Miracle

Because it was a short story, I didn't pay much attention to the copywriting and just clicked on the first chapter. From the beginning, the protagonist begins to tell the past in the image of an ugly maid, bringing out the heroine's former identity as a tribal princess. When the miracle happened in the first chapter, I thought the heroine was a prince, but as I continued reading, she was not. Continuing to read, Murong was dedicated to God as a prince, and inexplicable miracles appeared again. From then on, the question came: 1. This time the heroine also climbed up the White Jade Stairs [←To be honest, this part is so baffling, I didn't understand it] 2. Later, the heroine was looking for food in the snow on the white jade stairs [←I didn't understand this paragraph either. Is there food on the stairs? What logic] 3. At the beginning of the third chapter, "If you die, all my efforts will be in vain." [←Who said this? It seems that there is no explanation at the end] 4. The heroine becomes ugly just by cleaning the toilet←What's going on? Why do I get spots on my face when I brush the toilet? You still haven't explained it] 5. The heroine is suddenly taken to a strange palace [←Is Murong at the bottom of the temple? How could Murong find out that the heroine was there? No explanation] 6. The heroine was pointed by the red light and suddenly turned into a prince again [← prince = personal maid? Isn't it so beautiful? What does God think? 7. Why did the erythema turn into abscess in just one chapter? What's wrong with you, mistress? What's wrong? 8. Various cryptic writing methods in Chapter 4 [←My IQ gentleman, you died miserably] 9. Narrate all kinds of chaos, jumping between the present and past events [←I can't understand it. Seriously, author, have you written it well? 10. Suddenly disappeared←What's going on if I go??? There are only 4 chapters in total. There are a lot of unclear explanations in the first 3 chapters, but Chapter 4 ends with a click in a way that only the author himself seems to understand. Is this a bad ending? This article is written from a long-form perspective from the beginning to the end of Chapter 3, but Chapter 4 ends in a "what is this" form, which feels very bad. Obviously the author put a lot of things in Chapter 4 and left them unclearly. There are no explanations for various foreshadowings and doubts in the previous chapters. If you want to write a long novel, then write a long novel. Why do you start a long novel, write three chapters, and end it hastily in the form of a short story? Let's talk about the characters in the article. From the beginning to the end of your article, what does the heroine do? How do you feel about the one-sided love and killing of Murong? Is she feeling sorry for herself? What is going on between the gods and Murong? The gods love Murong, does Murong do all kinds of things? Although the diction tried hard to create a gorgeous feeling, it failed. In addition, the setting was unattractive, the plot was unlovable, and the ending was unfinished. This article reminds me of the serial novels like "Southern Wind" I read in junior high school, and I had the feeling of being confused and speechless about the last chapter but not the next one. That's basically it, above. ——By [12 Years Unmarked | Chang Ping Pu] Tianlai

The words support it, but it seems to be fantasy! It needs to be digested, hehe, come on!

I'm here to urge you to write about online games. I have been waiting for that article for a long time. Will it be a scam?