She doesn't fight back, but that doesn't mean she's easy to bully.
She doesn't strike first, but that doesn't mean she's weak or helpless.
She's ruthless, but she gives her whole heart to those she loves.
Want to be with her?
Sure. Her demands aren't high:
One heart, one love, for a lifetime.
In life, we live together;
in death, we lie together.
Then you'll be my man.
Even dressed as a man, she can't hide her charm.
Her intelligence and talent make people fall for her,
and no one can replace the warmth she brings.
One heart, one love, for a lifetime?
Isn't that exactly what I've always wanted?
Together through life and death, with no room for betrayal.
To be honest, I found DaDa on the last page of the list of signed authors...
I like it when a woman disguises herself as a man~ This guy is definitely a great talent. Come on, Ahri, let's work together to make this woman a genius
The introduction looks great! Come on, please update quickly
Uh... Catch the bugs first... In the second chapter, "Yesterday my father and grandpa went to the ancestral hall and found that your father's portrait was not gray." Should be changed to "Yesterday my father and grandpa went to the ancestral hall and found that your father's portrait was not gray." Also Forgot which chapter? You mistakenly called Tianyun Tianyun Your writing is generally pretty good But there is a big problem—— segmentation The first few chapters are all mixed together into one chapter and one paragraph at a time, which is very problematic. Some people don't want to read it after reading such a long paragraph. May lose your readers The next few chapters are well divided and very refreshing to read. There are also problems with the psychological description of the characters Tang Tianyun You look at him from the perspective of a bystander So It is best not to use words such as "I" and "you" in his psychological description. Otherwise it will look awkward Let me say something weakly here I really feel that when Tianyun accepted his favor, The conversation between the two was a bit idiotic [shoot... But keep up the good work Just keep going Treat writing as a hobby Fall in love with literature treat it as a burden After all in a sense Wenwen can be considered your "son" Come on!