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Why did King Xian know about modern times?

It's very strange. How could King Xian know that the heroine wanted to return to modern times? He is not Azheng

^-^The author seems to have a happy ending, so there is no need to cry. By the way, whose child is it? I really want to know, why don't I remember that such a "capable" person exists? I have an impression of three men, the emperor, the king, and the elder brother. It can't be my brother's, right? After resolving the deadlock with the emperor, the heroine's reversal has just begun...

^_^ I originally thought it would be a pitfall, but I didn't expect this article to be updated again. I'm really happy ~ Thanks to the author for his hard work in filling in the pitfalls. [Talk about my views on the characters in this article] Heroine: I have to say how disappointing it is~ (I recommended it on Du Niang in the beginning, but recently I felt that the heroine seemed inconsistent with the original setting, or I overestimated the heroine.) Emperor: So sinister that I can't tell the truth or the lies. Just look at this chapter, I don't think an emperor can bear the entanglement between his concubine and his younger brother, so it can't be that he loves Shenma, but something else. (But if you say you have no feelings for the heroine, that's not necessarily true. The heroine is very valuable, but I think it's useless since the Zhao family was wiped out. There is no need to put in so much effort to establish her authority, prevent the demon concubine from being infamous, and rescue her from time to time. It is easiest to just put the heroine under house arrest.) Therefore, the emperor's ability to endure is extremely high, and this kind of person is the most vengeful. This is not a good sign for the heroine. It is difficult for the emperor to trust the heroine anymore. If it was a transaction between two people before, now the heroine seems to have lost the basic trust before the transaction (to be honest, I don't hate the emperor. I even think it is not easy for him in these four chapters, so I think it is sad for him to meet the heroine) The 26-year-old movie queen has been working in the film industry for about eight years. She has also made many costume films and has rich life experience. So, heroine, you don't have experience in ancient harems, but you have some common sense~ (In the end, although the heroine was a chess piece in the early stage, she was also a battle of wits and courage and was not someone who could be manipulated at will. But what she did in the second volume recently made me feel that her IQ was getting lower) The heroine, a royal sister type and a modern strong woman type, is used to being in control of everything and will not let unexpected events happen around her. In other words, you will never be passive. You know the purpose and intention of the boss and guess the next move, instead of being like the heroine who is confused and only now remembers to ask what treasures are in the house. The queen mother and emperor can give it to the heroine, but the heroine is like a puppet and will always have to suffer. [Although the heroine's heart is not in ancient times and she is not concerned about the changes in the harem, it is really rare for someone to be negligent about her own life! ! [How come someone who was originally a "queen" became a "silly elder sister" in ancient times? She just looks at smart people but doesn't do smart things. O__O"…] (The reasons are as follows: 3 points) 1 ; Once the Queen Mother feels that the heroine is in the way or disobedient, no matter how much the heroine pretends to be a grandson, the Queen Mother will not be lenient. ) In fact, the heroine is the buffer between the Queen Mother and the Emperor, and the heroine will not be touched except in case of emergency. As a result, the heroine was forced to adopt the princess again. Although the queen mother was reassured, it also gave people the feeling that she was easy to bully. Looking at Concubine Jing as an example, she felt that even if she bullied the heroine, she would not dare to say it out because of the relationship with the queen mother. 2. Help the concubine bring soup and medicine Except for the heroine Su, there is nothing to cause trouble in this matter. I really don't think how to explain this kind of incident that will not appear in the palace novel╮(╯_╰)╭ There is also a heroine who drank it without even checking it. It is really not a matter of carelessness and everything will be fine. Who would want the emperor to drug him, but that doesn't stop someone from taking the medicine from his concubine, but the heroine was so stupid that she drank it all (didn't it mean that the emperor's food was inspected by someone? Why did the heroine bring it in)? ·[And the worst thing is the follow-up] It was the Queen Mother who drugged the heroine after she ate it, so the heroine learned a lesson: pay attention to other people's food and don't give it away casually. That's it? ! ! · The heroine has never thought about another problem. When the heroine's soup is being heated, it stands to reason that a servant whom the heroine can trust will stay in the imperial dining room the entire time. Why was the Queen Mother allowed to take advantage of this? Does that mean that the heroine's food is not guaranteed and anyone can kill the heroine? But the heroine obviously doesn't even have this kind of common sense, and she just muddles along carelessly. This incident clearly shows that either there is a traitor around the heroine, or the heroine is unable to protect her most basic safety. 3. From the beginning to the end of the series of being tortured by the imperial concubine, the heroine felt that she couldn't handle it. I have heard of robbing the emperor to have a chat in the middle of the night, but have you ever heard of robbing a concubine to have a chat in the middle of the night? ·The heroine did something unnatural again. Even though he knew there was something fishy, he still left the drunk emperor alone and went to meet his concubine⊙⊙! ! It's okay for you to go and bring two maids with you. Don't you know how to leave someone to look after the emperor? Or tell the emperor's servant where you are going, and then say that you will come back as soon as you go? So the heroine deserves to be tortured for a night. Are there only two palace people in Youlan Palace? Mistress, won't you tell the other palace people that if you don't come back for such a long time, the people below don't know who to look for? Do you think you are just a girl named Ziweihua, and you just throw it away? Is there anyone who can be found and it's all over? (According to common sense, how much stimulation does a noble concubine have to undergo to do such a brain-breaking thing? How tall must the servants in Orchid Palace be to let the hero Xian Wang rescue the beauty? This kind of thing only happens in Qiong Yao dramas) ·[What I can't understand the most is the heroine's reaction afterwards,] Just like last time, I was so abused that I didn't even know how to fight back. I just said a word that even the emperor would know and that was it, so I happily went to find the key. It seemed that the one being bullied was not the heroine! ·Regardless of whether someone will stand up for the heroine, the heroine must take herself seriously first. As the heroine, as the Queen Mother, you should let the Queen Mother solve it for you. If you don't give the heroine any face, the heroine can break up with the imperial concubine and let the Queen Mother take care of it. Don't think that the heroine is easy to handle. It's not like the heroine has no power or status, so what are you afraid of? No matter how bad things get, King Xian will still support you. Life is really frustrating. You are being lenient by not asking the Queen Mother to die as soon as possible. ·Also, doesn't the emperor want to deal with the Li family and doesn't want to fall out with the Queen Mother? Isn't the imperial concubine an excuse? For such a jealous and unscrupulous person, it's not good to downgrade the whole family. Let's start a family branch~ The foundation of the Zhao family is not deep. In the end, it is not uprooted overnight. Just as the Zhao family was eradicated, the Li family can be eradicated. [The above is my personal opinion. You can refute the heroine because she has N reasons, or it is human nature to live like a dream. But I insist that human nature is only a temporary excuse. Once is enough, twice is the limit (the heroine twice), and three times is better to say that the heroine failed. The "Queen" and "Queen" are not worthy of their names, which is more reliable] · In the final analysis, the heroine actually doesn't care about the rights and wrongs of the harem. She has no awareness that she exists in another world. Therefore, the heroine lives a perfunctory, decadent and careless life. You can ignore being bullied or framed (most people can't do this). · The heroine also has this reason. She gives hope to people who are stuck in the quagmire and in trouble, but she never wants to rescue them, but looks at the development of the situation coldly. That is to say, the place where the Holy Mother is supposed to be is not the Holy Mother. Princess: Although the heroine is very maternal, she also sews schoolbags for the princess (I want to say this, can the princess use schoolbags? She has a golden branch, one-on-one teaching, and a servant follows. Does she have to think about what books to bring, what pens and ink to bring, or carry a schoolbag to school? ⊙⊙Bhan), with this intention, it is better to think about how to pay attention to the psychological growth of the princess, so as not to be used as a weapon, or something practical. Emperor: The author always describes how hard the emperor is, how tired he is, how many internal and external worries he has, and how he is a poor person who has no love for his parents. But the heroine can see and feel it, but she ignores it. She can give the emperor a normal relationship and a warm embrace. The main reason is that she has no feelings for the emperor. But I also think that the heroine is a very hard-hearted person. Why does she keep falling for the harem women? How can she be "responsible" for Ah Zheng, who has an unknown origin? [The heroine lives a very perfunctory life, which makes the reader feel very perfunctory] SO, writing should have a sense of reality, giving readers a sense of belonging that they know is fake but still feel like they are there. Author, are you right? Therefore, when shaping the character of the protagonist, no matter whether it is bad or good, at least he must live a real and serious life. On the contrary, the heroine is living as if she is dreaming. Don't you think the protagonist is fooling both herself and the readers? More than 50 chapters have passed, and the heroine should reflect on it and recognize the reality. Even if the heroine can go back, at least you are living in another world now, so you should live well and at least have a basic sense of safety protection. [The follow-up development that I least want to see] (The heroine is crazy about collecting "keys to go home" and completely forgets about the conditions for returning home given by the system. Or she is reluctant to let her first love die. For the sake of their love and the way home, they made sacrifices with the emperor while making an oath of alliance with Azheng. As a result, the emperor was heartbroken and tortured, so he finally gathered the keys and prepared to stay and fly together with Azheng. Unexpectedly, it all ended in vain. The heroine was heartbroken by her lover and then fought back. As a result, both the Emperor and King Xian's men were dispatched. Although the task was completed unintentionally, the heroine was no longer human in the eyes of everyone, so she returned to modern times in despair.) Although I don't want to admit it, I feel that the heroine has completely lost her normalcy due to her "first love", King Xian. There is a slight chance of such a bloody plot. I want to say that if it is really like this, as King Xian said, the heroine is really as stupid as a pig~ I really don't want to see the heroine looking for trouble and abuse anymore, Amen Also, wouldn't it be beneficial to upgrade the heroine's system? Apart from farming, the heroine doesn't have any benefits. She doesn't even have equipment.

2. Inexplicably recruiting someone to be the male supporting actor. Yes, the first thing I want to say is Nangong Yutao! ! ! I really feel that the violation is overwhelming! ! ! No matter how you look at it, Nangong and Qi Qi are only cousins, Rabbit T_T Why do you want Jiang Zi? T_T And Nangong seems to be in love without knowing what is going on →_→ You should make it clear why he fell in love with Qi Qi. And Olivia's little brother! Although Olivia came to him when he was at his most desperate and darkest, she was still a little baby at that time, okay? No matter how the little brother sees her, he only cares and cherishes his younger sister. (T_T)/~~How did it become a love between a man and a woman? ? ! ! It's true that Harry is a hundred times better than his younger brother even though he's missing a second male lead, oooooo π_π 3. Also the most important point. Paying too much attention to details and even neglecting the overall structure, the plot arrangement is inappropriate and slightly confusing. Take the article Yuanchun Rebirth as an example: [1] Yuanchun and Yongli and the complicated background past events (the writing is too heavy. The beginning of the chapter focuses on Yuanchun's entanglements with Yongli, Lang, Zhenfei, Yue Fangfei, Xiao Feng and other people. The first part is really too complicated. In my humble opinion, this opening part is better to be concise, light and eye-catching) [2] The emotional journey between Yuanchun and the Emperor Taisun (this should be the highlight. However, part one was too long and Yong Li's role was too heavy, which made me mistakenly believe that Yong Li was the male protagonist. Therefore, after the Emperor Taisun appeared, I refused for a long time!!! Well, getting back to the subject, this section that is supposed to be the highlight is seriously lacking in the big conflicts, conflicts and entanglements that can shock people's hearts! ! ! Even compared to the part where Yuanchun acted coquettishly with Yongli during his illness and had a romantic relationship with him after his rebirth, the plot of the relationship between the emperor's grandson and Yuanchun is a bit dull... Of course, that doesn't mean it's not good to write about such a plain and warm life, but this part should still set off some climax, right? And why did the emperor's grandson and Yuanchun fall in love so deeply just by being in such a simple relationship? Yuan Chun was clearly thinking about Yong Li before, but how come the incident of going to the Emperor's grandson suddenly became calm? If it was the experience in her previous life that made her admire her grandson for a long time, why did she not want to have any contact with her grandson after her rebirth? Even if she wanted to protect the Jia family, her sincere love for her grandson before her rebirth would never allow her to act wisely to protect herself after her rebirth, right? In short, compared to the first part, the content and plot of the two parts are really thin and sloppy. This is just my humble opinion. I hope I won't be surprised╮(╯_╰)╭)

2. Inexplicably recruiting someone to be the male supporting actor. That's right (><) The first thing I want to say is Nangong Yutao! ! ! I really feel that the violation is overwhelming! ! ! No matter how you look at it, Nangong and Qi Qi are only cousins, Rabbit T_T Why do you want Jiang Zi? T_T And Nangong seems to be in love without knowing what is going on →_→ You should make it clear why he fell in love with Qi Qi. And Olivia's little brother (><) Although Olivia came to him when he was at his most desperate and darkest, she was still a little baby at that time, okay? No matter how the little brother sees her, he only cares and cherishes his younger sister. (T_T)/~~How did it become a love between a man and a woman? ? ! ! It's true that Harry is a hundred times better than his younger brother even though he's missing a second male lead, oooooo π_π 3. The most important point (><) is that it pays too much attention to details and even ignores the overall structure. The plot arrangement is inappropriate and slightly confusing. Take the article Yuanchun Rebirth as an example: [1] Yuanchun and Yongli and the complicated background past events (the writing is too heavy. The beginning of the chapter focuses on Yuanchun's entanglements with Yongli, Lang, Zhenfei, Yue Fangfei, Xiao Feng and other people. The first part is really too complicated. In my humble opinion, this opening part is better to be concise, light and eye-catching) [2] The emotional journey between Yuanchun and the Emperor Taisun (this should be the highlight. However, part one was too long and Yong Li's role was too heavy, which made me mistakenly believe that Yong Li was the male protagonist. Therefore, after the Emperor Taisun appeared, I refused for a long time!!! Well, getting back to the subject, this section that is supposed to be the highlight is seriously lacking in the big conflicts, conflicts and entanglements that can shock people's hearts! ! ! Even compared to the part where Yuanchun acted coquettishly with Yongli during his illness and had a romantic relationship with him after his rebirth, the plot of the relationship between the emperor's grandson and Yuanchun is a bit dull... Of course, that doesn't mean it's not good to write about such a plain and warm life, but this part should still set off some climax, right? And why did the emperor's grandson and Yuanchun fall in love so deeply just by being in such a simple relationship? Yuan Chun was clearly thinking about Yong Li before, but how come the incident of going to the Emperor's grandson suddenly became calm? If it was the experience in her previous life that made her admire her grandson for a long time, why did she not want to have any contact with her grandson after her rebirth? Even if she wanted to protect the Jia family, her sincere love for her grandson before her rebirth would never allow her to act wisely to protect herself after her rebirth, right? In short, compared to the first part, the content and plot of the two parts are really thin and sloppy. This is just my humble opinion. I hope I won't be surprised╮(╯_╰)╭)

Then the one who was swallowed before said ╮ (_)╭ (It's so hard to hit me again. I cried and fainted in the toilet (T_T)/~~) 2. Inexplicably recruiting someone to be the male supporting actor. That's right (><) The first thing I want to say is Nangong Yutao! ! ! I really feel that the violation is overwhelming! ! ! No matter how you look at it, Nangong and Qi Qi are only cousins, Rabbit T_T Why do you want Jiang Zi? T_T And Nangong seems to be in love without knowing what is going on →_→ You should make it clear why he fell in love with Qi Qi. And Olivia's little brother (><) Although Olivia came to him when he was at his most desperate and darkest, she was still a little baby at that time, okay? No matter how the little brother sees her, he only cares and cherishes his younger sister. (T_T)/~~How did it become a love between a man and a woman? ? ! ! It's true that Harry is a hundred times better than his younger brother even though he's missing a second male lead, oooooo π_π 3. The most important point (><) is that it pays too much attention to details and even ignores the overall structure. The plot arrangement is inappropriate and slightly confusing. Take the article Yuanchun Rebirth as an example: [1] Yuanchun and Yongli and the complicated background past events (the writing is too heavy. The beginning of the chapter focuses on Yuanchun's entanglements with Yongli, Lang, Zhenfei, Yue Fangfei, Xiao Feng and other people. The first part is really too complicated. In my humble opinion, this opening part is better to be concise, light and eye-catching) [2] The emotional journey between Yuanchun and the Emperor Taisun (this should be the highlight. However, part one was too long and Yong Li's role was too heavy, which made me mistakenly believe that Yong Li was the male protagonist. Therefore, after the Emperor Taisun appeared, I refused for a long time!!! Well, getting back to the subject, this section that is supposed to be the highlight is seriously lacking in the big conflicts, conflicts and entanglements that can shock people's hearts! ! ! Even compared to the part where Yuanchun acted coquettishly with Yongli during his illness and had a romantic relationship with him after his rebirth, the plot of the relationship between the emperor's grandson and Yuanchun is a bit dull... Of course, that doesn't mean it's not good to write about such a plain and warm life, but this part should still set off some climax, right? And why did the emperor's grandson and Yuanchun fall in love so deeply just by being in such a simple relationship? Yuan Chun was clearly thinking about Yong Li before, but how come the incident of going to the Emperor's grandson suddenly became calm? If it was the experience in her previous life that made her admire her grandson for a long time, why did she not want to have any contact with her grandson after her rebirth? Even if she wanted to protect the Jia family, her sincere love for her grandson before her rebirth would never allow her to act wisely to protect herself after her rebirth, right? In short, compared to the first part, the content and plot of the two parts are really thin and sloppy. This is just my humble opinion. I hope I won't be surprised╮(╯_╰)╭)

Continue to the above (^_^) [3] The reunion between Yuanchun's lotus-picking girl and her grandson (this part is well arranged! However, if more words could be spent on the obstacles and ups and downs brought about by Yuanchun's family background and status, these three parts would be more dramatic and leave a longer lasting aftertaste) Hmm, let's take Yuanchun's article as an example, and the analysis will end here (≧ω≦). Actually, I was reminded of Yi Junhua's "Rouge Debt". This article seems unrelated to your work, but it is an example of a beautiful solution to the third problem. (However, this article is suspected of being unfinished╮(╯_╰)╭) It also has a complicated background and past events, but Zha Yi cleverly intersperses it bit by bit in the writing process, which is neither abrupt nor burdensome. If you have free time, you can read it, it may be helpful. I've told you so many questions, I hope you won't be offended. No matter how good the author is, he can't write a perfect work. Having said all that, I just hope that you can write better and better (^_^) Come on, rabbit (^з^)

Then the one who was swallowed before said ╮ (_)╭ (It's so hard to hit me again. I cried and fainted in the toilet (T_T)/~~) 2. Inexplicably recruiting someone to be the male supporting actor. That's right (><) The first thing I want to say is Nangong Yutao! ! ! I really feel that the violation is overwhelming! ! ! No matter how you look at it, Nangong and Qi Qi are only cousins, Rabbit T_T Why do you want Jiang Zi? T_T And Nangong seems to be in love without knowing what is going on →_→ You should make it clear why he fell in love with Qi Qi. And Olivia's little brother (><) Although Olivia came to him when he was at his most desperate and darkest, she was still a little baby at that time, okay? No matter how the little brother sees her, he only cares and cherishes his younger sister. (T_T)/~~How did it become a love between a man and a woman? ? ! ! It's true that Harry is a hundred times better than his younger brother even though he's missing a second male lead, oooooo π_π 3. The most important point (><) is that it pays too much attention to details and even ignores the overall structure. The plot arrangement is inappropriate and slightly confusing. Take the article Yuanchun Rebirth as an example: [1] Yuanchun and Yongli and the complicated background past events (the writing is too heavy. The beginning of the chapter focuses on Yuanchun's entanglements with Yongli, Lang, Zhenfei, Yue Fangfei, Xiao Feng and other people. The first part is really too complicated. In my humble opinion, this opening part is better to be concise, light and eye-catching) [2] The emotional journey between Yuanchun and the Emperor Taisun (this should be the highlight. However, part one was too long and Yong Li's role was too heavy, which made me mistakenly believe that Yong Li was the male protagonist. Therefore, after the Emperor Taisun appeared, I refused for a long time!!! Well, getting back to the subject, this section that is supposed to be the highlight is seriously lacking in the big conflicts, conflicts and entanglements that can shock people's hearts! ! ! Even compared to the part where Yuanchun acted coquettishly with Yongli during his illness and had a romantic relationship with him after his rebirth, the plot of the relationship between the emperor's grandson and Yuanchun is a bit dull... Of course, that doesn't mean it's not good to write about such a plain and warm life, but this part should still set off some climax, right? And why did the emperor's grandson and Yuanchun fall in love so deeply just by being in such a simple relationship? Yuan Chun was clearly thinking about Yong Li before, but how come the incident of going to the Emperor's grandson suddenly became calm? If it was the experience in her previous life that made her admire her grandson for a long time, why did she not want to have any contact with her grandson after her rebirth? Even if she wanted to protect the Jia family, her sincere love for her grandson before her rebirth would never allow her to act wisely to protect herself after her rebirth, right? In short, compared to the first part, the content and plot of the two parts are really thin and sloppy. This is just my humble opinion. I hope I won't be surprised╮(╯_╰)╭)

Kaka, hello rabbit! The first time I met you was when I was recommended "Yingying Smiles and Travel Together" when I was visiting Tianya. After reading it, I thought, well, this author seems to be somewhat interesting (≧▽≦) By the way, I would like to add that I don't really like reading ancient poems. The only one I like is Yi Junhua's ancient poems. Other than that, it's almost as if they are useless to read. In other words, there are very few ancient sayings that I can stay interested in reading⊙⊙ Until I Met You, Yingying's article is not the best of your completed articles so far, but it successfully aroused my interest in you o(^o^)o Because I have been lacking in literature for a long time╮(╯_╰)╭ Although I only like to express my opinions, few can catch my eye. The beloved Fei Yan spent ten years sharpening his sword, and after waiting for so many years, he finally came out with the stunning second one! I hurriedly finished reading it and I was exhausted again T_T However, after reading too many articles, I don't want to continue to get to know new authors. I just feel that there are so many novel websites and so many writers, but the ones that really suit my taste are only four or five people╮(_)╭So I only want to pay attention to the works of those few writers I like, and the others are useless... This situation was actually broken by you! ! ! <(ToT)> I always become interested in a certain author because of a certain article, and then scan all the works of that author (≧▽≦) Well, after scanning you, you became one of the writers that interests me*^_^* 1. I admire your high productivity⊙ω⊙. In my opinion, writing is a matter of incompatible quality and quantity. Anyway, Fei Yan, Zha Yi, and Pizza Lady, whom I like, are not very productive. But it's awesome that you can open several articles and update Y(^_^)Y at the same time. 2. Your character makes me cute ⊙ω⊙. It just so happens that I have always loved the uncle-loli version the most. And your Yingying Dongfang, God of War Qiqi, Snape Olivia... Are simply tailor-made for me (╯3╰) Well, even Emperor Taisun and Yuan Chun have a little bit of this flavor (≧▽≦) Wow Kaka \^O^/ Keep writing this kind of rabbit! 3. Your emotions are delicate and captivating. This is concretely reflected in the later part of the article "God of War", the description of Shangguan Qiansha's depression, sadness, gains and losses, and sincerity and fear (o^?^O) This must be praised! ! ! But no one is perfect, so please allow me to talk about some of your flaws. (Maybe it has personal preference, please forgive me if you don't agree) 1. Bad ending (Although this is not good, it is better than eunuch-_-||) Except for Yingying, Olivia, and Yuanchun, almost all of them are suspected of being unfinished -_-|| Especially when it comes to the harem (><) What kind of ghosts are there behind you? It's really a bit baffling to forgive me for my low IQ T_T 2. Inexplicably recruiting someone to be the male supporting actor. That's right (><) The first thing I want to say is Nangong Yutao! ! ! I really feel that the violation is overwhelming! ! ! No matter how you look at it, Nangong and Qi Qi are only cousins, Rabbit T_T Why do you want Jiang Zi? T_T And Nangong still seems to be in love without knowing why he fell in love with Qi Qi. Please tell me why he fell in love with Qi Qi. Also, there is Olivia's brother, why did he fall in love with her out of nowhere? ! It's true that Olivia came to him at the worst time, but please note that she was just a little baby at that time, dear⊙⊙So after all, the little brother should only have a brother-sister relationship with Olivia, okay-_-|| 3. Pay attention to details and ignore the overall situation, resulting in improper structure. Well, let's take Yuanchun's rebirth as an example: Yuan Chun and Yong Li and the background plot entanglements of the story (too heavy. The opening should be concise and catchy. Complex background entanglements can be narrated in some future memories, but it is really inappropriate to finish them all at the beginning. ╮ (╯_╰) ╭ I spent too much time describing Yuan Chun at the beginning. The relationship between Chun and Yong Li made me feel that after watching the first half of the movie, I thought the male protagonist was Yong Li. After the emperor's grandson appeared later, I refused for a while -_-||) --- Yuanchun and the emperor's grandson's emotional development (too simple, no big entanglements, obstacles or conflicts, so this should have been The highlight part seems a little thin and hasty. Even Yong Li and Yuan Chun have scenes with Zhu Hua. How come the Emperor Taisun and Yuan Chun get together just like they are indifferent? This relationship develops too fast.) --- Yuan Chun leaves the Emperor Taisun and becomes his wife. Reunion for the lotus-picking girl (this ending is wonderful (^з^), but there were too few setbacks and entanglements between Yuan Chun and the emperor's grandson due to their status and identity at that time, so that the aftertaste of such a dramatic plot of the lotus-picking girl's reunion could not be deepened (~0~)) Well, regarding this point, I think Yi Junhua's "Rouge Debt" is a good example. There are also many complicated past events that need to be explained, but its beginning is simple and eye-catching, and the complex background is also slowly interspersed in the text. The only flaw is that it is suspected of being unfinished ╮ (╯_╰) ╭ You can read it when you have time. Well *^_^*, that's all, I love you (^з^)\^O^/ I hope you can continue to work hard and I believe you will get better and better (^з^)