A hot-blooded young man in the city, unimaginable conflicts in the martial world, love and hate, and brotherhood. I hope you'll support me, brothers. This is my first novel, and everyone's welcome to read it. The story may or may not be true, so real it could fool you...
It's a bit fantasy indeed, ha! Not bad, come on! Looking forward to the follow-up...
I hope there will be some very realistic stories about growing up and following Shan in the follow-up, hehe, I'm looking forward to it...
The writing is pretty good... Come on...
Yes, you wrote about me, hahaha, keep up the good work, I look forward to your follow-up! Ha ha!
I've been here before, haha
Yeah, yeah, not bad,,,, buddy, I support you. Your writing is quite good. I look forward to your follow-up.
Overall it's pretty good, but remember to add punctuation marks when writing, and be careful not to write typos, otherwise it won't affect the overall effect of the work. Got it? Come on, you can do it, hehe
Hmm hmm hmm hmm hmm (⊙_⊙),,,,,
Not bad, come on! Keep up the good work!
It's a good story between brothers, the storyline is quite mysterious, and the protagonist is quite miserable, haha! Again, can you break it down into sections? That way it will be clearer and clearer, and that's about it. There are fewer typos in this chapter, but there is still progress. Come on, come on, believe in yourself!
It's a bit fantasy indeed, ha! Not bad, come on! Looking forward to the follow-up...
I hope there will be some very realistic stories about growing up and following Shan in the follow-up, hehe, I'm looking forward to it...
The writing is pretty good... Come on...
Yes, you wrote about me, hahaha, keep up the good work, I look forward to your follow-up! Ha ha!
I've been here before, haha
Yeah, yeah, not bad,,,, buddy, I support you. Your writing is quite good. I look forward to your follow-up.
Overall it's pretty good, but remember to add punctuation marks when writing, and be careful not to write typos, otherwise it won't affect the overall effect of the work. Got it? Come on, you can do it, hehe
Hmm hmm hmm hmm hmm (⊙_⊙),,,,,
Not bad, come on! Keep up the good work!
It's a good story between brothers, the storyline is quite mysterious, and the protagonist is quite miserable, haha! Again, can you break it down into sections? That way it will be clearer and clearer, and that's about it. There are fewer typos in this chapter, but there is still progress. Come on, come on, believe in yourself!