
The Game (Revised Edition)
局(修改版)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 32k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 18y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
11Chapters
8Favorites
2.3kClicks per chapter
18Comments
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... Liu Li Xian. . .
Why can't I post recent comments? I'm depressed. Let me reiterate. I like this article. It's tense and relaxed, funny and helpless. Although it's calculated, the motivation is good, no!! ~My writing is also in this style. My friend once said that even a tragedy can be made funny... I was sweating like crazy at that time... But it turns out that it is indeed the case. When I told others about the ending of "The Wall", they burst out laughing. I was obviously telling the same plot. At that time, I just said with wet eyes when I saw the ending of someone else's story!! ~
Seems pretty good!! ~
When I wrote it, I felt it was almost done. Looking back now, I feel like it was indeed too hasty. Thank you for pointing it out Try harder and get out with a tail
It's a good story, but I feel like it could have been written a little deeper. The ending is a bit too urgent.
Adults, please fill this hole quickly!
Next 2? Is there a next 3? Which next one will be the ending?
I still don't understand. Continue quickly...