the author writes about the grievances and struggles of wealthy families very well, and the words of the characters reveal a kind of decadent, stubborn ideas and the kind of appearance that follows others.
Among wealthy families, there are many people who add insult to injury, but few people who help in times of trouble. The heroine who lost her mother who loved her so much and has no protection from her father can only work hard to make a career for herself.
It seems that some of the settings are based on the Red Mansion? In my personal opinion, the characters' speeches have a literary flair, which is very similar to the one in Red Mansions - this is purely a personal opinion.
But on this basis, the heroine has greatly maintained the character she brought from her own world, but on the basis of preserving her own character, she has integrated herself into this era, learned how people in this world deal with things, competed with others in conversation, and came back victorious. This is something I personally admire, because I don't really like the kind of novel where the heroine travels back in time but always maintains her modern style and makes the ancient world go crazy.
But, how can I put it, Momo feels that there is still room for improvement in handling the plot of the article.
Momo briefly read the first few chapters. How can I put it, just from the first few chapters, she felt something was wrong. Let me put it this way, I personally felt that the personality of the heroine was greatly shaped. There were some discrepancies. In the front, her father beat her wet nurse, and her mother asked her to ask her grandma to help. But later, because she bumped into her aunt, she originally wanted to ask her aunt to break up the fight, but she was intimidated by her aunt and no longer dared to ask her grandma for help.
Logically speaking, regarding the heroine's situation, the sentence I used earlier, "If she were ten years old on Earth in 2059, she would undoubtedly still be considered a child." It seems very reasonable.
However, later on, when the heroine's mother was poisoned, she showed herself to be very shrewd and capable, and even plotted against her aunt and aunt. Such a shrewd, capable, and scheming heroine completely overturned her previous image, which seemed to conflict with the previous image, and contradicted that sentence.
Let me ask, how could a child who was even afraid of her aunt's threats become so smart and capable in less than two days that even the elders who had been wallowing in the Gaomen compound for more than ten years could not defeat her?
Well, I don't know what other people think, but to me, I think it looks very out of place.
And this feeling of mine not only appeared when watching the heroine's behavior, but also showed up in the heroine's mother. In the first chapter, it was said that Yu was "mild-tempered and naturally weak and easy to handle." However, she gave birth to a girl, and the girl was not in good health and could die at any time. In order to protect her daughter, she begged her brother to go to the Imperial Palace to ask for the emperor's concern. When her husband no longer liked her, she cried when she returned to her parents' home. The husband's infidelity and the back talk with her husband at the beginning of the chapter made me not think that this person is weak or that someone is still in control. On the contrary, this person is very shrewd. He can seek the attention of the emperor to prevent his daughter from being attacked by others. He can also assign maids that she can control to her husband in order to prevent her mother-in-law from getting women who are not under her control. All these behaviors reflect her scheming and she is definitely not gentle.
The above is Momo's feeling after reading the article. Please forgive me if the review is not good.
——Illegal gathering | Changpingpu
Momo
Girl, has your column been canceled? If not, your behavior has constituted a superfluous request. We will add you to the blacklist, please come to the picture shop to explain the reason.
The prince and Xiao Gao seem to be a pair of good friends, what about a monster and a loyal dog?
Damn, this is not a heroine at all.
Now you don't want to pretend to be a heroine with just some old saying, okay?
Do you think it's easier to climb up the list of female celebrities?
There aren't many female heroes anymore, so why forcefully include these messy categories? It's not just once or twice.
Are you sure this is a female queen? ? /
One sentence and one paragraph... Is this a novel or a poem?
The masters and servants in this family are so noisy... Could it be that they all have bad physiques and can they get better after being tortured? Hehe
Only then did I realize that there are still seven, seven, eighty-one days left to say this.
I still don't know what it is, whether it's revenge or struggle. It's too profound.
Could the author be writing too far-fetched? The heroine has just lost her parents, can she act like a child in the imperial garden right away? It is said that it was passed on from the future? This shows how "filial" the heroine is towards her so-called biological mother.
So the evil military necessities are finally over, and I'm here to write a long review. It is undeniable that the author writes about the grievances and struggles of wealthy families very well, and the words of the characters reveal a kind of decadent, stubborn ideas and the kind of appearance that follows others. Among wealthy families, there are many people who add insult to injury, but few people who help in times of trouble. The heroine who lost her mother who loved her so much and has no protection from her father can only work hard to make a career for herself. It seems that some of the settings are based on the Red Mansion? In my personal opinion, the characters' speeches have a literary flair, which is very similar to the one in Red Mansions - this is purely a personal opinion. But on this basis, the heroine has greatly maintained the character she brought from her own world, but on the basis of preserving her own character, she has integrated herself into this era, learned how people in this world deal with things, competed with others in conversation, and came back victorious. This is something I personally admire, because I don't really like the kind of novel where the heroine travels back in time but always maintains her modern style and makes the ancient world go crazy. But, how can I put it, Momo feels that there is still room for improvement in handling the plot of the article. Momo briefly read the first few chapters. How can I put it, just from the first few chapters, she felt something was wrong. Let me put it this way, I personally felt that the personality of the heroine was greatly shaped. There were some discrepancies. In the front, her father beat her wet nurse, and her mother asked her to ask her grandma to help. But later, because she bumped into her aunt, she originally wanted to ask her aunt to break up the fight, but she was intimidated by her aunt and no longer dared to ask her grandma for help. Logically speaking, regarding the heroine's situation, the sentence I used earlier, "If she were ten years old on Earth in 2059, she would undoubtedly still be considered a child." It seems very reasonable. However, later on, when the heroine's mother was poisoned, she showed herself to be very shrewd and capable, and even plotted against her aunt and aunt. Such a shrewd, capable, and scheming heroine completely overturned her previous image, which seemed to conflict with the previous image, and contradicted that sentence. Let me ask, how could a child who was even afraid of her aunt's threats become so smart and capable in less than two days that even the elders who had been wallowing in the Gaomen compound for more than ten years could not defeat her? Well, I don't know what other people think, but to me, I think it looks very out of place. And this feeling of mine not only appeared when watching the heroine's behavior, but also showed up in the heroine's mother. In the first chapter, it was said that Yu was "mild-tempered and naturally weak and easy to handle." However, she gave birth to a girl, and the girl was not in good health and could die at any time. In order to protect her daughter, she begged her brother to go to the Imperial Palace to ask for the emperor's concern. When her husband no longer liked her, she cried when she returned to her parents' home. The husband's infidelity and the back talk with her husband at the beginning of the chapter made me not think that this person is weak or that someone is still in control. On the contrary, this person is very shrewd. He can seek the attention of the emperor to prevent his daughter from being attacked by others. He can also assign maids that she can control to her husband in order to prevent her mother-in-law from getting women who are not under her control. All these behaviors reflect her scheming and she is definitely not gentle. The above is Momo's feeling after reading the article. Please forgive me if the review is not good. ——Illegal gathering | Changpingpu Momo
Girl, has your column been canceled? If not, your behavior has constituted a superfluous request. We will add you to the blacklist, please come to the picture shop to explain the reason.
The prince and Xiao Gao seem to be a pair of good friends, what about a monster and a loyal dog?
Damn, this is not a heroine at all. Now you don't want to pretend to be a heroine with just some old saying, okay? Do you think it's easier to climb up the list of female celebrities? There aren't many female heroes anymore, so why forcefully include these messy categories? It's not just once or twice.
Are you sure this is a female queen? ? /
One sentence and one paragraph... Is this a novel or a poem?
The masters and servants in this family are so noisy... Could it be that they all have bad physiques and can they get better after being tortured? Hehe
Only then did I realize that there are still seven, seven, eighty-one days left to say this.