HD: The Wind Longing for the Starry Sky

Hey hey, my wife is so awesome(????)?

It's really well written~ I really like my wife's writing

I saw someone tweeting that this HD article was the most sadistic one he had ever seen. At that time, I came in out of curiosity and took a look. As a result, I very much agree with his view. Indeed, it is a kind of despair and sadness that cannot be loved. I feel that I will be deeply attracted by that emotion. It is really too painful. It makes me feel that not only can I not stop my tears, but I can't suppress my voice. It is so uncomfortable. His love touched me. I now feel that the ending of HE is the best outcome. In the days to come, Xiaolong will be happy. This is my wish. In this virtual world, I also hope that they can be together well.

Actually, I think the plot is a flaw

In fact, I was tortured in the middle, but in the end it was sweet and I was so happy. This is the first article that made me cry. The character Xiao Long in it is really well portrayed [but the torture was so miserable www

Although it has been a long time since I wanted to say that the name here has not changed, Kaful

Is there a place where I can see this chapter?

Aha~~ This chapter is definitely starting to get sweet~~ Until the end, Ron and Hermione finally did something smart...

Let me give you a long review that is not really a long review~~In order to make up for the long review, nearly 1/2 of it is nonsense~~ I am the dividing line of the text Now I realize what is going on. Sir Nianshu, your article jumps too much, which makes me think that you have something to say and didn't write it. In fact, you just didn't explain it in depth and in detail. For example, in the chapter when the war resumes, there is a sentence: "Draco... Do you have any last wishes..." "While I still pity you, tell it quickly... No matter what... I can make it happen for you... Later, after reaching hell, I will atone for your sins..." Here Draco's feeling of calling himself Draco was not spoken by Draco himself. I had guessed that Draco was possessed by something, so it changed a lot, but it seems that this issue was not explained in detail in the following text. Then comes the emotional description in the next chapter, "Harry Potter, as long as I am alive, you must be mine. I have decided. No one can separate us. How about... Are you willing?" In the next chapter, "The moment Bok Bogin left the room, Draco hugged him tightly. He hugged Harry's unconscious body, and a smile slowly appeared on his lips. He finally hugged you again. Although it was in this despicable way. "This description feels like Draco has completely returned to normal, so what happened in the meantime? Has Draco always been Draco, and there is no such thing as possession, a sudden change of sanity, or has something happened to make Draco return to normal? Then in the chapter I AM YOUR LOVER, it is said that Draco modified Harry's memory, and later it is said that Harry actually recovered his memory very quickly, and then in the chapter LOVE YOU FROM BEIGNNING, Harry's memory is gone again. So Draco must have done something during this process, but why didn't you write it! What process did you write about, and what did Draco do to make Harry's memory disappear? This way the jump won't be too big and the number of words will increase, right~~ So I think it would be better if you describe the details in more detail and enrich some specific behavioral activities, psychological processes, etc. The whole article would be better. This article has a lot of jumps between chapters. Reading the article is a test of memory, because sometimes I feel like I can't catch up... I am the beginning of the verbose dividing line This article is quite lovely when the Muggle world is sweet and romantic. Then when I saw the trio, I felt that these guys were so damn annoying. You said they wouldn't be too sad even if the truth was exposed after the two of them fell in love, okay? Come out and spit out the real dose! Damn it, are you so meddling in other people's business? Then Harry actually got married... At that time, I felt that Draco was a tragedy~~ Then this article embarked on the tragic path of Draco hurting others and himself, and it got out of hand. When the last 43 chapters came out, I had the idea that Draco would be completely relieved if Draco died... It simply violated my principle of adhering to HE [Melancholy] However, I still welcome Sir HE~~ I am the dividing line between the beginning and the end and the beginning and the end Anyway, congratulations! It's almost finished~~ Anyway, being able to finish the article is either a pitfall or something worthy of great praise [Black History: The longest article I have ever written (not counting book reviews) has a tragic beginning, and was rated by a friend as "not bad, but too tragic"] After searching the recent chapters, I only found chapter 42 that I didn't score, so I left it below chapter 42. I wish you can write better and better articles in the future.

I always like comedy endings, but I don't know why this article is so suitable for the result of Draco dying... Could it be because I think Draco would be better off alive than dead... So in fact, you are not a bitch at all, okay~~ It's so cruel!!! Also, I suddenly have a question, isn't the title of this article written as DH? Why do I think it's HD now