This is my first One Piece fanfic. I like it so much. I was made to cry by Luo and Beth. I really love them to death. They were tortured a bit miserably in the middle. The two of them are really made for each other. They love each other so much that they cannot be separated. I am shocked by the fact that Luo's heart supports the two of them. They live and die together!!
The author's writing style is my favorite type. It's a bit literary and a bit stream of consciousness, a bit sadistic and sweet. I really liked it when I read it. The plot is very good. I haven't watched One Piece very much. Many characters are popularized by Du Niang, but it is still very complete. The characters are well portrayed, especially the two protagonists completely attracted me. I like Beth's stubbornness and strength. She can endure so much inhuman pain and survive. I have to say human endurance. The power and willpower are really strong, because I have never read the original work, so the Luo in my eyes is the one written by the author. She is so cool, she loves a girl so much, I really gave my life to her. Every time I see Luo say: You will live longer than me, I feel sad. She is stubborn and stubborn to let Beth live. Even if she is misunderstood and suffers alone, she still perseveres. Luo's love is too heavy. I think no one can bear this kind of love except Beth. All the love given.
In fact, I have never understood what Beth's mother is like, but she is also a pitiful person, dealing with her daughter and her family, and her lover is gone!!
I'm really looking forward to the second part. If it comes out, I'll definitely follow it!! The author must write!!!!
I'm going to see Two Souls. I heard it's very beautiful~~
Woohoo, this chapter almost made me, Xiaoye, burst into tears!!!!!! 1Congratulations on completing QAQ
Okay~ I watched the ending in advance, but I'd better take a chance~. Before I read it, I thought the author Sang would write it two years later. When I saw this, I felt like... Ah? This is the end.
Congratulations on the completion!!!!
Ah Xin's first customization, why would I miss it =3=
Xin, you took away my first... The first pirate novel I followed from serialization to completion was your "Two Souls". Now that it is being rewritten, I am still waiting for it. I am very sad that I did not download the previous TXT...
Because this is my first customization, I will write a long review here! (Should be a long review)
To be honest, I didn't buy VIP for this article~ [beat] I only bought this one to post a comment hahaha...
Because I stayed in school for a long time, my mobile phone was not high enough and I couldn't see anything like high-end VIP at that time.
Because I forgot that there was such a thing as a mobile version...
The most important thing is that I was relatively poor back then hahahaha_(:з∠)_[…]
When I got rich, I still didn't buy a VIP. Don't worry, I didn't despise myself to disrespect the author by reading pirated articles. You must know that I am also an author, not to mention you are one of my favorite authors!
Because I was waiting for it to be completed before buying it, but I didn't expect to see you discussing customization in the group when I came back. I was very happy. I have been thinking about whether you would customize it no matter which article it was. I will keep it as a souvenir_(:з∠)_To commemorate the fact that you are the author of the pirate article that I have finished. =W=
If I confess here, "I love you, I love you, I love you, I have loved you for ten thousand years, I will love you to death", do you think your cat will jump out and scratch my face? …
After thinking about it seriously, I think it should be possible, because I read her confession letter to you, showing affection and so on... Burn her to death! Hello!
But fortunately, there are quite a few women behind me~ [Self-Respect]
I was shocked when I saw the pair of Psyche and Luo in Two Souls!
I didn't expect that You Xin, you are quite good at writing meat... [The point is wrong] You must know that except for the tail part, the two souls are purely cute!
I thought you were smart! No
I'm almost fine. I will tell you that I was listening to King of Love Songs just now, and then I imagined that Brother Luo was singing King of Love Songs to his sister affectionately. I hehehehehehehehehehehehehe!
What a magical scene! Brother Luo is still playing the guitar! …
Decisively cut the song, I didn't want to cut it into Opera 2... Cut it again! It turned into apprehension... Keep cutting! The result is a song about dumping green onion... Then it is very pornographic and violent... I put it on Brother Luo's skin and I hehehehehehehehehehe...
It's already gone! Damn it! Resolutely change it to love even if you die! Anyway, it's enough to take off! =Dan=…
I feel like I crossed the Grand Line and found King Huan Tuo's secret treasure, One Park [Hey]..._(:з∠)_
So the songs I usually listen to are so weird! I'm so tired, I feel like I won't fall in love again. Orz... (BGM: Symphony of Destiny) [Hey!
Xin is studying medicine, so many professional terms made me feel insignificant and useless, so I decided...
I heard that if I kill the panda, I will be a national treasure. If I kill you, my HP and MP experience points will increase. [I am not a dungeon.] Xin, can I kill you? TATHey! Absolutely not!
... I'm sorry, I'm just joking, I've been spoiled by school [...]..._(:з∠)_
The phrase "tremble, old woman, you have to pay a price for seducing our captain." The previous paragraph is actually a swastika! That Zanpakutō is called 'Old Woman' or something... [Hey! Don't look down on old women! Old women are scary! 'Loujiao Attack' and 'Body Odor Attack' will kill everyone in an instant! (Serious face) […]
Finally, congratulations to You Xin for the completion of "One Piece: The Scalpel and the Heart" and the first customization! Waiting for your new pit! ~
Very good... It's finally over...
Xin, you know, my resentment towards your Luffy has risen to a new level... Looking forward to your update→→Left
I just finished the midterm exam and I didn't do well. I'll make a long comment next time. Thank you for everything this book has brought me.
I have been following Dual Souls since the beginning. There was a period of time when I had to watch the update every morning? Now that this is over, I feel a little lonely. 55555(._.)
Well, no matter what, it's all over with flowers☆*:.
So I just finished reading this book now, congratulations on the completion! Although this blessing is a little late... I think it's okay for Brother Luo, no, at least I think it didn't collapse, and now Brother Luo has come out two years later. It can be seen that Brother Luo has grown a lot in these two years, matured a lot, and has faded some of the youthfulness of two years ago, so I really like Brother Luo in Xin's work! >< If it's customized, I'll have to go home on May Day to take the photo
So this chapter begins to prepare to clean up Xiao Tang... He has done too many bad things in the past...
This is my first One Piece fanfic. I like it so much. I was made to cry by Luo and Beth. I really love them to death. They were tortured a bit miserably in the middle. The two of them are really made for each other. They love each other so much that they cannot be separated. I am shocked by the fact that Luo's heart supports the two of them. They live and die together!! The author's writing style is my favorite type. It's a bit literary and a bit stream of consciousness, a bit sadistic and sweet. I really liked it when I read it. The plot is very good. I haven't watched One Piece very much. Many characters are popularized by Du Niang, but it is still very complete. The characters are well portrayed, especially the two protagonists completely attracted me. I like Beth's stubbornness and strength. She can endure so much inhuman pain and survive. I have to say human endurance. The power and willpower are really strong, because I have never read the original work, so the Luo in my eyes is the one written by the author. She is so cool, she loves a girl so much, I really gave my life to her. Every time I see Luo say: You will live longer than me, I feel sad. She is stubborn and stubborn to let Beth live. Even if she is misunderstood and suffers alone, she still perseveres. Luo's love is too heavy. I think no one can bear this kind of love except Beth. All the love given. In fact, I have never understood what Beth's mother is like, but she is also a pitiful person, dealing with her daughter and her family, and her lover is gone!! I'm really looking forward to the second part. If it comes out, I'll definitely follow it!! The author must write!!!! I'm going to see Two Souls. I heard it's very beautiful~~
Woohoo, this chapter almost made me, Xiaoye, burst into tears!!!!!! 1Congratulations on completing QAQ
Okay~ I watched the ending in advance, but I'd better take a chance~. Before I read it, I thought the author Sang would write it two years later. When I saw this, I felt like... Ah? This is the end.
Congratulations on the completion!!!!
Ah Xin's first customization, why would I miss it =3= Xin, you took away my first... The first pirate novel I followed from serialization to completion was your "Two Souls". Now that it is being rewritten, I am still waiting for it. I am very sad that I did not download the previous TXT... Because this is my first customization, I will write a long review here! (Should be a long review) To be honest, I didn't buy VIP for this article~ [beat] I only bought this one to post a comment hahaha... Because I stayed in school for a long time, my mobile phone was not high enough and I couldn't see anything like high-end VIP at that time. Because I forgot that there was such a thing as a mobile version... The most important thing is that I was relatively poor back then hahahaha_(:з∠)_[…] When I got rich, I still didn't buy a VIP. Don't worry, I didn't despise myself to disrespect the author by reading pirated articles. You must know that I am also an author, not to mention you are one of my favorite authors! Because I was waiting for it to be completed before buying it, but I didn't expect to see you discussing customization in the group when I came back. I was very happy. I have been thinking about whether you would customize it no matter which article it was. I will keep it as a souvenir_(:з∠)_To commemorate the fact that you are the author of the pirate article that I have finished. =W= If I confess here, "I love you, I love you, I love you, I have loved you for ten thousand years, I will love you to death", do you think your cat will jump out and scratch my face? … After thinking about it seriously, I think it should be possible, because I read her confession letter to you, showing affection and so on... Burn her to death! Hello! But fortunately, there are quite a few women behind me~ [Self-Respect] I was shocked when I saw the pair of Psyche and Luo in Two Souls! I didn't expect that You Xin, you are quite good at writing meat... [The point is wrong] You must know that except for the tail part, the two souls are purely cute! I thought you were smart! No I'm almost fine. I will tell you that I was listening to King of Love Songs just now, and then I imagined that Brother Luo was singing King of Love Songs to his sister affectionately. I hehehehehehehehehehehehehe! What a magical scene! Brother Luo is still playing the guitar! … Decisively cut the song, I didn't want to cut it into Opera 2... Cut it again! It turned into apprehension... Keep cutting! The result is a song about dumping green onion... Then it is very pornographic and violent... I put it on Brother Luo's skin and I hehehehehehehehehehe... It's already gone! Damn it! Resolutely change it to love even if you die! Anyway, it's enough to take off! =Dan=… I feel like I crossed the Grand Line and found King Huan Tuo's secret treasure, One Park [Hey]..._(:з∠)_ So the songs I usually listen to are so weird! I'm so tired, I feel like I won't fall in love again. Orz... (BGM: Symphony of Destiny) [Hey! Xin is studying medicine, so many professional terms made me feel insignificant and useless, so I decided... I heard that if I kill the panda, I will be a national treasure. If I kill you, my HP and MP experience points will increase. [I am not a dungeon.] Xin, can I kill you? TATHey! Absolutely not! ... I'm sorry, I'm just joking, I've been spoiled by school [...]..._(:з∠)_ The phrase "tremble, old woman, you have to pay a price for seducing our captain." The previous paragraph is actually a swastika! That Zanpakutō is called 'Old Woman' or something... [Hey! Don't look down on old women! Old women are scary! 'Loujiao Attack' and 'Body Odor Attack' will kill everyone in an instant! (Serious face) […] Finally, congratulations to You Xin for the completion of "One Piece: The Scalpel and the Heart" and the first customization! Waiting for your new pit! ~
Very good... It's finally over... Xin, you know, my resentment towards your Luffy has risen to a new level... Looking forward to your update→→Left
I just finished the midterm exam and I didn't do well. I'll make a long comment next time. Thank you for everything this book has brought me.
I have been following Dual Souls since the beginning. There was a period of time when I had to watch the update every morning? Now that this is over, I feel a little lonely. 55555(._.) Well, no matter what, it's all over with flowers☆*:.
So I just finished reading this book now, congratulations on the completion! Although this blessing is a little late... I think it's okay for Brother Luo, no, at least I think it didn't collapse, and now Brother Luo has come out two years later. It can be seen that Brother Luo has grown a lot in these two years, matured a lot, and has faded some of the youthfulness of two years ago, so I really like Brother Luo in Xin's work! >< If it's customized, I'll have to go home on May Day to take the photo
So this chapter begins to prepare to clean up Xiao Tang... He has done too many bad things in the past...