,?YuanThe one in front of the front is called Sister.
I read it again and would like to make a suggestion. Can I put the eight years ago at the beginning to after ten years ago, so that I can feel more clearly. Well, it was a bit flat in the end. It could use some suspense, such as why the male protagonist is waiting outside Nanshan and what happens to the male protagonist after he is captured. Well, the above is just my personal opinion (~O~)zZ
Ridge shit
He said that after reading Haihai and this, the author is indeed suitable for writing ancient Chinese or Republican prose.
Why did Mr. Mao just now realize that he actually wrote ancient poems!!! I'm so cool, I'm going to try short stories in classical Chinese. [PS: I'll tell you now that I know that there are more and more short stories in ancient Chinese. = = I always thought that short stories only have modern Chinese characters.] Although the words are a little sad, it's HE after all! By the way, you are finally no longer a stepmother!!! Throw flowers!!!
Spread flowers~~ Hehe, I saw Nai's cover again =. =By the way, why do I keep seeing this? Ahem, this seal is so sincere and beautiful.
And it's a very matching text ~ Sahua Sahua >3///<
,?YuanThe one in front of the front is called Sister.
I read it again and would like to make a suggestion. Can I put the eight years ago at the beginning to after ten years ago, so that I can feel more clearly. Well, it was a bit flat in the end. It could use some suspense, such as why the male protagonist is waiting outside Nanshan and what happens to the male protagonist after he is captured. Well, the above is just my personal opinion (~O~)zZ
Ridge shit
He said that after reading Haihai and this, the author is indeed suitable for writing ancient Chinese or Republican prose.
Why did Mr. Mao just now realize that he actually wrote ancient poems!!! I'm so cool, I'm going to try short stories in classical Chinese. [PS: I'll tell you now that I know that there are more and more short stories in ancient Chinese. = = I always thought that short stories only have modern Chinese characters.] Although the words are a little sad, it's HE after all! By the way, you are finally no longer a stepmother!!! Throw flowers!!!
Spread flowers~~ Hehe, I saw Nai's cover again =. =By the way, why do I keep seeing this? Ahem, this seal is so sincere and beautiful. And it's a very matching text ~ Sahua Sahua >3///<