Full Synopsis: Su Shi, that is the name I have in this life. I cannot explain how I was reborn in this body, but I am very grateful to have been given another chance at life in it.
Why? The reason is simple: I have family who love me and a lover who loves me by my side.
This is Nanda's writing exercise, her first novel. It contains all kinds of cringe-worthy elements, Mary Sues, typos, bugs, and other flaws. Please think carefully before clicking to read.
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I quite like the author's article. The first perspective limits the portrayal of other characters, but it does not affect my understanding of them.
Su Shi reminds me of a saying, ruthless people are the most affectionate. Su Shi was a proud person. He was born in an orphanage and never gave up on himself. He studied hard, both in high school and in college. He does not have good interpersonal relationships and can be indifferent to other things, but he has protected Fang Lin for twenty years. He and Fang Lin depend on each other for life and support each other. In fact, Fang Lin is another him. When accepting Fang Lin's mother's instructions, he also accepted his other self. Fei Yu and Fang Lin are each other. Su Shi cannot escape Fang Lin, and Fang Lin is his past and Fei Yu. Therefore, after Fang Lin intervened in his life, he was both Feiyu and Su Shi. This caused him to fall into mental problems. Su Shi wanted to let go of the past and start over, but he couldn't let go of himself. As the author describes, Fang Lin's death left a hole in Su Shi's heart that can never be filled. That was when Fang Feiyu died, leaving behind Su Shi with memories.
In the Tang Dynasty, his upbringing and family environment determined his sinister and domineering nature. Su Shi's repeated rejection made him become interested in Su Shi. Once he fell in love with someone, Su Shi's stubbornness and outstanding ability attracted Tang Chao, and it was natural to fall in love with Su Shi. His love and tolerance touched Su Shi and won Su Shi's heart.
Fang Lin, he is the character that makes me sad the most. Lonely and helpless, he would do anything to be with Feiyu. Feiyu was everything to him. He could do MB for Feiyu, quit drugs for him, or die for him. For Feiyu, Fang Lin's betrayal was fatal. Fang Lin's death is inevitable, and for those who have lost everything, death may not be a relief. Being born as a human being, one experiences all the sufferings in the world.
In fact, after Fang Lin was brought back by Su Shi, I thought there would be a pair of CPs. I didn't expect the author to choose such an ending for him. I hope Fang Lin can find true happiness in his next life!
Both the eldest sister Su and the second sister Su loved Su Shi and gave her a lot of warmth, but I still don't like the female supporting role like the second sister Su. The queen style is not to my liking. Zhou Jue's appearance is too casual and does not promote the relationship between the two and the plot of the story. The several encounters with Zhou Jue can be explained as being paid attention to by Zhou Jue when the first point of view cannot be seen or Zhou Jue's intention. However, the psychiatrist does not need to be Gong's friend. Too many coincidences will not make it real.
In addition, the surname of the cousin Zhou Jue and Zhou Jing can be said to be a coincidence. Why is the cousin of the Tang Dynasty named Feng?
But to be honest, this is the author's first writing practice article, which is already very good. Although it was written a long time ago, I still bought the original copy to support it. I hope you will continue to work hard to write better articles! Come on!
If you can't read the Bawang article, give it a score first!
I've finished reading your first novel.
I loved the last conversation between Sue and Don.
Choosing words and sentences can be trained, and the meaningful "things" in the works need to be accumulated from life. Very good, good luck to the author!
I actually sat on the sofa? ? ! ! What a blessing!
Love each other in a way that you think is really good, but the result may not be what both parties originally expected. There is no wrong love, only wrong love.
! ! ! What a horse? Is it going to end?
It seemed that worrying about Fang Lin had become his habit. . . This is a very bad habit! He didn't owe Fang Lin anything.
She's a bit like a holy mother. She suffered for Fang in her previous life and even died because of him. Shouldn't we save him in this life and never have contact with each other until death?
Where is the poor, cute and hateful Fang Lin? Nanda, you want to be your biological mother. Just torture her a little and don't be too harsh.
Seeing that there are still tens of thousands of words left to come to an end, your sister has stalled at this juncture again, looking up at the sky speechlessly... T T
I quite like the author's article. The first perspective limits the portrayal of other characters, but it does not affect my understanding of them. Su Shi reminds me of a saying, ruthless people are the most affectionate. Su Shi was a proud person. He was born in an orphanage and never gave up on himself. He studied hard, both in high school and in college. He does not have good interpersonal relationships and can be indifferent to other things, but he has protected Fang Lin for twenty years. He and Fang Lin depend on each other for life and support each other. In fact, Fang Lin is another him. When accepting Fang Lin's mother's instructions, he also accepted his other self. Fei Yu and Fang Lin are each other. Su Shi cannot escape Fang Lin, and Fang Lin is his past and Fei Yu. Therefore, after Fang Lin intervened in his life, he was both Feiyu and Su Shi. This caused him to fall into mental problems. Su Shi wanted to let go of the past and start over, but he couldn't let go of himself. As the author describes, Fang Lin's death left a hole in Su Shi's heart that can never be filled. That was when Fang Feiyu died, leaving behind Su Shi with memories. In the Tang Dynasty, his upbringing and family environment determined his sinister and domineering nature. Su Shi's repeated rejection made him become interested in Su Shi. Once he fell in love with someone, Su Shi's stubbornness and outstanding ability attracted Tang Chao, and it was natural to fall in love with Su Shi. His love and tolerance touched Su Shi and won Su Shi's heart. Fang Lin, he is the character that makes me sad the most. Lonely and helpless, he would do anything to be with Feiyu. Feiyu was everything to him. He could do MB for Feiyu, quit drugs for him, or die for him. For Feiyu, Fang Lin's betrayal was fatal. Fang Lin's death is inevitable, and for those who have lost everything, death may not be a relief. Being born as a human being, one experiences all the sufferings in the world. In fact, after Fang Lin was brought back by Su Shi, I thought there would be a pair of CPs. I didn't expect the author to choose such an ending for him. I hope Fang Lin can find true happiness in his next life! Both the eldest sister Su and the second sister Su loved Su Shi and gave her a lot of warmth, but I still don't like the female supporting role like the second sister Su. The queen style is not to my liking. Zhou Jue's appearance is too casual and does not promote the relationship between the two and the plot of the story. The several encounters with Zhou Jue can be explained as being paid attention to by Zhou Jue when the first point of view cannot be seen or Zhou Jue's intention. However, the psychiatrist does not need to be Gong's friend. Too many coincidences will not make it real. In addition, the surname of the cousin Zhou Jue and Zhou Jing can be said to be a coincidence. Why is the cousin of the Tang Dynasty named Feng? But to be honest, this is the author's first writing practice article, which is already very good. Although it was written a long time ago, I still bought the original copy to support it. I hope you will continue to work hard to write better articles! Come on!
If you can't read the Bawang article, give it a score first!
I've finished reading your first novel. I loved the last conversation between Sue and Don. Choosing words and sentences can be trained, and the meaningful "things" in the works need to be accumulated from life. Very good, good luck to the author!
I actually sat on the sofa? ? ! ! What a blessing!
Love each other in a way that you think is really good, but the result may not be what both parties originally expected. There is no wrong love, only wrong love.
! ! ! What a horse? Is it going to end?
It seemed that worrying about Fang Lin had become his habit. . . This is a very bad habit! He didn't owe Fang Lin anything.
She's a bit like a holy mother. She suffered for Fang in her previous life and even died because of him. Shouldn't we save him in this life and never have contact with each other until death?
Where is the poor, cute and hateful Fang Lin? Nanda, you want to be your biological mother. Just torture her a little and don't be too harsh.
Seeing that there are still tens of thousands of words left to come to an end, your sister has stalled at this juncture again, looking up at the sky speechlessly... T T